Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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At first I was like "NOOO NONDIS DON'T LEAVE!"
but then I was like "YES! HE'S STAYING!"
and next chapter?
Can't freaking wait for it!
Wish I could say I didn't see that coming ... but I did, so ya know ...
Oh thank the gods, I thought it was over...
That ending though, got me all fired up! Man I wish I was future Lupus right now so I can read the next chapter!
4834663 For now, I can confirm tha- Oh look, a moose.
Looking foward to the next chapter!!
Story's done! Time to go light some cars on fire!
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Wow talk about a feels rollacoster what an awesome chapter
4835207 I don't think it's working. Needs more letters and numbers.
4835222 Yeah, I had to delete the comment because apparentley, it didn't work.
And then they had sex! The end!
So, Nondis is staying? I hope he knows what he is in for. Both Rarity and Twilight admitted to loving him. Pinkie still has feelings for him, even though she is with Cheese. And he still needs to confront Shining Armor again. Yep, his life is about to get more complicated.
4835258 Actually, they didn't have sex quite yet.
I am sorry but I have to put this here because this story remind me of it
Oh the drama the fellings
Good chapter is good, very nice
That last bit got me thinking so I must ask, Do we have many chapters ahead from this one? Or just a couple more?
I hope that there are many many many more
Yay!
4835708
To put it delicately, I've set it up like it was a 13-episode format, similar to an anime. You've all finished what I'd like to call, season one. So yeah, I'd say that we were about halfway finished.
Ohhh hell, shit's gonna get really crazy now. Now Nondis will have to constantly deal with an traditionalist, thinking he's always right big brother, a kinda douchebag-ish and insensitive green and purple lizard and a princess that he loves but is insistent on making things overly complicated. And lets not forget Pinkie Pie who still seems to have a thing for him and now Rarity who revealed she does too. Mr Nondis... *Grabs a Microphone and pulls down a curtain to reveal Equestria in all of it's craziness and splendor.* WELCOME TO YOUR NEW HOME!
4835727 Awesoooooommmmmmeeeeeeeee
Eager to see more.^^ And so hoping for a herd eventually. XD
Not a fan of the whole "Humanity sucks" thing Nondis seems to have. I hate when human characters say that in stories, thinking that ponies are better by default with their nonexistent wars and no killing (despite the fact they have beings like NMM, Discord, Chrysallis, Sombra, and Tirrek running around loose).
However this is just the character's viewpoint and I'm not going to hold the story against it. The interactions between Nondis and the ponies are the main reason that I read this story and will continue to do so in the foreseeable future.
Just no more "humanity sucks", ok?
4836062 I understand. And again, we really have to look at it from his perspective. He wasn't always the best treated, so he's expected to hold a grudge here and there.
Gonna be sitting in the dark, drinking my tea, and looking forward to the next chapter.
4836062 Well, come to think of it we can say that he have had it a little worst from a physical perpective (getting beaten, choked and hospitalized) than in his previous life.
BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!
I love when stories include their names into a sentence. Also, this was awesome. I love this story, practically one of my favorites. Thanks for writing it!
This part killed me.
Oh speaking of which I still haven't signed up for Obama care....nah.
By far the most fulfilling and emotional fic I've ever read. Glad to have made it thus far, and hope that this fic's quality shall go undiminished!
Nondis don't fuck up now!
4837439 I can't answer that right now. You'll have to wait and see.
Yay, I was sad it was gonna end, we still got tons more to deal with!
WHOOO! IT'S NOT OVER! FUCK EARTH!! EQUESTRIA'S WHERE IT'S AT!
SING IT WITH ME, EVERYPONY!
BOOM DE-YADA! BOOM DE-YADA!!
Double negative, it sounds odd.
Careful, Nondis! You (almost) dropped the title!
"hey Nondis what are you doing sitting there"
"Pinks said bring a camera and sit here, don't know what for"
"Twilight I'm back, I thought we could get some dinner and catch up.....YOU what are you doing here"
"Hi Shining, I became a full equestrian citizen and decided not to leave"
"YOUR WHAT"
*flash*
"that's going on the wall"
4839632 Meanwhile in the deleted scenes...
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Bigamy /ˈbigəmē/
(noun) the crime of marrying while one has a spouse still living, from whom no valid divorce has been effected; to marry one while with another. Where the main character is from (United States) has a law that forbids one from taking another wife when they already have one.
Polygamy fits the bill of herding, which in this context goes by the zoology definition of having multiple mates. Bigamy was the subject of the conversation being that Blueblood was married to all of those mares, and sought to add Rarity when he already had spouses to begin with.
I knew where you were going with this and I appreciate the intellectual comment, however.
I think you meant to say that "Bigamy is perfectly legal.
Awsome..
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He will have to brush up on political and some combat skill so he can at least defend himself against thugs and not being a liability to the other...in both physical and political mean
4849438 Wow, juz kill all ze fun. Put ze fun in camps zwhy don't you? why spoil
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Alternative end where anon goes back to earth pls?
I enjoyed this story + chapter, but you can't leave me hanging after all this build-up :| Oh well see you next chapter
4849621 And Imma though that cute Luna pic would have helped somehow.
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this one.
Why do I allways fall for these fake overly dramatic ending just for the wighter to turn iit on me
So he has pinkie....well half of her but he also has twilight and rarity...but spike is blocking rarity and twilight....i feel that luna and celastia had more to play in this then you let on...but enough about them what is shing really doing in the bad lands?....maybe sexing it up with a queen of some sorts...that just so happems to find out about nom-noms?
4898323 I guess I'm not the only one, that thought Kohta made crap decisions. The more you know.
On a side note, I'm pumped for the final chapter. I've been sitting in this dark room, endlessly drinking my tea... The wait continues... it's worth waiting for.
update?
Well, now I suppose he and Twilight can officially begin that 'acclimation period' or whatever it was called in that stupid chastity law. Man, Shining's gonna blow his top over this. Hopefully Cadance can keep him under control with threats of couch times.
Next chapter?
つ ◕_◕ ༽つ Gif next chapter! つ ◕_◕ ༽つ
...Wow. I'm not gonna lie, I said a lot of hateful things in the previous chapters but this actually makes up for it and more.