This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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Great chapter, I like how Prey interacts with the other characters. It’s an interesting dynamic. Looking forward to more of your work.
Though I’m torn on what I hope will happen in the future of this story. On one hand I kinda want to see Prey stay on the ‘good’ side. His motivations and opinions are his own, and I hope they don’t change to much but realistically as a Christian I don’t want anyone to be a bad person forever. On the other hand I kinda want to see how bada— he is at his full potential. The flashbacks paint quite a story but for the most part he has been running with next to no resources. Though I can imagine that if he was in a situation where he could utilize all his talents it likely wouldn’t be for the greater good. At least not right now.
Also I’m hoping we learned what happened to Snake. It’s implied he’s dead or at least Prey believes he’s dead. But I have a suspicion that, that might not be the case and he was the one behind the sheep doll.
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Am glad that you like the portrayal of Prey.
AS to what will happen in the future in the story? Will 'Friendship' and 'Magic' prevail? The odds seem rather unlikely.... 😞 Who is redemption for? War criminals? Defeated warriors? Or merely the lost?
Right now, he is Luna's prisoner, so yeah, not much he can do anyway. Except survive and scheme.
Interesting theory on Snake and what happened to him. 🍊 I will not confirm or deny anything one way or the other. But Prey did learn a lot from that old voodoo witch.
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Never expected to get a straight answer that would spoil the fun of reading. I just wanted to voice my thoughts and opinions on the character.
Out of all the characters in the story, I found Snake to be quite an interesting character despite not having a lot of narration. To me, he seemed like a perversed fusion between Severus Snape and Voldemort.
Each speaker gets their own paragraph. Putting multiple speakers in one paragraph is confusing to read.
I am simply loving Prey.
As they came into *range*
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Maybe for you
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Considering it is actually proper grammer to start a new paragraph when someone starts speaking, I have to say your declaration is inaccurate.
I do find the conflict of gossamer's rational mind and trauma as he acknowledges the softness of everyone, but there is the constant reminder of his own trauma. Though he is also pretty straightforward with all of his solutions thinking of things at their top notch shape.
They ARE TEAM!!!! jaja, nice one <3
I almost forgot it, Prey's style to talk about "others" jaja xd
jajaja Prey must hate me for laughing at him; sorry.
I love your philosophy; This may be the story of a "simple" lamb, but this can be reflected in the real world. This recalled me to Diogenes of Sinope.
I love the narrator's sense of humor.
Awww how i love him <3
Já, because of your FimFiction, i began to love the sheeps. Thanks, Prey.
jajaja poor Prey, even the narrator thinks Prey's so cute.
Every time someone does a "-pony" correction(IE everybody to everypony, etc) I hope that 1 kill gets added to Prey's body count by the end...
'until'
Hehehehehe.
This was hard to understand but I assume it's meant to be that way
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Yes, it's supposed to make you glaze over for being poorly exlained.