Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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I don't know why but i really want twilight to beat the shit out of Melanie.
Twilight hasn't blasted him yet so she seems to be in at least a logical mindset.
Also, I must say I am really loving these updates.
Keep it up!
~8chill
Fingers crossed that Melanie finds out about Equestria. Bonus if she ends up going there
Uhm
You could say that things once again just got...
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...complicated.
Welp, that escalated.
Isn't spying on your boyfriend a no-no?
Sounds like Twilight might have a few things to answer for too.
Also the whole "Will Nondis get some?" I feel has been played out now. To the point where I don't even care about it anymore, and if he does get it, it'll probably be off-screen or something. Sure, dangling that carrot got me interested in this story at first, but now it's just blocking my view from the actual characters.
Fuck or don't fuck. I just don't have any to give anymore.
Cliffhanger. You're good at them. XD
My only gripe is if Nondis had a mostly vegetarian diet on Equestria (I really don't know what his daily meal intake was) and suddenly snarfed down a huge steak dinner, he's gonna be one sick boy. The body can't handle a rapid change in diet. He's going to have one hell of a bellyache.
No...Oh, no...C'mon, don't do this to me, please...I beg of you
The first half of this chapter is a shining example of why I NEVER considered joining a frat during my days at VU. I was too many people's bitch in high school to ever consider risking going through anything like that again just to join a glorified club.
It doesn't seem like there should be much else to this other than "she is my friend from my world." Though there probably will be for reasons of plot convenience. Considering he doesn't (and honestly, he really fucking shouldn't) have any feelings for her, and even if she suddenly did now, he shouldn't care, I don't see a realistic problem with this situation.
Wow, Twillight's hormones are going wild as of late, don't know if i should pity or congratulate the guy.
5136737 me and you both Lol , cause we both know that the universe both loves and hates Nondis xD. Watch a stallion fall in love with melanie lol
OH GOD WHAT A CLIFF HANGER CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!
Damn, I thought that you wheren't going to right this for a while. So when I saw this I was like, , then at the end I thought 'oh s*$t.'
Nondis... You're in deeeeeeeeeeep shit ! XD
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=paJf91ols1I&index=9&list=WL
its not ogre
I am seriously beginning to dislike Twilight. I have watched Nondis endure pain and suffering, giving his all to be with her, and all I have seen of her is being selfish and manipulative in return. This relationship is extremely unhealthy.
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Unfortunately, you couldn't be speaking any truer words.
OH fuck
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That's the same thing I was thinking. A relationship built on lust and what Twilight said about, 'Nondis being the only one who made her feel aroused' is just really wrong. Also when the news that they were to suddenly be married sprung up I thought that he would've shouted, "WAIT, WHAT?!" and proceed to tell them firmly that this was moving too fast. He would then tell them of how humans took each other on dates, took time to get to know one another, and figure out whether they were truly compatible for each other before getting married. Also earlier in the story Nondis commented that Twilight was like a drug for him and every time they get to snogging I'm just like, "WHAT THE HE'LL IS WRONG WITH YOU!" Also the fact that Twilight is acting like a bitch, not letting Nondis get any release, pretty much torturing him during their escapés and the total lust permeating this relationship along with this recent breach in privacy/spying/NOT TRUSTING HER SIGNIFICANT OTHER is very, very unhealthy for ANY kind of relationship.
I would've left the whole relationship a bunch of chapters ago when Twilight was trying to explain why she wasn't paying Nondis a time of day.
Hold on a second, he's been in Equestria for nine months, and it is heavily established that he hasn't gotten off in all that time... His baby gravy is going to be a DARK yellow-brown when it finally gets out. Gonna get prostate problems at this rate. Guys really need to flush the pipes at least every couple of days.
Ok I have fairly long nails especially for a male and I have been literally making my palms bleed because I have been digging my nails into my hands soooooo hard. I just wanted to strangle Nondis more and more and more with each and every single word of this chapter!
And on a side note that honestly has zero to do with the earlier part of my comment....please somepony correct me if I'm wrong but I'm pretty sure LA and TX are separated by a single river. Granted that river is the Mississippi River but details details.
Here I am just sad that i didnt work out for pinky when she could have done so much more without getting blue balled every damn time
Meh, his trip back to earth felt cheap. And maybe Melanie's problem of not finding the "right one" has something to do with her being promiscuous. Did you know that a century ago the word "dating" was considered synonymous to prostitution?
BOOOO LONGHORNS👎
BOOMER SOONER!!!!!
This whole human world fiasco really blew the story up in my opinion.
Things were going so well with basic training-onward, feels like the story is taking yet another nose dive for the sake of it.
I'm assuming there will be implications with him returning to the human world (though none of the ponies seem concerned so far, for whatever reason.), but it should've been a MASSIVE red flag to return after so long, just to so effortlessly go back to Equestria as if it didn't happen.
I'll persevere with this story, but Nonny's constant, absurdly stupid decisions mixed with how many of the ponies behave and treat him in this story, it's certainly making it hard.
(addendum, the entire character of Melanie is stupid and she is absolutely stupid given her constant sleeping around & yet desire for a dedicated relationship).