Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Hell yeah, an update!
I'm on the clock! DON'T STOP ME NOW!
Ah. So I take it Shining is their to either kill/or fuck up Nondis at the very least to avenge Cadence, despite Cadence starting said shit? It never really ends. Nondis is almost killed on a suicidal mission, only to come back and be dumped by Twilight in front of everyone. He went on said suicidal mission for her sake. Cadence then manipulates and gives him shit for "Not believing in love" or trying hard enough. And because he had the gal to fight back, and not lie down and take it; Now Shining finally wants to hurt him. By this point, I'd just cut my losses and go back to Earth for good.
Nondis better drop some truth bombs on Shining Armor on how his wife pretty much fucked him over and nearly made him want to back out on ending that ancient law to fuck them all over with him.
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Ikr! though i want to know what celestia is up to. She is obviously planning something.
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Especially if Celestia's planning what I think she's planning...
Wait so will he and twilight ever get back together?
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What are you talking about?? Planning what? Has Celestia been secretly manipulating all this from the beginning or something? Cause if that was the case, were I Nondis and I found out that I'd been manipulated for some time by Celestia for her own agenda, I would defiantly cut ties with Equestria then with an extra "I hope the next villain eats you jerks alive" Sorry if I sound frustrated, but reading chapter after chapter of nothing but misery to this guy, really irks me. Yet I keep coming back to read, I can't explain it.
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That line sounds like she's planning to turn him into a pony for whatever reason.
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Wow, if that turns out to be true; I imagine Nondis would be specially pissed off. "Since you're a pony now, that means you owe your allegiance to me or something" by Princess Celestia o-o
Redundancy detected.
I don't believe shining is as upset as were being led to believe .... hes mad sure but I don't think he's stupid enough to not realize his drunk wife was the cause of the fight and his own experience with his wife messing with his own love life while courting her will lead him to how cadance manipulated twilights relationship. I don't consider her the alicorn of love if she's only considerate to the woman/mare half of the relationship. She has no consideration to males. She uses love magic yes but thats mental manipulation. For example the time she cast love magic to make those two ponies stop arguing. She didn't even find out the reason why. What if one of them was cheating and was confronted by the other. She pretty much forced them to keep a relationship going because she fancies herself as the love doctor.
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Just because his brothers a earth pony doesn't mean he will be silly celestia. He's allready had his near death epiphany like twilight did. But instead of celestia he had his grandfather.
Another excellent, though incredibly long, chapter.^_^
Huh. For a short while, I thought Nondis was being invited to the Wonderbolt VIP party in order to be caught by some paparazzi. Like, it's unknown to him but well-rumored that the Wonderbolts hold some rather lewd afterparties, and the news of him being caught in such a debaucherous place would be just the icing on top of the media shitstorm cake.
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I know what you mean. It just gets so old at times, and it seems that each day more shit gets piled on. But I can't stop reading, hoping that this will lead to some worthwhile conclusion(s).
So I'm guessing it was a set up
I'm surprised Nondis isn't literal dust by now, with all the shit he's been through.
Just wanted to say this is an awesome story and great work, man. Also, this song reminds me of Nodis.
It's about a WW2 soldier but seems kinda fitting for him
Actually, I just realized something for the character Nondis. What is their left for him to fight for in this world? He went through hell, and almost died several times to be with a mare who ended up dumping him in front of everyone when he got back. So he almost died for nothing. Their is literally nothing holding him back anymore. All he'd have to do is go back through the mirror with Mel, his friends and brothers, and then shatter it to a million pieces. Problem solved. He can't be manipulated or pushed around anymore by any of siad ponies. Ponies are constantly left and right trying to hurt him, so I'm just wondering if this is even worth it anymore for him.
As Nondis said: Well played.
I think you're missing part of your sentence, there.
yell heah
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If you really wanna know, Nondis does eventually get his...release.
Mah, how much longer are we going to keep seeing Nondis getting fucked up. This is kinda getting old and run through fam.
ah yes
the game that ruined my childhood