Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Well look what decided to come out today.
The complication just got complicated.
melanie pisses me off, she had her chance and blew it up, and nondis being a pushover unable to say no to her has been really annoying from several chapters ago, clingy women have always been an annoying setting for any fic sadly twilight and rarity fall upon this description, but at least neither of them rejected nondis just because he wasnt up to her standards yet
People, bring out your maps. Why? Because you are all going to have to cross certain sections once shit BLOWS UP :3
I will murder babies in front of thier parents just so i can read the next chapter
drama
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Thing is, though, even if the rest of Texas is Teabagger Heaven (TM), Austin at least tries to be more normal (for certain values of "normal," at any rate). They wouldn't put up with that kind of shit for long.* I should know: I was born and (mostly) raised in Austin, like Nondis.
* Ask me about the time a slate of Christian Coalition-approved candidates ninja'd their way onto the local school board when I was a freshman in high school sometime.
6509399 Shit meet Fan, i think they will have a wonderful relationship for a little bit till everyone/everypony gets their crap together and work things out lol
Oh yes, great and awesome chapter <3, that battle between mel and twi was great to read.
Another amazing chapter, as usual.^_^
Melanie VS Twilight
cat fight...cat fight!...CAT FIGHT!...CAT FIGHT!
PLACE YOUR BETS HERE FOLKS WHO DO YOU THINK WOULD WIN THIS DEADLY BATTLE
Go Twilight!
The second Mel tried to play the bestiality card, she lost any sympathy from me.
YES!! O My Guwd, such delicious emotions this chapter that you put up. To be straight forward you forgot to put up the conversation between rare and twli of what happen on that night. Something like that on the next morning is not soo easliy forgotten. But...then again, things can get in the way and have no choice in the matter to hold your breath until later on. Guess thats what you are going for. Love the jealousy mate, been soooo long that their/there was a story involves in realistic relationships. Cheers mate
Is okay for Twilight to fly like that? I mean, she was not "punished" because her relation with Nondis?
6509692 I'm from Portland and we too have the slogan "Keep Portland weird" and if you ever have the chance see Portland for yourself you'll know why keep-portland-weird.com/images/spaceship.jpg and this was taken near old town China Town
6510156 she can fly with a LOT of effort for a short time, most likely she only flew the first time she spoke to melanie and the rest just teleport/levitate to let melanie knows how much of a magical powerhouse she is, seriously melanie needs to understand that when you friend-zone someone you friend-zone yourself at the same time
Damn. She was in Equestria for less than 2 hours, and just noped their relationship laws. Get with the program Melanie. In Equestria, doing the nasty with anything sentient and (in most cases) of age, is pretty much fair game.
Let the good times roll.
6510500 Nope, what Melanie need to understand is that no one can try to get Nondis from the Purple Princess Pony.
6510668 lol melanie is a racist jerk, twilight only need to tell nondis about her bestiality comments, to see how fast he convinces discord into giving the racist a mind wipe about all nondis related
6509845 Twenty bits on Twilight!
A birthday present, why thank you!
Melanie just really rubs me the wrong way, i really don't care much for her attitude.
The moment Rarity manipulated Nondis, their ship were sunk for me. The moment Melanie tried to play the prejudice card...Her ship is sunk by my torpedos.
6510156 clipped wings do recover with time just not as fast as this
6510687 The problem is that Melanie could say Twilight is only jelaous and lie. And she seems to be more speciesist that racist.
At this point, I don't want Nondis to end up with either of them.
Melanie for being so narrow-minded and insensitive towards other sapient species.
Twilight for being so possessive and jealous around Nondis and trying to force him into marrying her.
Rarity is still up in the air. I don't like how she got the date out of Nondis, but at the same time she does try to do right by him. That could change by the next chapter.
Pinkie is still fine in my book. If she breaks up with Cheese then I might end up rooting for her. She's the only one who is actually concerned for Nondis and what he wants in life rather than being selfish like the others have shown. I might end up rooting for her.
But yeah, Nondis better stop this now before it gets worse.
And the first round goes to Twilight! But it's not over yet, folks. This battle for Nondis' heart is just beginning! Now get ready for round two!
I dont think melanie ACTUALLY is prejudiced against ponies, she was probably just using that as qn excuse
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THERE IS A POINT WHERE NONDIS SHOULD HAVE STOPPED THIS, AND HE HAS CLEARLY PASSED IT,
BUT LET'S KEEP GOING AND SEE WHAT HAPPENS.
6516085 Wanna place a bet *wink wink*
6516105 twilight since magic
6516408 Pinkie since Pinkie
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I am betting that they all kill each other.
Would make everything much easier, don't you think?
6516671 Perhaps, but what about this fic makes you think that anything's gonna be easy?
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Nothing.
Which is why I'm hoping they all kill each other.
End it already.
You gave me hope last chapter with Nondis' rousing speech. Stop crushing it.
6516671 uhhh okay
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He's playing Russian roulette...so far he's getting clicks...but soon he'll get a bang and never see it coming...
Play with a loaded gun...your gonna get shot...
You did it again you magnificent bastard xaharts.org/arts/i/i2/moar_anime_girl.jpg
6542392 I meant the aforementioned group of countries. Guess I should specify that.
China, USSR, and GB was never apart of the Axis powers. Germany, Italy, and Japan was.
6518017 It's funny you say that since your image is a Revolver.
Twilight just made a huge mistake: She made her Human 'opponent' afraid of her. If it was a guy, then he'd back off. But she made a woman afraid of her. Things are going to get ugly.
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Quick! Get the popcorn Discord, we gon ave a fight!
Oh right, Vine was a thing,
i mean at least we have "Byte" now.
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oh right Byte was a thing. at least now we have Tik Tok.
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I've been holding off from leaving any comments while reading along with this story. It came highly recommended to me, and clearly, for good reason.
So far, your story has impressed me with its delivery, despite a few choices that I thought had been presented better. More of a creative choice where it becomes a decision of where it's better to show than to tell or simply describe with simple exposition as opposed to expanding upon a scene with a flashback in an already 10k+ chapter to explain how something occurred. That, or the repetitive use of the terms "clips" instead of "magazines" for... shit that I know is a common misconception, and I can easily follow along despite the incorrect nomenclature. MOVING ON!
I've been trying to figure out the human characters and their motives, along with their personalities and how they adapt to this new reality they fall into with the ponies. Nondis, he was easy to accept with the introduction of the story as he set the stage and tone for the story. Cliff and Rickey took me a bit longer to accept, but I honestly know those of similar types. Melanie, though.... She was the biggest mixed bag of hardest to believe yet most realistically written at the same time. Both in terms of how she choose to friend-zone Nondis yet keep that flame alive until he changed how he presented himself, and even further when he proved himself. Finally, her insecurities showing true, or at least that's how I saw it, when she kissed him and tried to seduce him, finally requesting their date after finding out that Nondis was having relationship issues with, at the time, Bella.
Now, finding out that Bella was actually a pony named Twilight and all the more issues that do and potentially could exist, witnessing how she stepped up even further, only to see Twilight step up her game as well.
... I've never read anything like this where such a long developed buildup had such a rewarding payoff for such a confrontation. AND I'M NOT EVEN HALFWAY DONE WITH THE STORY!
I will say, though, from one big story writer to another, I'm really enjoying the world-building and how you've crafted the characters to feel so balanced and well rounded.
Also, 1,445 likes... damn... I remember the day I crossed 100. Then again, I came in rather late to the game.
Off to the next chapter.