Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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I'm trying to figure out who Nondis will "get" with first, if you will. I was really convinced it would be Twilight at first, But i'm starting to lean towards Rarity more and more.
Anyway, another good Chapter!
lol Another excellent chapter.^^
Great to see an update! Still a hilarious fic, I hope that the comedy isn't lost once the clop starts to come into play~
Ya know, In all honesty if I was in his predicament with the dress in a pony world, I would have done the same thing and no fucks would be given to what they would have thought. I'd chalk it up as a day to look back and laugh at.
As clever as I can be, I will say I wouldn't have thought of that reversal Nondis pulled there. You have my respect.
Uh oh...
This can go one of two ways. Either very scary, or very sad.
Sorry, I had to do that. I'm going back to reading now.
And you deserved every fav you got. I like where this story is going. He received his first kiss, even though it was on the check. He should be receiving his first lip-lock soon. You know he is not going to want to leave. It's just a matter of time before he openly admits and accepts it.
AS SOON as Nondis was strutting in the dress, SexyBack by Justin Timberlake came on. Made it that much better.
AWSOME!!!! The way he BURNED RD And AJ was just beyond Epic!!!
The "in the event of a tie the judge must wear the dress" thing came out of no where... unless I just didn't see it. It could have and probably should have been foreshadowed. It seems kinda cheap to force him into the situation when he didn't really agree to that sort of thing.
Disregard this if it was foreshadowed somewhere and I just missed it.
I dunno, man, I'd put up a Helluva fight if put in that situation
And I wouldn't be sorry for swearin' either
Maybe I'm just a prick
Why does Rarity always have to try dresses on guys? I had two characters who were subjected to that torment: The first because Rarity wanted Rainbow to do it but he stepped in at the last minute and got her to make him try them on. The second was a troll, so when Rarity tried to put a dress on him he made the dress spontaneously combust and burst into flames.
Looooove it !
I must ask are you going to add more tags to this? i keep wanting to say this story needs a romance tag.
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No really thanks you guys for all the reads.
LOL
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Wow! This was fun to read. Work it, Nondis! Lmao. So awesome!
this all I have to say
I responded with hand on my hip, a tilted head and a flicked wrist. "Don't be jealous because I look good. If you tried to wear this dress, the two of you would look like hot, flaming trash."
Instantly, the two mares stopped laughing and stared at me slack-jawed.
Whipping my arm in a Z formation, I launched my right hand to the air and snapped at them as I started to walk off. "Slay!"
BURN!!!
FABULOUS
In my mind I heard the "G.I. JOE!" after that sentence.
I loved this chapter it was funny and sweet.And I relly hope he makes a herd. I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens to them all next.
This chapter almost killed me ! XD
Especially Anon in a dress ! So much fun in this fic ! I'll keep reading anytime I can ! XD
Ladies, you have been thoroughly served a plate of BURN!
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Good story really.It's oh so funny,and so on,but there are still too many minor grammatical errors,one being the use of my where me should be.That's probably the main error i see in the story.However,it seems to be getting better as the story progesses,but the whole "my" ordeal is still an issue that of which can be easily taken care of.(not gonna lie,I can't remember the exact meaning of ordeal.oh well)
Wonderful man! You made me laugh so hard.
Clever Author.
...so much win.
Also, that thing with the dress prank on Nondis was hilarious as well as impressive. Though Twilight's explanation about the rings kinda left me thinking some things over...
4648860 Yeah,I never saw anything that makes this logical,It looks like they made a random last minute rule,Kinda stupid.I just can't believe he went with it.I mean,following a random rule,and submitting yourself to such disrespect,I cannot read this now.
The character has no backbone,no sense of decency,and just takes whatever crap ppl throw on him.I hate characters like this.It's not funny it's sick.
We are gathered here today to honor the loss of the *sniffles* the derpiest soup can to ever exist. May she move on from this life in peace but never venture far from our hearts...
R.I.P.
Derpy S. Can
1995-2016
She died of
laughter.
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That is the best avatar pic.
When he gives his comeback:
RD and AJ were floored
I wouldn't have been surprised if Discord was there anyway.
no swearing in my christian orchard
Abstinence rings on the cooter? Like, genital piercings that symbolize abstinence, or multiple large rings that seal it up and enforce abstinence? On a filly that was five to eight years old when she got them?
Not a fan of reading that. Americans had a big enough controversy a few years back, trying to figure out if it was a good idea to perform slightly-invasive pap-smears on eight to twelve year old girls as a means of monitoring feminine health. Let alone actual piercings down there.
This doesn't really fit in with the rest of the world building in the show and in this particular story, but I could absolutely see Princess Celestia sabotaging Twilight's romantic endeavors to make sure she became a princess correctly.
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More like a magical ring which attaches itself without piercing and sooth any physical urge. So, she can get in love, but only on her own without hormones playing any role in that endeavor. Well, still somewhat fucked up, but nowhere as bad... if we ignore one particular detail that Celestia likely haven't abstained from adding some spells to track Twilight's non-existent sexual life with some bullshit laws attached.
Oh yeah. So rich that Aj had to go to the gala to earn more
I think he just earned all of my respect for taking this so well.
It was so obvious, but still sad.
Now I'm imagining the MC like thistemp-ca.s3.amazonaws.com/cdn-files/1302043183168739072320230621233843sst.jpg