Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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You guys didn't think I was done, didja???
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wtf lmao
Ur fucking insane I love you
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i second that :D
this is what being spoild on christmas feels like :D
Who needs sleep anyway?
And here's to think my Christmas was just about wrapped up. It's 2:20am and that was worth every minute.
Solemn Oath sure got what she deserved. Part of me would be sad to have this be the end of her, but I think I'd be even more sad if she joined Umbra and the Corrotto against Nondis.
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Oh god, I should’ve recognized his style, considering arareroll is one of my favorites! I’ve no clue why I thought it was silfoe! Now I feel like an idiot.
And great work on these new chapters, you beautiful bastard. You sure know how to drive up that tension. I was literally shaking in fear for a brief bit. I’ve no idea what kind of future or climax you’re aiming for with this current arc but man, you put in so much goddamn effort it’s unreal. And for six years too! 1.5 million words. You have the resolve of gods, friend.
I just hope everything can turn out well for all our heroes. Really wish that harem aspect would come into effect instead of leaving so many potential love interests hanging and bitter at Nondis while they settle for something/one less satisfactory, though that’s probably because I honestly enjoy the way you write clop. Seriously, this story is the most severe case of “come for the sex, stay for the story” I’ve ever experienced.
Hope you had a merry Christmas and I wish ya a happy new year!
When you accidentally read the 3rd chapter in the bomb first and are both lost and spoiling things for yourself...
*Sees first Harry Potter book is 76,944 long*
I just read a whole damn book.
Oh damn I just noticed that third chapter. Man you’re trying to wreck me, ain’t ya?
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ba dum tss
Welp, things seems a bit ominous with Mel. Don't do it to her!
Man I can't wait for all this stuff with Umbra and the old Marriage law is over to signal that act 1 of the story is over because there is so much to play with in the mlp universe such as baddies galore, the general corruptness of the nobility, possibly introducing new tech to Equestria. How long can the humans protect the secret of the portals? How about Nondis subtly being passed around certain mares like he's 'the rock'. Gosh despite how beefy this story, and its individual chapters are (Can neither confirm nor deny loss of sleep to read them in one go) It seems like this story could go on Fooooooreeeeeveeeeeer.~
Don't ever do this again. You know hard it is to binge-read 80k words in two days!?! Joking aside, these chapters were excellent. At least Baby Flurry is in the clear for now.
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I know how you feel! This guy really knows how to drag stuff out and make ya waaaaaiiiit, while upping the tension at the drop of a hat. I, too, was hoping this was gonna be more harem style. Though that’s just because I first started reading the story for the clop, which used to be so infrequent. But now I got hooked and I’m in it for the long haul.
But despite Equestria seemingly being so open to harems, Nondis seemed to run into every mare that unfortunately wasn’t into that. I hope we get past this law and the Inner Circle soon (hopefully with them all going down burning) so the characters can come across happier times and finally see the only way for each of them to be happy is to share Nondis.
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Well shit, I hope not. If I remember correctly since it’s January, estrus shouldn’t be till spring in a few months, which by then this whole situation should be rectified. Unless the human-to-pony spell somehow threw her into some early estrus and it wasn’t just her new senses overwhelming her. I was kinda thinking that’s as something that might’ve happened when Nondis fucked Twilight as a human back in LXXXVII, figures that would come up as a drama bomb at some point. But maybe that nullified due to her changing back to a pony? I forget how long it’s been since then, a few weeks at least so she’d be showing signs by now but so far none that we know of.
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Just wait....he has still yet to make a choice btwn Equestria or Earth only for good or ill.
I mean I get why he needs to choose, bc let's face it humanity is scum and we're more likely to react to aliens by slaughtering most of them and the one's we don't kill out right will get treated like the mouse in a maze experiment or dissected or both. So leaving the portal open...yeah nope. Humanity is horrible and it isn't a species of mammals but rather a species of virus. Individual humans can be really great people, and some can be even worse. Which is why I wish Nondis would quit going back and forth. I mean look what happens at the point in the story it's at to date. Wouldn't be happening, at least not like this.
The flurry of text that I read through over the last week for this fic is the best part of 2020.
It's not a high bar, I know, but it really was the best part of my year.
Nice story, though saw a little error. NCO is Non-Commissioned Officer not Non-Commanding Officer, Sergeant or Petty Officer. Not in the military myself but family was and have read a lot of military stories and articles from active and retired military. But as it's Equestria I guess all the Officers are mavericks going from enlisted to officer instead of an academy to come out as squeeky new 2nd lieutenants or ensigns. 😁
Finally caught up, and what a ride. Hmm.... From what I see, I could see Damper being neutral, just working to be on the winning side, and this could lead him to rethink things. Or at least, I hope that's the case. But, could be wrong.
I have a feeling rising in me!
Dead story?
Please tell me if nondis will be in relation to twilight in the last chapters, or everything is already turned upside down as much as possible, but even if he is not with twilight, who is he with.
And could you briefly tell the story after chapter L
I could practically see Dapper gag as he was conceding.
You know I always wonder since he can summon his phone or guns with to him could be easily summon his car seems like he can summon things through the mirrors how about a tank Maybe taking one of the mirrors to the military base thinking where is that tank is located it and just teleport it in.