This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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i take it he going to craft some more runes or something similar?
Nhmmm... Probably. Not saying for certain though.
It is a bit obvious though, isn't it?
this is really good. this story needs more attention.
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Why thank you very much. Glad that you seemed to enjoy it.
Why does crimson sound REAAL simmilar to Drax from 'Guardians of the galaxy'?
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Does he? It was not anything intentional, Crimson's merely socially retarded... Just like Drax.
While lying is a possible major factor it isn't always the root of the problem, Crimson.
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Ah, but that's just Crimson's opinion. He hates lies for some reason. (Hint: There is a reason)
I see you seem to be reading though this in bulk ATM, and thank you for your comments. Hope you like.
For some reason my mind has given Gloom a Brooklyn accent - the kind you might hear from an American WWII or Mafia movie - and it's hilarious. And now after looking at certain comments, I might start reading Crimson more like Drax. Combine that with the childlike voice of Prey, and this trio of misfits are even more wacky than they already are. I love them!
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I am assuming Drax from Guardians of the Galaxy. And yes, now that you have said that, I have it stuck in my head too.
'Maybe if Prey is baby Groot, and Gloom is Quinn, Hmmm.....'
I had found some typos in this chapter and then I refreshed the page and lost my comment, about an hour ago. Whoops. I think one was about "Boarder Guards" and the other was a missing apostrophe. Well, after that, any more typos will be in bold.
Punctuation goes inside inset quotations as well.
I think the sir is extra, unless Gloom is talking to himself or an unseen third party.
Missing comma
Missing space.
Missing apostrophe.
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Ah, thank you very much for taking the time to point out those mistakes so I could correct them. I know that's annoying and takes up your time to do. 😇 Gosh. It's been ages since last I read through these first chapters, I'm sure there must be other things I have missed too hanging around. My bad.
But thanks again.
missed this on my first read of this story, but now that i think about it, what does his accent sound like? In fact, i don't recall accents being especially highlighted at all, except for a specific character later in the story which i shall not name for the sake of first time readers
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Quite a few people have wondered that now. I guess what ever sounds funniest in your head when you're reading him perhaps? 😆 Probably a cross of English/African, (but well spoken in both), because of the Resistance and Snake's memories if I had to guess.
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In this instance, Taffy is talking to Crimson, not Prey. Crimson says he's from a place that doesn't have any fudge and she says this. So the question is what accent Crimson has.
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Ah, oops. I misunderstood there. Well, I don't have anything concrete, but for thestrals, I've always sort of had them in my head as vaguely Eastern European.
Xd, you are genius; how i loved it
jaja, I never thought to read that; so cute <3
<3 Awwww... </3
NOoooo... i need more... I love their interaction ( Prey, Gloom and Crimson).
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wrong your lmao, twice even.
Misspelled Division
No apostrophe on “accountant’s”
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Thank you for the corrections there.