Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Ugh... tiring... Welp, onward to next chapter.
The last part reminds me of something I heard in a mission in the newest Destiny DLC.
Also:
Mines, maybe? Never heard of an explosive called a Nine.
yay new chapter, also lotsa weapons
hoping the next chapter comes out soon and Nondis finally puts this changeling shit to bed and saves Diamond Tiara... my god those words taste foul
6068836 A nine in this context would be a nine-bang grenade (yes, those actually do exist). They are an upgraded, so to speak, flash grenade built for the purpose of concussing an individual, causing blindness, deafness, nausea, and disorientation for a window ranging from 2-10 minutes. Of course, the name comes from the nine discharges (the bangs) that are set off for the purpose of making sure that the ones quick enough to look away the first time are caught by one of the flashes.
It is a diversionary tool used pretty much to knock people on their rear end, and it is damn effective at what it does. It's not like how it's portrayed in CoD. If you get hit, you're down for a few minutes (not reeling for two seconds and back onto the fight). And it can, and will cause permanent damage to your sight and hearing.
Not a pleasant thing to be around when it goes off.
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How do... I don't... that's brutal. I love it. My mistake then.
This chapter was amazing, love the interactions between everyone xD. Also I laughed so hard at shining's extended names, Cadie took the slot for best pony in this chapter lol
It's dangerous to go alone, take this PBFG.
I shall be waiting for that rescue mission... rescue/escort... rescort?... the mission.
I love how Cadance was actully jealous of Another guy giving Shining some ear scratches, i've actully palyed around with that tought Before, Cadance being so overprotective of her hubby that she won't even allow other males get Close to him.
Every time I read another chapter I recall the one where Twilight got her wings clipped...helped along by princess Celestia...
I cannot help wondering if she is ever going to fly again...or if Celestia will ever get that wake up call to geld the nobles with a pair of rusty red hot shears...
are you going to make a part 2 demostration with non-lethal weapons?
Expecting alot of changling-kickassing.
good good....
Aha! So it was the butler after all! In you're face anti-stereotypes!
Ricky and Cliff should go with him!
And a good ol' crowbar.
Another amazing chapter, as usual.:D
The rifling on a weapon really doesn't at all effect the projectile's penetration, it's there so that in flight, gyroscopic forces due to the projectile spinning help keep it flying straight.
Well Looks like Nondis shifted from paragon to Renegade. Shits about to get wild!
6069539 Agreed. Still a fun chapter and I'd love to see a demonstration for the explosives and non-lethal weapons.
As if the Everfree forest wasn't dangerous enough......
Good chapter, and I look forward to seeing what happens with the Changelings. The only complaint I might have is that we don't get to see the power of the pony side. (said in Darth Vader voice, because it needed to be.)
Great story :D loving all the work you went to for the explanations/descriptions of the weapons. Keep up the awesome work :D
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I'm too lazy to find a picture right now, but most of them have holes down the sides which house the "flash and bang". Theres the standard 1,2,3,6 and 9 "banger" that I know of that are used :D Sounds awesome but they are scary as hell.
You need to be a b t more careful, I think. At times, the drama you've been writing threatens to eclipse everything else around it. It hasn't reached soap opera levels yet, but there's been a few times where I've nearly walked away because of that. My personal opinion, mind you, but drama should be a small supplement, not a heaping portion with every meal.
Good job on being consistent with your writing, beyond that one major thing that bugs the hell out of me.
6077460 Thanks for the advice, I'll pay heed to it.
I wanted to say this earlier but couldn't because of reasons but you could've just asked...I'm a professional gun nut...I mean, my fuckin' avatar is a Mateba Unica Six .44 magnum with scope, loaded with jacketed hollow-points. *mumbles* I swear I get no respect. Anyway good chapter and:
Good Night
Good Luck
6082518 I suck, don't I?
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You probably suck less than this:
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(UTS-15)
Trust me. If you have a positive look on this gun search this up on YouTube and you'll change your mind, it's fuckin' garbage.
Bring in the changlings!!!
(By the way. I am a good source for changling knowledge from color of blood.to.how they make babies. So if you need any info hit me up)
6109088 You may want to read up to Chapter 30 to know what's going on and why.
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I devoured the whole thing. I was just saying with the current knowledge there... And even knowing the law now after reading the whole fic to this point, I think calling it a political marriage would have been an interesting potential end-run on said law.
If they had shown the power of the armaments and said it was definitely a good idea to have good will with this species and we are having a political marriage -- I think the nobles wouldn't stand in the way of it.
Now the question is, are his two human friends going to let him go after the changelings alone, or will they take the chance to actually use those weapons, and go with him?
there is a question i always wondered and always forgot to ask
will twilight ever meet Nondis"s Parents? since Nondis's knows twilights parents
and if so will she meet them and her pony form?
Since i seem to remember in a earlier chapter his human friends said his mother missed him deerly
i always imagine he will be talking to her mom and she would be scoulding him and asking where has he been all this time and then he talkes about he is going to get married to a lavender pony princess with a horn and wings . she asks is he doing drugs then twilight comes in saying hello future mother in law im ur soon to be daughter in law . then her mother faints or says did that horse just talk? and twilight gets pissed ( and then u end the chapter right then and there)
I am hoping that the battle for the next chapter will be like this skip to 1:40
pokes story
I think it's dead, gentlecolts.
I love It's Complicated!!!!!!!!!! can not wait for more
6194720 More of knocked unconscious and driven into a medically-induced coma. Then it woke up, slowly worked it's way back onto it's feet. Granted, it walked out of the hospital on crutches but it can still function on it's own.
But it's not dead.
YAY!
oh ho! It's time to kick ass, then shoot it, then crush a skull beneath his boot.
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If they seriously consider themselves his friends, they will go along. They've got more than enough guns to arm my entire family with room for at least one secondary.
I'm glad you did some weapons research for this. Your previous usage of weaponry was... Bad...
I wonder if Thorax is in that abandoned castle.
In fact, I wonder what would happen if Nondis came across Thorax in the first place. It might be a bit awkward. Will Thorax be scared of him, or will Nondis be wary of him?
7605521 that is a good question
Past couple of chapters I've read keep diving into less story, more "look at my cool stuff."
I Like story, I don't like all that weapon stuff that takes big chunks of chapter and does little to progress the story.
Hahahaha!!! YES CANDENCE, EMBRACE THE GLORY OF THE BARRETT M107!!
And then she see's the damage it can cause, turning her away from the Barrett's glory. Tbh, I feel the same. Firing one on a shooting range at paper targets is one thing, but actually seeing the damage it causes to tissue is a whole 'nother demon.....
Awwww Cadence feels left out.