Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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And here we are again.
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From what I've seen, the author will finish the story.
At some point...
Might take a decade or two.
First. Nice chapter.
Next. Why weren't the portals and the humans returned to the human world to keep thems are for the time being? I forget how they opened them but I'm sure Twilight has the spell work saved in that brain of hers.
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I’m hoping so, I’ve been reading this for almost a week.
I’ll share my thoughts about this story once I catch up.
how you can tell when you really love a story: "when you see the update pop up. clap your hands, jump in your seat and cheer yay" :D
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Cool, let me know when you do. I stopped on chapter 84, (got tired of the monotony and repetition) and can’t bring myself to read it anymore. Though, on occasion I search it up, see what’s going on from the comments.
hoppin Nondis DICK
Hmmm, I get the Celestia doesn't like to share but.. It almost seems like she just may not have a choice. I dunno
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Dude, I seriously hope so. Doubt it, but really hope so. I still feel Nondis and Twilight could work. I mean a majority of the chapters up to this point were about trying to make them work. That whole fighting Shining during and immediately after his training, his “I will carry her” speech, everything they went through. It just feels bad for Twilight to have to go without someone she really had feelings for and vice versa.
Maybe I’m not seeing the scope of the story’s structure clearly from a writing perspective. Maybe their failed relationship was necessary as a way to open his heart to romance, as his only attempts at that previously (Melanie) were spurned. I dunno. Still feels like something that could be salvaged, as they both expressed for a good while they wanted to fix it. I know it’s probably not gonna happen, but I still would like to see them all stop being such uptight ninnies and see the benefits of a herd.
Another notch on the mental scars list for Nondis! And Umbra’s designs keep getting more and more sinister. Someone needs to knock this fuck down a few ladders to remind him he’s just mortal, see how he fairs without his magic.
And this story’s really in its final run? Feels...odd. For the longest time we had no idea how long it would stretch on for. I bet people all those years ago wouldn’t have seen this story stretching from a couple hundred thousand to nearly two million! I’ve been reading this for about four years now, so much has happened. I’ve been happy and frustrated, saddened and angered by a lot of events that took place along the road. It’s kind of a mixed bag, really. You really know how to keep people hooked, TheSillyAnon. I hope the end can be as bright as possible, the poor protagonists in this story really deserve some happiness. Hell, I wouldn’t say it’s out of place for everyone to dive into a victory orgy when these trials are all over!
This story has been pretty good with the protagonist changing over time. But the constant, new plot points of "beat the protagonist back into square one" are starting to get stale and no more characters are doing much development. It's felt that way since the start of the Corroto arch with it's oscillation of "build Nondis up, introduce new device to beat him back down, repeat."
Hearing from the author that THIS story is coming to an end within the next possible year or 2 is crazy. I've been following this story for about 7 years now and I find it hard to believe that this story is almost over. This story alone is the only reason why I stay on this site its just a really underrated masterpiece of fanfiction. I can only hope for the best at this point for the author and hopes he/she continues writing after this story possibly.
Now we play the waiting game until the END
Another amazing chapter, as usual.:D
So I was finally able to catch up to the latest chapter. This took me two weeks to catch up.
Here are my thoughts on this story.
I’ll start off with what I like about the story.
It’s a really good human in Equestria story and I don’t mind the “Nondis” name, even though it is an unusual name. As for him, I love his character development throughout the chapters. Nondis’ interaction with the Mane six and royals are interesting and I like the drama between them. There are a lot of arcs in this story and each chapter is usually more than 10,000 words long, which I don’t mind because there is a lot of depth in it. The pacing is slow, but it grabs your attention.
I really love the world-building of Equestria and Nondis’ hometown. I liked some of the images used for the story and I love how there are multiple POVs. I do gotta admit, I laughed at some parts of the story.
I find Nondis’ romantic relationship with Celestia better than Twilight’s. Twilight’s relationship with Nondis doesn’t go very well compared to Celestia’s. It’s interesting at first, it sometimes gets violent. Rarity and Pinkie is also a good candidate as well for Nondis. But I do hope he stays with Celestia.
Here are the things that bother me the most about this fimfic.
The one thing I don’t get is why this isn’t tagged in the “Alt. Universe” since some of the characters feel a lot different than the show counterparts. For example, the ponies are shown to be very dark compared to the show and the history of Celestia’s dark past is also a big factor of making this story an alternate universe. Another would be that the laws and punishments like execution is something that never happens in the show.
Another nitpick is that I hate to bring up are the titles of the chapters are in Roman numerals. It’s not that I don’t like reading Roman numerals, it’s just it can be hard to follow on when I want to look back at the chapters. I also recommend giving each chapter a title. For example, naming one chapter “Journey Arimaspi Mountain” or “Gun Demonstration“, so readers can know out what chapter is about. Since the chapters are long, a title would be better for readers, if they want to go back to that chapter instead of digging for it themselves.
In conclusion, this is one of my favorite Huma in Equestria stories far. I just think that the chapter titles kind of bother me a little.
Since we are currently in the last arc, I hope we get a time skip similar to Season 9 finale or another decent ending that goes in a bang.
How long is this story?
The Dragon... hungers.