Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Another great chapter. Stinks that I had to rush through it due to it being so late, but still read it all.(just less internal visualizing on my part) And gee, changeling attack. Perfect thing to visualize before sleeping. *filled with sarcasm* XD
Hey its a transitional chapter, you can't got from SUPER mega awesome action to peaceful downtime without a few boring transitional chapters. And now Back to the action! !
Also, scary overprotective sister-in-law FTW!
The chapter was good and you should, CHANGE PLACES!, feel good about it.
Trashing Discord's tea party? Are these changelings mad?! LET THE CHAOS BE UNLEASHED!
Wow, the poor guy will have some seriously f****d up in laws once he and Twillight are married.
He should have asked Cadance a favour. He should've asked that she sharpen his fingers, should he cheat on Twilight, so that he might dig through his chest and tear out his own heart.
Egh.
Maybe not your best chapter, but still good reading.
So I guess Discord isn't one to get to involved with the affairs of the ponies, cause a simple snap of the fingers and the changelings turn into cheese. So let's save that deus ex machina for another day.
Careful, Nondis. That's close to "turning into a pony" thinking.
Flutters no
All the chariots are rented out.....what....what....that's so stupid. I'm sure celestia can commandeer them, or has some in reserve...or you know, the parasite can just fly their.
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Fluttershy: "Please pony responsibly!"
oh god the pun
God, I never thought that I would ever agree with blueblood.
Since Cadance and Shining are the Appearance-Reversed-Role Good Cop/Bad Cop... that makes Nondis the Halfway Trip Ticket Master at the Elevation of Ten Thousand Feet
At first when they were talking about Sombra, I thought it was gonna bring up Grogar as the 2nd but he's more of a demonic sorcerer than a necromancer/dark magic user.
Plus he wasn't really well known when this chapter came out. Still it would be badass if he gets mentioned somewhere in the later chapters, very exciting.
Really liking the story so far.