This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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I think you made a small mistake. Still, I really like the chapter and prey's though are just perfect as he is so sceptic, almost salty, about everything. It's awesome
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Haha, I mess up spelling right at the end there, typical Thank you for pointing that out.
As always, it is great to hear when people are enjoying the story and where it is going. Thanks.
Lost it at that last line. Pure Perfection
This is a funny line, it makes me giggle every time I read it. Kind of like the line wherever it is when Prey contemplates escape and assumes if he tries Luna's tracer bracelets will blow his legs off.
Edits in bold. Dont worry about the effort it takes to do these, it's helping me ration my reading rather than speeding though it too quickly.
Missing period after the P.
Don't think I forgot about wanting to pay you for your work though. It's fine if you are uncomfortable with that, no explanation required, but I would like to point out that I'm not expecting a reward of any kind. I would simply just prefer to compensate you in some way for all the entertainment you have provided free of charge.
Error Report: Prey heard so thing (something) that might have been a grunt from behind him.
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Thank you for pointing that and the other mistakes out. 👍
I know I'm only about fourth of the though, but I'm really hoping you're planning on Prey reforming. I can stand tragedies but I prefer Redemption arcs
Also Taffy and Pinkie would have a friendship to last thee ages
(sorry, this was the best quality one i could find)
Xd, i love him <3
jajaja oh! Prey jaja xd
Awww frick. There goes his slavery claims. Darn employment ruining all his favorite complaints!
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I like this story a lot, thank you.
Haven't commented yet, but I guess now is the time. This story is fabulous so far! The grammar is perfect, the characters are unique, the plot is intricate yet understandable. You have created a main character who clearly has evil rooted inside him and yet somehow we readers are still rooting for him. I honestly don't know whether this story will go down the redemption route or the "Prey escapes and murders everyone" route, but I'll enjoy it either way.
Also this is a million plus word story. I read an unholy number of stories every day, so it is nice to find one that might actually last a week or two. Thank you!
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Thank you. Hopefully it manages to keep you entertained for a while and does not tail off.
I assume you meant
Sorry if this has already been mentioned or if it's supposed to be like that.
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No, that was a mistake. Now fixed!