Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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I was gonna say something about this sentence, but if your color settings are on "High Contrast - Black" you miss the last
I was thinking that twilight well get the dick already and right when shes about to cum her mom kicks in and just takes out a camera then starts to record laughing like a madmare
GG Velvet.. GG..
And for that day on he was never able to stay erect from oral stimulation. the trauma from having his Dick CHOMPED will forever haunt him.
That entire scene with Twilight's mom...
GODDAMMIT TWILIGHT VELVET!!!!
give me more of Velvet and Crescent!
lol At this rate, I could see Velvet making the action into a threesome at this rate, if only to make him horny enough to make sure he and her daughter went all the way. XD
It's cumplicated.
Stupid fucking grammar, i can't believe i have to go back
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Whoa...Ummm...Okay? So, that was a thing...not sure what kind of thing it was but...is any of this real? I mean, this does exist, right? Yes? Okay.
Wow, Velvet is a grade A bitch.
Thumbs up for another great chapter.
5291313 What?
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Allow me to translate:
Wow! Just wow, man! Man, I'm gonna have to clean this mess. I got too much water all over my screen. I laughed so hard, I knocked my water all over the computer.
5293059 Thanks! It was like he made his comment by smacking his face on his keyboard several times, let spellcheck try to find words in the resulting mess, and then deleted the extra characters.
I hate 2014 years.
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I don't mean to. I thought you had water shorting out your keyboard.
5294325 Yes.
You couldn't let him have just one 'happy' moment? I'm so furious at Velvet I wish he'd leapt up and assaulted her with a sword for this. This is literally a precious 'first' moment they were having together that her mother stomped all over so hard Twilight was literally in tears.
Sure they wound up bonding a bit more over it in the end, but I don't think that even begins to offset the shit they just had to put up with. I seriously hope Twilight Velvet gets her comeuppance. And no, I don't mean like "Gets her cum up... ance... hurr hurr." I mean I hope she walks into an opening door and winds up with two black eyes and a broken nose. Bitch.
twi's mom best pony ten out of ten
"Twilight, swallow." : best punchline ever ! Velvet : best mother-in-law ever ! XD
And what with your statement about batponies' ?! XD
So awkward it feels good. At first I was then I was then I
5306539 ...Dude, it's a National Lampoon-styled rom-com. Chillax, bro.
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*Solemn nod with soldier's salute*
Oh my god this chapter
I don't get this type of comedy so i'm gonna have to call it quits now. seriously, what the fuck?
Ok, this gag is just cruel and fucked up by this point. Both to Twi and Nondis. And I wasn't even surprised anymore. Does it even worth to repeat the same joke again and again in the exact same way? It just renders your main characters as brainless dumbfucks and that's sad.
Why it does that? Well...
Can't they lock the door for once? Put a silence and teleport prevention on it. Or just teleport away where nobody will look for them. Does they not have any common sense? Like at all? Were there nothing wrong with the decision to go at it at the Twi's parents house? Especially without locking the door. Especially with such sheer amount of experience and utter troll of a mom (with they both aware of that). What could possibly go wrong?! They ain't sharpest pillows in this needlestack, are they?
A good chapter. The pacing was just right. Twi's parents walking in on them was fitting to the story. And Twilight finally came off her sex-starved haze and actually treats Anon like a partner for once.