This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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100% chance of runes on the ring!
Aww, he wants to be friends.
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majesty's / untoward
throat noisily
caps lock
They knew
Dunno if anyone has mentioned it but it's spelled "sergeant." Sargent is still easy to read though.
seemed to lose
Prey acting unsure and shy now isn't that a surprise? He might end up with some "friends" yet.
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So, I figured out your master plan, do you want me to add spoilers, or delete it.
(I did get it right, right?)
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Okay, big thank you. Not many people actually point out mistakes when there are any, so thanks a lot! It's very helpful.
The Sargent thing, there are two spellings, so, um, yeah. This is the one FiM fiction accepts as correct, so it's what I use.
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No no, it's fine! It's me who doesn't want to give spoilers. You'll see, I'm just not confirming or denying it one way or another.
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It is a ring... those are practically the stereotypical enchanted item, also gemstones are good for enchantment!
Damn, seems like the ISND might actually get some downtime for once.
Well herbs of dubious use were acquired aswell as some curious eggs. Also living as quasi housemate with crimson can only be good.
And T day, what machinations will happen this time of maybe nothing at all, hmmm.
Anyway, thanks for the new chapter, had a blast reading it two times
Heavens, I am always in heavens whenever there's a new chapter of this.
Characters are evolving, changing but still faithful to themselves, that's all I ever ask.
Thanks for the new chapter
Cum should be come, unless Autumn was interested in making plant/pony hybrids.
Its unlikely but I immediately thought changeling eggs
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Garden-cum-lab is correct
https://grammarist.com/usage/cum/
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Twice? I'm flattered.
For some odd reason, I'm starting to think the little mound of flesh and murder that is Prey is adorable.
Just look at him! He is trying to pony! D'awwww
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Wow, I would never have guessed.
I'll have to remember that one.
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As proofreader, this is MY fault. I do my best, but I’m not perfect
As to “Sargent”.....
The author is British. They are the exception to Mark Twain’s famous dictum
“Foreigners always spell better than they pronounce”
You can blame Noah Webster (founder of Webster’s Dictionary) for the fact that the British spell a number of words differently than we do.
As George Bernard Shaw put it “Two countries separated by a common language”
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Yea Ive noticed the British spelling of armour and other words so I tried to check if Sargent was the British English spelling and the best I could come up with was because it was borrowed from french that it used to be spelled how it sounds, "Sargent" (but not in modern times?)
Anyways most people probably don't even know how to spell it with an extra e, it's a very readable spelling.
Prey is like me not like that I mean prey may be white literally but he is currently the blackest character.father cheated on mother,incarcerated,has a zebra which are just Equestria's black people in his head and uses Zebrican curse words or African curse words if he doesn't get the though he may be white he is black award I don't know who does.
Error Report: Gloom eventually remembered to remind Gloom, (Crimson)
Not finished all the paperwork, not even close, merely finished for the night. (either change 'finished' to 'finishing' or ad 'with' after finished)
Didn't Crimson had a pot plant for his flat already, (have)
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Hello there again. Once again, have now corrected those errors thanks. ⭐
Actually daggers were mostly for deterrent and self defense and could be as long as a hand and a half sword. See historically peasants weren’t allowed to own blades so if they had insanely long “knives” that was ok
Let's see, those eggs are probably from some kind of insect whose larvae parasitically subsist in the organs of whatever creature consumes them. I only say that because in one of Prey's memories, Snake was harvesting some parasitic larvae from the liver of a pony in an earlier chapter.
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🐜🐣 "When something inside, started to stir..."
I just realised a new meme template perfectly captures this i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/002/069/837/191.jpg
!!!!!!!Oh, my!!!! <3!!!!!!
is it a ship? <3 jaja
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Well, 'technically', Prey's not wrong. 🙃
So you can be removed from the list.
When is prey going to realise that trying to kill 2 gods is much harder then it sounds?
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His goal isn't really to kill either Celestia or Luna, its just there to remind him and if he can actually find a way, theres no way he would actually risk everything for a pot shot at them. Prey isn't stupid, he thinks the Alicorns are way more powerful than they really are.
"Prey's a lamb, not a pony, and he's a ram, not a ewe."
not an ewe
and nor did the rooms even have positioning or any view to make up for the lack of amenities.
you don't need the 'and' at the start