This is a story about a sheep. A little sheep, locked deep in prison, put there by ponies. He doesn't want to be there, but then he's had to do a lot of things he doesn't want to. It's a shame he deserves to be in there.
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It's been two weeks since the last update? Man time flies so fast, gonna read this after work tonight.
This was awesome
Riveting. Simply, riveting.
Also, woo! Power boost for Crimson! I can't help but think of the price though.
Looking forward to more. I'm at the edge of my seat.
Another story that i'd give multiple likes to if i could
... did Crimson just have a magical girl transformation?
Waited sooooo long but it was worth it!! Need more!!!!
So prey just runed up a trinket he got from the dollar store and gave it to crimson as a last resort power up? What was the price I wonder...
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My guess is that he had to relive his most painful memory, in this case the death of his father, over again.
Well either that or his memory was altered/erased.
Finally some rest, they're off the spotlight and the two border guards are away, breathing room, finally.
Great chapter, as always, thanks for the quality content, and some magical girl Crimson
Excellent chapter as usual, and out of curiosity are you entering the HALLOWEEN IN APRIL contest?
IMO, Crimson was more Super Saiyan than Magic Girl
Old joke
Q How many Saiyans does it take to change a lightbulb?
A Only 1, but it takes him 10 episodes
Forwards
Makeshift
As they
Choking
Lose
Shimmying I think you meant
Lose the on
Sargent
Kindersnatches
Legs
House's
As he
Atlas'
Deus ex Prey? Didn't prey make that Jade ring... Or enchant it? But his runes have seemed pretty subtle or weak
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Hello once again and thank you for pointing out those mistakes for me! 😆
To answer your question: No, Prey did not make that jade ring. He bought it off the underground market in Canterlot if you recall, for like, a lot of bits. (I left it a bit open ended about whether he had put any runes on the ring but he didn't). It was a wgile ago since that chapter though....so yeah. 😇
Thanks again
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Um, I do not know this competition? What/where is it?
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Actually, Prey didn't use runes. That was all the artifact. I don't think I've made it clear enough, and that's my bad sorry.
Prey really did buy the artifact off the Underground market back in Canterlot for thousands of bits. I left it a bit ambiguous on purpose about just what Prey had given Crimson as a gift to make it a surprise. But no, he really didn't use rune magic. It's all enchantment, unicorn magic I'm afraid. My bad again. 😁
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A bit like that yes I guess. 😄
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Damn. I went over this TWICE & still....
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The question is going to arise "Where did you get the money to PAY for this?"
If I was Prey, I'd claim "I only paid a few bits. It must have been stolen by someone who didn't know what it was & so they sold it for very little"
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That is correct. Prey told them at the time he'd bought it off some street vendor who was clearing out for only a few bits.
In reality, he bought it using all that gold he took from Garrow after he absorbed the griffin's memories. 🦅
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Ah, a tactical (pyrrhic) victory and a strategic loss. Also, the realisation that the, comparatively, small Scare-Crow wasn't even the proverbial Queen of the Warlock's "board". More of a Bishop, or a Rook. That's got to feel great for Prey & Co. To, barely, survive the literal onslaught of a siege, only to ultimately fail in the "bigger picture", so to speak, has got to have crippled morale for the ISND. Good stuff.
Then there's the reason they're even alive: a magical... 'artefact'. I wonder, was it intrinsically magical and Prey just unwittingly gave it to Crimson, not knowing of the object's arcane potential? Or has Prey done something to it and wiped his own memory of the fact? Why he would do that, I don't really fathom, but you never really know with him.
Anyway, I feel the Reaper King is going to, at least in the next couple chapters, make his grandiose entrance; and with it, the probable annihilation of the ISND. So that should be nerve-wracking, as has become par for the course for you. But yeah. Good stuff.
I feel you really captured the hectic nature of a siege and after the barrier is compromised, the loss of the fortifications do usually follow swiftly afterwards. Hence the eventual tradition of building layers of walls about a castle/fortress. I am curious to find out what the hell the necklace is and what exactly the "price* paid for the power was, but I have no doubt that will follow.
Short review, as I am currently suffering the after-effects of the most vile drink known to man (a 'Singapore Sling' if you must know...), so I feel genuinely ill.
Exemplary work and an excellent chapter, as always. A pleasure to read and fills on with anticipation for the next. I wish you well good sir, and advise that you never make the mistake of drinking a Singapore Sling, EVER.
Regards, Laika.
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Thanks for saying so. 🐑
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I promise more in two weeks time once again. 😇
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Here is the link, it’s a fimfiction moderator blog: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/893755/the-halloween-in-april-horror-contest
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If the scarecrow really was only a rook, I wonder if the pumpkin king will instead be the equivalent of a “horse” or maybe the “queen” either way it is going to be interesting seeing it smash the ISND apart
Storeys for buildings, stories for children. Great chapter.
Does that ring count as 'dark magic', I wonder, since it's magic that would work for anypony? Or anyone, for that matter...
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>alll of it.
Truly one of, if not the best, story I've ever read on this site (and in general). Amazing work you absolute genius. Also go to hell for making me stay up until 2am everyday for a week so I could continue reading this story and I'm still not finished (which is honestly good, I want to read as much of this story as possible).
Error Report: 'It's no a lie. (not)
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That could’ve clarified a LOT better. I was under the impression it was all Prey’s doing this whole time, lol. There was no indication he was telling the truth of him buying it off the black market
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Yea. Although, this does actually come up explaining the Jade Rings origin in detail later. It's important in later chapters. 😄