Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Yeah, I can't understand why the image won't show up either. Tried getting it to show three times already.
Achievement Unlocked: "Now it's really complicated.."
"You got Celestia to kiss you. How the hell did you do that?!"
Nice chapter.
you got me to change who i think Nondis should be with like 4 times.
stop making me feel so complicated :'l
y u lik dis?
I swear he has to end up in a herd at this point, I see the signs! Ooooh the worst part is I could see them working.
Nondis: I can't choose one!
Princesses: You must!
Nondis: I choose no one then!?
Princesses: Lets not be so hasty...
Mel: So about this Herding thing
At this point I don't know if Nondis CAN end with only one pony, because good FUCK does it look hard XD
Well, no one can say this story doesn't live up to its name....
Kinda want to shove Lemon's head in another beaker for pushing him into another situation though...
This explains my thoughts pretty nicely:
Really enjoyed this chapter.
Another great chapter as usual.:D
You're not together anymore. You're the ex, and the one who broke it off when he wanted to keep things going with you. That's none of your business.
Also none of your business for aforementioned reason.
If it's the only way to get it across, the only other "way to talk to her" is "Miss? I was told to deliver this pink slip of paper to you." If you can't do your job right because you're a prideful ass, then you need to be replaced.
Or, you know, in the first ten seconds of combat you could have used a bit of surgical telekinetic force and crushed his heart in his chest, or severed his brain stem from his spinal cords, or teleported super-heated sand/soil into his lungs and stomach, teleported him onto the sun where the if the sudden hard vacuum didn't kill him first he'd be incinerated by the sun's heat, teleported him to the bottom of the ocean where he'd have been crushed to death in half a second from the water pressure- Twilight, you could have ended him in nearly an instant, saved the countryside from all that wanton destruction, and permanently removed a great threat to you nation that your teacher and her sibling failed to properly deal with. For such a smart being Twilight, you and the other royals sure like carrying that Idiot Ball whenever dire times are afoot. Or, a-hoof, rather.
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I really do love your writing. If I come off as spiteful at times, it's more the result of BS from the workplace coloring my judgement of other things. You've sure been writing this for a long time, and yet your quality of writing rarely, if ever, dips. Very few long-fic writers on this site can do that.
You are excellent at making real-feeling characters that have very relatable flaws that we love, others that some of us wish we could personally choke the life out of with our bare hands. There are funny moments, sad moments, inspiring moments, times when you wonder if this might just be the end of a character that's been around for over a year, (and to our elation when in one particular case, it was) and relief when a tough situation comes to a close....but add in very serious consequences that are a very real possibility in real life, and almost never happen in a cartoon's world.
If this fic ends up being cancelled one day, it will be a sad day for me, but at least it will have been a wild ride up until that point.
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Hearing you say that does warm my heart. I truly do appreciate the commentary and your willingness to stick around for so long.
Though I will have to ask that you spoiler text any sizable excerpts from the story, as there are some few readers who are new or not as far in who will want to experience those moments for themselves. I mean no harm, I just want to make sure because I still have readers who have just made it to chapter 10.
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I am personally very sad that I didn't find this story until about a bit more than a year ago. So I'm not one of those long term fans who followed you from the very beginning, but your writing style is very enjoyable. The story itself is captivating and just makes you want to read more. The characters are very believable, you add to the already known personalities from the show perfectly to make more 3 dimensional personalities that function in a realistic world. This is one of those fics where I would buy a printed copy if one was ever released.
The show might have ended but works like these show that it's not the end by any means and that we don't need other people to create animated stories for us to enjoy the characters and what they stand for.
So thank you for taking time out of your life to share this wonderful work of art with us.
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Alright. I'll try to remember to do so in the future.
yay finally a chapter where i fishish it with 'aw that's nice.. instead of...'I WANT TO MURDER ALL THE EVIL!! '
it's been too long I think.
Writer. You are God