Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Welp, I am pretty sure that there is going to be a few more holes in a certain changeling relatively soon, and these one won't be naturally made (and probably around the forehead area).
I really like how you did thorax. The the Twitter bit was hilarious lol
I really hope that the human Captain kills all the books in the next battle. I hate the changelings in this fandom next to Discord.
Awesome chapter.
Things are about to get real....andcmote complicated
Keep the chapters coming.
The pony have found Twitter aaaah the end has come
Oh wow! A lot happened in this chapter, but it was really well paced. A few typos and such but overall a good chapter. I hope things get better in a way that you are able to relax.
Oh fuck. I’m worried now. This won’t end without a lot of spilt blood.
Also, I really hope that Thorax can manage to free himself from Chrysalis. Please don’t let anything bad happen to that sweet boy.
Good cliffhanger, as usual.^_^
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When a story gets so good you start rating the cliffhangers, too.
Dang. I'm all caught up again. Oh well, at least the ride was nice while it lasted, and I patiently and gratefully await the next chapter. :)
Pretty sure she both can't shapeshift clothes and doesn't know what he's wearing so it should be a easy tell of who is who
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The thing is that she can shape shift armor, crowns, jewelry, and a myriad of other things. Show spoilers below.
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There's also the fact that she's was in the room with him, so it's easy to change her appearance on the spot. Furthermore, she can infiltrate the memories of her victims to know what she needs to know. And being that she already infiltrated Nondis' mind in the past, she has a lot of information on him that could prove useful.
Where the flaws are is that she didn't do it a second time to see where his current state of mind was, which could've been useful to her tricking his father.
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stones and glass houses
Having read to chapter 80, I gotta say I really hate Twilight and it would take an awful lot to change my feelings on that. Alex and Candace are also asshats, but more redeemable in my opinion.
I love this story, so please, if you feel the need to reply, no spoilers.