Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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So it begins.
No! Not An Cliffhanger!
Aaah, great stuff as ever. Thank you for being so awesome!
Dammit Twi, why couldn't you have had a talk like that with him before you decided to dump him?
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I await the outcome eagerly.😈
I wonder if Nondis is contemplating of decking Vanessa until she keels over?
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I love it
...Cliffhanger once again. XD
This story might kill me with raw emotion, SillyAnon. I have work tommorw, thank you very much, I can't die.
What's that? Priorities? What're those?
Ooohh, yeah. Truth will out. Though the question really is how much Vanessa's told them -- they might be able to pass that off as an honorific instead of a title, perhaps.
I'm glad that Celestia picked up on the same thing as Alex there: Nondis is definitely acting off. I'd maybe put his behavior as much more like how it was at the beginning of the story, like he's slipping back into old, defensive habits... or maybe I'm going crazy too.
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Seconded, but as Cliff might put it, Nondis and Twilight were 'codependent as fuck.' They were so afraid of pushing each other away that they let all their aggravations boil over and come out in precisely the wrong manner. Not saying that Twilight's improved much (or that Nondis has, for that matter), but things are definitely relaxed enough now that the two can actually have a heart-to-heart.
Finally, in at least one way, Nondis is an idiot. Of course Celestia is an exhibitionist: after having a few centuries of nopony willing to look her in the eye, of everyone putting her on a pedestal and refusing to treat her as a living, breathing mare, you're damned straight she's going to revel in everybody staring at her. Then again, it's probably hard to make that connection when the blood flow to one's higher brain is cut off.
Jesus, just how fucked do you want Nondis to be? I get a feeling you're enjoying torturing this poor guy. I'm left wondering just how long yer gonna keep shoving the unlubed prick up his ass before you finally give him some actual good in his life.
I would just like to say that colored text for indicating who is speaking is poor writing. Especially since when I download the story for offline reading I have no idea who is speaking (even more so since there are 4 speakers in one conversation), as the color dosen't show up on readers. Also, I'm pretty sure it's against site rules. (Not 100% sure about that.)
Keep the colors if you really want them, but you should also indicated who is speaking with words as well.
That cuts two ways, sweetheart. And given that you were the one that ended your relationship in the first place, you've got no right to be saying that to him.
Nondis Mind:
Okay, this was a very nice chapter. It's refreshing seeing Twi and Nondis not so bitter and passive-aggressive, speaking more as friends. But I'm excited to see Twi is still willing to give it another chance, and Nondis hasn't really said 'no' to it. Twilight and Rarity are going to drive this poor man insane. Threeway when? (Jk)
And I can only assume when other mares start adopting their own human forms, they'll appear as drawn by lvl? A great artist, by the way. Please keep up the wonderful work, and thank you for being so dedicated to it for so long now!
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Though, I don't think that look sits Twilight very well. I imagine her more as Elizabeth from BioShock:
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Sure, it isn't nosebleed inducing, but I think Elizabeth fits Twilight persona perfectly.
I can't help but picture Nondis' parents as the 2 from "THAT 70s SHOW".
What a sweet mare.
Wow you sound like Opal Bloom.
Might be parasites, better get that looked at.