Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Talking about brutality. So just like that they broke contact with eachother? Twilight should stand up for herself and screw the rules.
I do hope that you will let them talk to eachother in the next chapter.
All my respect for Shining armor (which was already low) is gone now.
Bravo, good mix of heavy and light stuff. By the end I was feeling like he should run away and go camping. Also I belive it was Fluttershy in the Library with the Discord.
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Well obviously you never caught your little sister about break her royal vow with some strange ape creature. I must say he was far more restrained than I expected, Non was given more than a chance to explain himself. I think there is a clash here because of biology, and Shiny isn't aware of the problems plaguing Non. Not sure if the author is using Estrus or not but I can imagine that unlike humans, ponies go into estrus twice a year so the biological urge to mate is more subdued during the year. Humans on the other hand mate year round so the urge is far more pressing in general. Couple this with the fact that he has been sexualy frustrated would cause his resistance to lessen.
Since Non hasn't come to understand his feeling for Twi yet, and Twi is still kinda on the rebound both of them were saseptable to weakness. This is exactly what the vow was ment to prevent. If Shining hadn't stepped in this could have turned into an ugly mess, far worse than what happened.
4702980 Does sound like that, but you couldn't be any more wrong. She's scolding him for getting hurt because she cares for him. That's why it's hard for her to see her in the state he was in.
...well, yes. That was completely out of place and frankly doesn't fit this story at all.
More than that though, i am beginning to get frustrated with this story. The fight i can understand, and i can see why you might want to execute it like that. But here he was straight up assaulted by Shining Armor. Not only that, but Shining also committed misconduct and abuse of power. If he is just going to apologize, even through he did nothing wrong, and take this lying down, then i'm honestly beginning to consider abandoning this story as well. It's one thing to make him relatable to the target demographic, but it's another to just make him a complete and utter doormat. There's no fun in reading a story with a protagonist like that, where the plot only progresses due to outside influences.
Ouch. Things just got complicated.
Much mating
So hot
Stahp wth teh intrspcies.
discordshy 4ever
Well that was depressing.
Sooo.....how many more times is he gonna get his ass handed to him in this fic?
For some reason, something in this chapter turned me off of this story. I don't know what it is, but I cannot continue reading this. I will not take my thumbs up though, that's still yours. I just won't continue reading. Good luck.
I want to beat the shit out of Shining Armor so much for assaulting Nondis and punishing Flash Sentry because he rejected Twilight. I really hope that later Shining Armor doesn't come to apologize for nearly killing Nondis and then Nondis forgives him. If that happens i'm 100% done with this story.
>Comedy Tag
Then why does reading this hurt my heart so much.
Damn.....Twillight REALLY should have blasted her extremist nutcase of a brother, might have brought some sense into his twisted head.
So like, is there really no punishment for Shining Armor's attempted murder of a protected species?
So Caramel is punished for (among other horrible things) assaulting a protected species, but as far as we know Shining will not be. Huh...
I wonder if Nondis will be invited to the Six's get togethers anymore if Twilight's not allowing herself to see him. Though it is a small town...
Wow, abit harsh but understandable
thanks for the update!!
4705940 Actually, I never implied that he would go unpunished. However, it is implied that she will be a no option for the time being. SPOILERS: More of this will be cleared up in the next chapter.
I have a problem with this paragraph:
If Shining Armor was so obsessed with protecting his sister, why the hell did he tell her not to even bother to show up? And I don't see Shining respecting Nondis at all now. He almost killed the guy! As much as Shining doesn't like Nondis, Shining owes him a HUGE apology (at the very least).
As for the story, I think this is a pivotal chapter. This shows that Nondis will NOT be staying in Equestria...even if he wanted to, and I don't see any reason why he should. He almost got killed twice within 24 hours. I really don't like the direction I think this story is heading. If he almost gets killed again, and it's not in actively trying to protect someone, I'm out.
God damit why did there have to be discord x fluttershy?
How often are the updates?
That is the peak of blue balls syndrome, can't help but sympathize with the bloke.
Hot interspecies sex did happen but not for out lovable protagonist.
And Pinkie...what will become of this turnabout of events, I wonder?
Jeez, things just keep going down hill for Nondis...guy can't have much going right for him I am sure this doesn't need to be asked and that just me being worried...but this won't end up being a story where all of pony kind end up hating the human of the story except for a few exception and the human just end up miserable in the end? Like I said, I know it probably doesn't even need to be asked but have seen to many stories that took that route and...don't that happening to another story I enjoy
4707918 I can assure you that I didn't have that in mind.
4708015 Okay, sorry again for worrying over something liek that
As a loyal Conservative, I do not appreciate having Shining Armor the Nutjob lumped with my affiliation of choice. Insane stupidity runs rampant both right and left.
Waiting to hear about his prison sentence and Twilight, an ALICORN to tell him to go buck himself.
4708154 IMHO we're all nutjobs from different walks of life. And as to why he has been hinted at and a detailed explanation will come later.
I didn't know that Shining Armor was a Mormon wanker! Sexist troglodyte, cheerleader of patriarchy.
4705619 We should show that fucking Mormon wanker what's up.
4706791 If Shining's nose isn't buried in the Book of Mormon, it's shoved right up his arse
Shouldn`t Shining Armor be punished for attempted murder of a protected species? I mean, in the real world, you would be fined or something. I don`t know, I didn`t go to law school.
In the words of Jhontron
"you know shining, your a fucking asswhole"
Good chapter, can't wait to see the next one
4707918 I agree with you on that
So much nature, so much kissing, and so many feels! I really feel sorry for Non: Twilight or Family?
Nondis should probably go on a journey so he can
A. Figure out what his feelings toward the Ponies are (Pinkie and Twi especially)
2. See the world outside of Ponyville, especially considering he only has two or so months left to make his decision to stay or go back home, he doesn't have much time left.
III. Toughen up man! He probably has the worst track record of getting his tukus handed to him amongst HIE(getting that way anyway).
Let's compare him to Felix Jackson from Cheating Death
Nondis Felix
Current Duration A Few Months A couple of days
Ponies Befriended All the ponies that mater None
Antagonists Caramel and Shining Armour A Manticore
Victories None Killed the fricken Manticore with a rock and sheer willpower.
As you can see Nondis isn't looking so good, guy should get some tips from a Shaolin Monk pony or something to toughen him up.
4706177 if anything he should or would have to move in with zecora. This would be his safest option.
Actually they could still geld him since he is the only human and thus there are no female humans to carry child. Thus it could be argued to go ahead with gelding him. actually what's worse is shining could make this claim to kill him off on any allegations he could try bringing up.
However it sounds like if they follow laws, he either has to marry twilight if he stays after the separation period or face gelding/death.
Also how much of a purist is shining? Is he bad to the point where he believes in ponies should only marry in their own tribes? What is cadance's views?
I feel like pinkie is crying because she found out he likes twilight.
I'm thinking him moving in with zecora is his only option right now.
4723754 Yeah, he could face that except for one major flaw: Twilight is still a virgin and technically upheld the vow thanks to her older brother
4727650 true, if shining is the way your describing him, i see a possibility of him slandering the human and using that to get the right to off him.
I don't suppose you replying means a new chapter tonight?
4727990 Actually, I've met my monthly quota for this story. I'd try to do 4 chapters a month, one for every 7-8 days. It's just that this month I've been on a hot streak, having chapters in four days. Once I've updated a single story with 10 chapters in the course of a month, but I was making up for what had happened the last time my laptop had a fan issue (didn't have it replaced then or now). New chapter will be out soon. But just don't expect anything after this one until some time next month.
Please tell me this is going to end in a trial where nondis gives a speech like tyrion in game of thrones. "You are not on trial for being a human." "Oh but ive been on trial for that since coming here." And then he and shining have a trial by combat. I know that wont happen but I can dream. That being said I'm really enjoying this story so far.
Racist plothole Shining Armor and sexist archaic relationship laws. Yay...
I don't mean it lightly when I say Shining Armorial needs to fucking die right God Damn now. You know what? I'm just gonna fucking kill him myself.
4955968 do you need any help with that Ive got my gun here and it was just collecting dust so, do you want to shoot him or should I?
So they are totally forgetting that shinning nearly killed him..... yes? good. And Celestia being thousands of years old and is supposed to be wise, and yet she doesn't know, you can put a time limit on something like love. And Shinning is a racist as well, ohh goodie. Your fine as long as you don't no matter your race, as long as your not in anyway part of my life or my family. And really even if they went all the way, if he was a pony he would of been castrated or been essentially killed, don't you think thats a tad extreme. And why is he such a ...... pushover, i know people can be like that, but come on man grow some balls!! so they can cut them off . Anyway still like the story, just ignore the stuff before this
4704872 For shits and giggles, you should really catch up with current events. You'll like what happens next.
This. Chapter is so sweet and so sad I can't wait to see what happens next.
Wahhh, you broke the forth wall, i'm disliking this story!!
*Hits the like button*
Not gonna lie, i was a bit skeptical about this story after the first few chapters, but at this point I can't for the life of me see why it dosen't have more likes. Who knows, mabey it drops off in latter chapters, but as of now you couldn't stop me from reading on to find out if you tried.
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Well, I imagine that for his brutality that he'll not be getting any from Cadence for awhile.