This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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there are worse fates then death, indeed sometime death is a mercy, choose death everytime then wake that, that sleeps underneath in the depth of the sea in the mind of the little sheep
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Um, thanks Was kind of fun (but also very frustrating) to write and try to get right. Kept most of it vague on purpose.
If you notice story inconsistencies or things that don't make sense, please point them out too.
Nice little rhyming going on there, duckmagee Trixie
Amazing chapter! Absolutely loving the story!
Good ol' fashioned nightmare fuel. Good riddance to Night Watcher.
Oooh! That's a good one!
Mind if I quote it?
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Nope, go ahead.
Also, thank you for the advice you wrote in the first chapter. I kinda' realised some of that during the course of writing this stories other chapters (sorta') and implemented it. A bit. 😅
Anyway, hope that you enjoy the rest of it. 🍭
The mind battle scene is pure gold, love the way you managed to build up tension and make Prey more than just an "unbeatable protagonist"!
Very well written chapter. Your art is great too.
...Bloody heck, it' a tiny Dionysus.
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What, as in, the Greek god of wine, festivals, and/or madness? I guess I can see that, yes. 😇
I'm still trying to finish that dark souls 1 platinum trophy
Oh dear god, this turned into an eldritch fantasy. That was nightmarish. O-O
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🦑 "All hail our lord and saviour, Cthulhu!" 🐙
There is a few times when you have mixed up border guard with boarder guard
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Ah, yes. I did make that mistake quite a lot in the first few chapters I've tried to find and correct it to the proper "border" where I find it, but thanks for pointing it out.
Jebus! That was...I can't even...Jebus!
holy shit
Oh damn.
Ah yes.
Foreshadowing
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To those who have read the story: Why yes, yes indeed.
A*
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Thank you for pointing that out. Now fixed! 😇