Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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he rightfully deserved to be with Cadance, [Rarity}?
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Point it out please, I wanna correct it if it's there.Nevermind, I got it.
If Nondis doesn't tell Twilight the truth, it will come back and bite him in the ass. More importantly, I want to know who the master mind was that brought Nondis to their world in the first place. Because, in the end, this has the potential to break the elements of harmony.
I shall be waiting.
Oh Ho, Ho! Hijinks!
Do it like they do on the discovery channel!
...then do the same with Rares.
Seriously, I will NOT be objected to this becoming a harem fic. Which is weird, 'cause I normally am.
SEE WHAT YOU DO TO ME, YOU MONSTER!
and now we play the game that eveyone losses in...the waiting game
One cliffhanger is bad enough, now we have several! Hope this doesn't end too bad though LOL.
5473588 It's a herd, but yes! I agree.
Wow things are picking up and I can't wait for what's next.
I'm guessing that Nondis is going to sit down with Spike and they will come to realize how much they have in common. Spike's situation with Rarity mirrors Nondis' situation with Melanie, so maybe they'll come to an understanding.
Or Spike goes on a rampage. It's a coin flip really.
Don't say this too often, but go Blueblood!
The hell were you gonna plug it into, a tree?
I expect that photo will come back at him during one of his visits to Earth.
About time this happened, though I can't wait to see what awaits with a certain lizard's true nature resurfacing
The more Spike tries, the more underserved he proved himself to be... I hope he will realize that....or else...just kill him off, or throw him into jail or something for attempt murder and property destruction
I hope Rarity stop running around and trying to seduce him....because it will break the element....since this fic, equestria doesn't seem to have herd....
5474265 Going back to chapter 12 Herding is permitted, just not preferred.
5474286 hmmm...then there is a chance.....although not big....since to have a successful herd, everymembers must love each other....either as a lover or a very close friend...
Another impressive chapter, eh?^^ And dang to Spike.^^
You know, I think that from if Spike tries to kill Nondis. If that happens and he's turned back to normal, I think Nondis shouldn't forgive him. Like after everything he's done, trying to send him off to die for "stealing" Rarity, constantly threating to burn him, and not apperciating him saving his life. On account of those things, if he tries to kill Nondis, turns back to normal, and tries to apologize; I think it should go: "No. Just no. Do you think that because this is the land of magic and friendship after everything you've done, I'm just gonna say "no hard feelings?" I'm not the same guy as I was when I first arrived. If anyone threatens me, I will meet any threat full on. Far as I'm concerned, stay the fuck away from me." and then he struts off.
This story is giving me conflicting feelings. I'm a Spike fan, admittedly. What Spike is doing is being a major boner, but I can't hate the little dude. Never.
The Greedy Spike thing has me waiting enough, but the big thing for me that's making me anxious for the next chapter is Nondis finally taking away Twilight's virginity.... before they got married. Even if Twilight gave him permission, even if Shining has accepted him... It's like, Celestia's GOT to have some way of knowing that a royal (in this case Twilight) has been deflowered even without spying on them, or else the threat of breaking the chastity vow could just be hidden by lies.
So, unless Twilight is banking on her and Nondis getting immediately hitched with an Amended Vow, she's basically let her passion screw Nondis over. Again. Methinks a strong possibility of the human getting shipped out to the Badlands as punishment seems possible.
Also, I have to wonder if Olive has some history with the Sparkle household; he didn't seem to really care if the one getting shipped out was Shining OR Twlight's fiancee, so long as it hurt HER...
The plot thickens.
Err I'm kinda lost, what truth?
Damnit! I have no idea what to think about this.... Sometimes stories just update too slowly...
(This chapter needs some editing, by the way.)
Next morning spike walks in and sees what they did. She ends up having to send him away, he tells on her, etc, etc.
I can predict in the future that they check Twilight Virginity...
@Amethyst Blade
Welp, then I guess the only problem left now with a Harem/Herd pairing is convincing ole' monogamist-Nondis.
... Well, that and maybe makin' him bi so Cheesy doesn't get left out.
Figures. Pinkie would photobomb a selfie for a laugh.
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This. Just this.
Someone breach & clears the room like the last five times this happened? I swear to God, if the next chapter starts with a BOOM!...
Wooooow, Spike just can't see reason nor fact huh?
Actually, Celly did say a bit earlier that he would have to make an important decision based on his desires. I have a feeling that, whatever happens in that bedroom, he's probably fucked. (Pun entirely intended.)
5480957 Princess Luna said it. But this is not that situation...
Oh, I remember this story now. Everyone remotely sympathetic being a giant pushover in any situation where showing a spine could actually have consequences (i.e. not "can't fail no matter who you piss off because it means prematurely ending the story" training camp) was aggravating as hell the first time around already. Yeah, they're gonna do jack squat about this.
I know a good cheesy song if it came to what we all thinking of
The truth about what?
Well, I blame all the others for not taking Spike feeling seriously and forgetting that, no matter how mature he acts at times, he is still a BABY dragon. Everyone dismissed him and took Nondis' side. At least, that is how Spike feels. He feels that he is losing both Rairty and Twilight to Nondis. And Spike's worst fear is no longer feeling needed or loved by those he cares most for. Cadence telling Spike that he didn't deserve Rarity was the straw that broke the camels back. I hope after all this someone actually talks to Spike instead of blaming him.
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Has everyone forgot that no matter how mature he acts, Spike is still a baby dragon?
Twilight is correct in assuming that there is more than clothes being Spike's problem. Spike's greatest fear is no longer feeling needed or loved by those he cares for most. Spike feels that he lost Rarity to Nondis, but I think deep down, he feels that he lost Twilight as well. So, I believe that Spike, in his mind, was only doing what he had to in order to protect what's his.
5493301 I think it is more of a dragon greed thing
5494393 That is the underlining cause, but Spike didn't get to this point overnight. It's been building for awhile and no one tried to defuse it until he was at the boiling point. And they just kept adding to the fire. And now, he broke.
5494535 The darkside!
Finally I don't blame them for not waiting until marriage I blame the marriage for taking so god damn long
CD,well this got interesting.
Because unless you own a solar charger you'd have no source of power to charge it with, genius.
Neither could a book. My old gameboy survived a rain storm, though.
Well technically, if you dunk him in the mirror pool, place that body in stasis, trap his soul as he's dying down the line in a soul gem, then cast a spell on it so he'd possess the body of whomever it was placed on, then you actually could. Granted, you'd be using two kinds of dark and probably VERY forbidden magic, but you could do it.
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Really at this point, the only thing that Nondis needs to do to destroy that world in general is to get hit by a car or something while visiting his world with the portal open, and then one of the frat boys wanders in by accident when intending to grab something for him to enjoy while he's recovering and sees the other world. He'd record it with his phone, post it online for his Five Minutes Of Fame, and then things would spiral out of control from there. All it would take from there to cause disaster would be some idiot-hunter deciding he wanted the head of a Unicorn on his wall. Or just the portal staying open too long in general, if you recall the conversation Celestia had with him when he was in front of the portal and considering leaving for good.
Immmm... mate you cooked or somting?
"Shining Armor, the parliament has decided to hold you accountable for the failed security measures of both Canterlot and Ponyville. As such, you will hereby be punished to take up the responsibility of leading a search party to locate and capture the changeling commander responsible."
Uh oh...
Spike's going Yandere Chan.
This is still one of the most Out of Character Cadance I have ever read about.
Aside from the the really crazy stories (extreme mature and whatnot).
I mean what the hell? Is that a 'Love-nazi'-torture-bipolar-PTSD Cadence?
She just told a baby dragon off in the worst way possible, is she nuts? Answer: YES!
Basically, she proclaims to be the only one who has the right call regarding the immense topic of love, as if nobody has the right to interfere with her viewpoints and intentions.
It's almost as if she doesn't even understand any condition of love sickness and what it can do to you, as well as the very poor lag of knowledge regarding the possessive nature of dragons.
She basically told Spike: "I am right, I know better, you are wrong, don't fuck up again!"
Yeah sorry Cadence, you can kiss his scaly ass as well as my own.
Hear character even contradicts her old story how she earned her alicorn statues, by forgiving that pony who supposedly did all those really bad things to her, and then proclaimed her love to her foster village.
Well, I don't see any of that in this here Cadence anymore. In fact, she has practically reached dictator statues, especially regarding her specialty regarding Love.
... sorry but I really have a hard time even seeing Cadence remotely like this, especially since this is neither an alt universe, nor a parody.
This Cadence actually seems like she has deranged mental condition, the same went for Shining when he trained the human.
Not buying it.
ew Apple Fag, go get android device
Welp, they fucked up. Shit is about to hit the fan
Felt bad for Spiike. Little fella isn't quite mature enough for a serious relationship, only as 'spikey-wikey'. He tries so hard to win over Rarity, but you can't force love. You can only make somepony love you if that pony already had love in her heart for you that she was unconscious about.
Also, this parlament reminds me of the House of Lords in the UK. It is one of the most corrupt forms of government imaginable.
Fucking Celestia, restore absolute monarchy and kick these scoundrels out of your palace. Praise the Sun!
Oh shit. Spikes gonna go Kaiju on us.
Oh yeah, I forgot about the risk to her title! She’s walking on really thin ice right here.
Dangerous