This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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Oh jeez. This chapter, there's just so much and I have so many opinions about so much of it. Thats the mark of a good chapter. In short, its a chapter that reminds me why I like Prey so much: horrible villain that he is, he so often surrounded by others that make me wish he could visit his villainy on them.
And ah, the Melian Dialogue. That age-old reminder that the most influential of ancient world Greeks were still colossal assholes.
I do hate that stinger at the end, though I appreciate that it'll probably read better once the story is finished.
Ah, lovely.
Haha, poor habits are rewarded once again! Staying up till 4 A.M. has let me read this chapter immediately!
Oh, hypnosis? Oof, that is cruel.
Loved the unsaid conversation between Prey and Crimson, really shows off their character growth
Ok, my theory that will almost certainly be proved wrong: Luna took it so it could be of use to the ISND.
Ah politics, something nobody likes but we still need.
And this story just keeps getting more and more interesting. A new chapter of this story is like a new plot line being revealed to us. So much is going on and Prey is keeping track of it all
Beautiful as always. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep them coming my guy
I can't wait for more, I want to know who the thief is!
I'd say it's either Luna or the changelings. They did witness its power in Spooksville.
Poor Prey, he's accumulating loose ends over and over.
Do not mettle with this stuff, ponies are stupid, ungrateful, cowards but too soft to put someone into jail for no reason.
As 10443143 said, I'm pretty sure it's Luna, trying to act cool in front of the nobility just to backstab them.
Wasn't she the one who grew jealous because she wanted justice and recognition ?
Enemies are closing in, there's no way the one who hunted a mind leech wouldn't check his own health after getting a reaction from their meeting.
I wish he will be okay in the end.
Excellent chapter as usual.
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If Luna or someone on her behalf took it. That would still be an issue. Mostly due to the fact that they would realize there’s a mind leech in the guard
Haha.
Thanks for the chapter!
Ooh! Foreshadowing!! Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Discord Has been acknowledged and chronologically his escape is about Now-o-clock.
Considering that Prey's primary personality traits are secrecy, paranoia and xenophobia, I imagine him encompassing the opposite traits is going to lead to disaster.
It also just occurred to me that Discords main ability is Disharmony and the fight between the Solar and Night Guard is brewing
Sure hope that some of the things left unsaid is that Prey figured out at least how Luna’s tracking bands can work. Because going your self too a city you’re been told not too go too, when someone can easily check your at least trying to sleep well and testify to it, doesn’t seem like something Prey would hastily risk.
Idle guesses how the thief’s identity that could be bad. It was the lord and he did it for political reasons.Changelings, quite bad regardless of angle. The investigator (not channeling?), zealously going way too far. The Crimson’s bat clans, for Crimson. Lemon Pink entanglement, and that was part of what she needed to tell Prey. Some reason, the solar guard for framing, or solar/Celestia to build a case against Prey?
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There's no active tracking. It is only if Luna decides at that precise moment to set up the spell and take a look. So far, she has not bothered. Why would she? She'd only really have a reason to use the spell if she also had a reason to find Prey if it turned out he wasn't where he's supposed to be.
Or in other words, as long as Prey is quick and doesn't get missed, he should be fine. Should. 😉
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Ha, quite a lot of people are guessing Luna. 😄 Not sure what to say here, just noting that there are quite a few possibilites it could be, and that a few of you have it pegged as Luna. 🌙🌒
Aw damn, I've read it all too fast. Great stuff. Can you believe I've read 700k words in mere days
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Thank you. I'm happy you thought it was worth reading through all 700,000 words. 😊
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It was more than worth it. A story finally long enough to enjoy for several days, one that occupies your mind between job, sleep and other annoying real life crap
So, thank you
This fic messed up my sleep schedule for the last few days. Completely worth it.
Also, I imagine placing Runic Arrays to be something similar to coding. Like every Unicorn has the lines of code to copy and paste whenever they want, but Prey has to write the code every time.
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Well, sorry-not-sorry about your sleep, so hope it was worth it! 😇
And runes, yes, that would be a good description. Unicorns simply use the software pre-installed on a computer. They don't actually need to know how or why a computer works, they just need to "click" and "point". Prey has to write the software (or would it be hardware?) himself. 😴
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Would the better term be firmware?
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Maybe? They're all rather similar in context of what I was referring to here.
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Unicorns get a computer that’s already got the operating system installed
Prey has to write the operating system each and every time