Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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...and this thought flashed at the last sentence...
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I like this...but what dies twilight mean she wouldn't mind that? Is she saying she would be ok with a three way relationship? Or maybe even a harem of sorts?
5880838 i guess she means she is ok with being in a herd with rarity, remember that herds are normal on this fic
5880922 then that would lead to spike lossing his shit and killing everything
Missing 'hundreds' between the bolded words, I think...
walked
Slide...a slider is either a turtle or a very small and tasty hamburger.
*former weapons instructor twitches an eyebrow* the weapon was unloaded and made safe... the term you used is not incorrect, but it made my eyebrow twitch....*twitch, twitch*
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Remember that spike is still a baby dragon, both being greedy and naïve to the concept of a herd (or sharing in general)... this is just like when he got greedy on his birthday, he will protect what's his (affections towards Rarity)at any cost.
5880968 so he will do that by killing everyone in is path.....i feel like rarity should let spike down before any thing happens between her and the MC
5880962 Okay I messed up on "walked" (yay sleep editing). But Cadance purposely left "hundreds" out for the sake of shock value.
:She's so giddy about seeing new things.
5880922
Well, they're possible, but pretty unpopular. In this fic, what sent Rarity over the edge with Blueblood was him asking her to be his next wife. Hell, Rarity's all but determined to woo Nondis from Twilight for her own, to the point that the thought of her joining a herd with them never crossed her mind.
But the question is, would her desire to be with Nondis and still be friends with Twilight overcome her pride in not being seen as a "trophy" wife?
.... love that cliffhanger.^^
Fack you Twilight for that last line now I gotta wait for the next chapter!?!!
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>Started writing.
>Gotten past that point and proceeded to write more on it.
>Looked at word count
>10K words.
>"Meh, good enough."
>Opened new chapter, cut and pasted from a certain point.
>Left with a cliffhanger.
5880980 Hey, no worries...found a few other things. The chapter was very entertaining.
Also: Twilight's reveal about Rarity was rather...interesting.
Poor Anon.
5880977 Um... she already did.
5880949 meh i can live with nondis blowing up spike brains all over the place
Ahh, so this is how we start to develop a harem
Soooo, Twillight would be perfectly fine knowing one of her very best friends was nailing her boyfriend? Wow, she's wierd!
Hmm, wonder if Nodis will have to deal with that...
Oh, Spike. I forsee a showdown between the two of them soon
I immediately retrieved it and placed it back into the cartridge. [ magazine or clip ]
What an usual set of advice from one who is now considered an prisoner of war. [ unusual ] ???
5880977
she did, like, twice
5880729
Dat last line... I don't trust it.
Is that entrapment I smell?
Sigh...I dislike this type of its complicated. I just wanna go back to the story of an awkward man loving and learning to live in a strange world. Not this Rambo ridiculousness.
More fuel for Spike's fire. Oh, when this blows up in everyone's face.
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Man, I'm feeling you there. What does this story even have to do anymore with what made people like it in the first place?
Disarmed weapon made me think "Oh my god, that gun had a gun! Or did you mean it had arms? I'm so confused...".
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I agree with what originally drew me into the story, and that's why I loved it. I remember when chapter 14 was released, I thought it was coming to a close. Nope. It was the beginning of a new story arc, that was still like the first, which I also love. Then somewhere down the line, it changed a bit. I still love the story, don't get me wrong, but that change did throw me & a few people off.
There's the Portal arc, which is the great start to this story. That built off the different aspects, of finding a way to cope with new surroundings, until Nondis could get home.
There's the Approval arc, which kept with what we've come to expect from the previous arc. This arc focused more on character building for Nondis, & how much he was willing to endure, so he could be with Twilight.
Then there's Approval part 2/Changeling arc, which is where it shifts from the expected, to the unexpected. This is where we learn about backstabbing bitchery, & underhanded bitchery. Corrupted governments, corrupted allies, & another invasion. There's also Nondis & his deadly collection of guns. It's Complicated, fits this arc like a glove.
Overall, I still love the story. I just love the first two arcs, more.
5887242 Actually, the arcs I wrote them in were similar to what you had, but as of now the changeling arc is all into corruptions. There are two other arcs that I will get into later, but after corruption is finished.
Ugh...you make me sick Author, you disgust me to no end. I hope you step on a lego and other pointy objects. You might be thinking why am I saying bad things to you. Well for here's the reasons.
1. I'm batman
and 2. im a addicted to reading awesome stories.
Can't wait for the next update, I know life has its moments of getting into everyone's way but do hope for the next one to come up soon.
Cheers mate
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Brotha-man of course your batman, so I'm fucking Joseph Stalin.
5881164 Hey you remember what that voice in his head said, right?
*At chapter end*
Wat?