This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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Its spelled sergeant
Wont need you
yes new chapter
Oooh this was an enjoyable chapter
Can't wait for the Ponies rasicm to hit them.
I was wondering, if Luna became a myth after she was forgotten, with tales stories about her that are perceived as pure fiction, and even the wolf woods became a sort of myth amongst at least some ponies, then what about Prey?
Had Prey become a myth himself when he was imprisoned? Are there any tavern songs or nursery rhymes about him? Do ponies tell each other scary stories about the white demon in the forest? About the wolf in lamb's clothing? Or was he truly forgotten, vanished from ponies conscious? Known about only by those who know where to look.
I do remember in chapter 9 that some guards thought “'-the monster-' '-the phantom-' '-it's just a story-' '-it's real, it's out there-'” and even called him a “towering monster”, and considering what he has done, it makes sense for it to be myths about him. But then again, even myths can be forgotten with time, especially if no one lives or wants to maintain them.
This chapter felt so long... to much happening
yesssss! Content!
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Why thank you. 🍎
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Well, it was a longer chapter with lots of talking, I will admit that.
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Well, Luna was gone for a thousand years, Prey has been gone for only fifty seven years. 🥞
But thinking in terms of scale: Nightmare Moon affected the whole world, Prey affected only the lands over Border. Yet people (ponies) forgot Luna and only remembered the demon, and only in part (Nightmare Night) Prey's just a lamb, hardly the same as what was in those stories.
He's been forgotten, and so too it seems has the war. Strange.
And the Wolfing Woods. They're probably just a story. Probably. Does it matter though if Prey believes they're real? 😄
I’m betting that Prey is going to have a run in with his old ‘friends’ in the Solar gaurd. It seems inevitable, that a few of them will be assigned to this apparently important case since it does involve mind magic and a group of them just closed a case were mind magic was heavily used.
Hmm
These riots do seem like a bigger deal as time goes on. At the beginning I thought it might just be the beloved Flim Flam brothers polarising towns. But now I would not be surprised by some pony two bit revolutunaries.
And the mentioning of the reclusive and still isolated Thestral clan got me thinking. Crimson got trained by his father, and that training involved mind discipline aswell. Why tho...
Maybee that Thestral Clan has mind manipulation of suggestion powers passed down in some way. And the signs laid out for Prey were actually for Crimson.
Like, see this sheep doll? We are gonna sheepnap that helpless lamb next, and the wool in his possibly mistaken bed as a reminder/backup in case he didn't see.
Just food for my thoughts tight now.
Anyway, great chapter that has me eager for more. Prey calmy looking at trees with Crimson was great too. Glad this story has time for things like that.
Oh, and is the Everfree the mother of all Wolfing Woods or has it just a bigass Wolf Wood in its center, beeing contained by the calm outer layer.
It seems to be too "peacefull" to be the former, cause the deeper green sure sound more terrifying.
Edit: Holy that was longer than I thought it would be
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Hello,
Thank you for your comment and theories (don't mind the length) It's interesting to see what people have to say and think is going to happen
Who's the one leaving messages? "Find out next time here on Sheep Radio..."
Wolfing Woods.... Hmm, what is the Everfree? What is the Deeper Green? The Everfree exists in Pony lands. The Deeper Green is beyond the mountain range border. The question is; Were they once one and the same?
Don't have any real plans for any Wolf Wood's shenanigans in the immediate future. 'Immediate'. But that's all I'll say.
Good day to you sir.
'hearsay', not 'here say'
Apologies is the proper plural of an apology, while to apologise is a verb.
And one more for the day, we'll see if I read more after actually doing the things I've been procrastinating on for six hours.
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Ah, you're back to finding the failures in my writing. 😅That's not a complaint, you're being very helpful once again by allowing me to correct some, frankly, dumb mistakes. ("Apologies" vs "apologise" being a very good example of that)
Thank you very much!
Starring should be staring, pretty sure, practically certain.
Error report: The office door was pulled open and Crimson (Should be Gloom) came out, then stopped when he spotted the other two thestrals. "Sir, I think they're both already here." Gloom called back into the office.
It's starting to annoy me that prey is treating everyone like they're simpleminded when its like, yeah most people could think of the shit you do if they had mind reading.
You're not special cuz you are unethical and capable of reading minds.
I hope he gets knocked down a peg, he's such a smarmy ass
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Prey is not what you would call, "the good guy", no. He's bitter and jaded in his life view.
Hooooly craaap! There's hope! This is exactly what Pray needed to hear, now I just have to wait and see if Pray will let Gloom live long enough to pound that into his thick skull.
As a side note this is something everyone needs to learn the younger the better. I personally learned this in my youth from, if you can believe it, the 90's Spider-Man cartoon lol
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😇 Will Prey take it on board properly? That is the question. We can but hope.
, there had always been birds
Seems like a better word choice to me the two hads didn't flow right for me
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Nice suggestion. I have changed it to reflect that now, thanks.
xd jajaja, oh! Prey!
Awwww <3
!!!!!! he´s a genius! <3
That's probably supposed to be "also".
Demure