Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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>.> I hope Spike get hit by a train...
His thoughs & actions are selfish, cruel, greedy, immature,...and being young does not excuse him.
I really hope he will receive punishment...I mean, the guy saved his life and repay him like that...He need to be punish, preferably by having a train hitting him at over 300Km/h.
I LIKE TRAINS.
Spike is going to get it.......
Thanks for the update!
~8chill
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Dick move Spike.....
time to kill that little shit
Eh, battlefield promotions do not exonerate the previous commander from his responsibilities. The attack happened while Shining was still captain and to shove it off on Nondis (promoted after the officers had been killed and after most of the destruction had taken place).
As someone who was familiar with the Uniformed Code of Military Justice, I would be calling foul with a bullhorn from the highest mountain.
Then again, this works...because it's complicated.
Spike, go get fucked by a 50 foot pole.
5448287 That will be explained in next chapter. True, it doesn't exonerate the actions of one individual mishaps and places it on the shoulders of one other individual. But there's so much more than what we already know now.
Translation: Stick around and see what unfolds and how.
5448308 Either way, it's a dick move by Spike.
And I am enjoying your story immensely.
5448321 Jealousy can make you into one. At least with Spike, it's been a combination of four years, plus 9-10 months of seeing his interest fawning over the same guy. At least with Trenderhoof it was a fleeting crush, which Spike had known all along was going to be a failure
It's frustrating seeing your interest chasing after something that isn't there.
I do hope that Spike snaps out of his bitterness soon. But, I can understand why he's bitter considering the circumstances. But still, he's taking it rather far, considering how he is. But.... bitterness can often blind an individual when caught up in the moment, eh?^^
Redrum...Redrum...Ekips Redrum
I think Spike is a bit smarter than I gave him credit for. It was a dick move, don't get me wrong and I hope he suffers for it, but it was also kinda clever.
5448343 Oh, I know. I'm not ashamed to admit I've been in Spike's shoes. Thank god that was a looong time ago.
THAT CLEVER LITTLE PURPLE $|-|!T!!!! Dirty pool dude. Just dirty.
I want someone/somepony to knock spikes lights out. If he gets found out he deserves much more than a slap on the wrist or a scolding.
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But politically you can't send a Brigadier General on a mission like this any more than a Princess. While not as important as royalty he is a Key member of the Military Cabinet. Captains are expendable, hence why they have laws that hold them accountable for security failures.
Oh and we'll played Spike, well played. I was afraid he was going to blab Rarity's secret crush on Nondis, but this was 10 times the dick move. I salute the maneuver, and hope you remember how good it felt when he comes back a war hero with Crysilis wrapped around his waist. And you find yourself even more ignored as every mare in town tries to pry her from him.
5448788 Yeah, it will backfire big time.
Besides, I don't think Chrysalis is even aware of the revenge attempts. She's probably (if she's smart) keeping a low profile.
Spike just went straight up stupid. If Nondis dies...Spike will not get the love and affection he thinks has been stolen from him. Quite the opposite.
5448494 Damn, Spike is crafty I don't want to be on his bad side.
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I doubt he thinks Nondis will die, it's more of a little kid kinda thinking hell be out of the way, maybe come back crying. Maybe deep down he hopes Nondis won't come back and he'll be there to comfort Rarity and Twilight. But I doubt the thought that Nondis dieing is a factor there.
5448830 Given his age, he probably does not understand the consequences. However, Spike will need to take some sort of lesson from this. I don't think Twilight is going to be very happy with him for a while.
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I'm kind of hoping he gets dragged along, does some bonding with Nondis, becomes real Bros. Would be kinda cool if Spike got to do some growing up.
What has my interest here is more nondis's reactions to spike, while others may hold grudges to his actions
Nondis has made it clear he understands his situation. They both made mistakes that they didnt realize the consequences of, and while spikes was worse... i think this will come down to a 1on1 between nondis and spike with emotions being thrown throuh the air.
Twilight has lived alongside you all your life Spike, so she's gonna know your bullshitting. Deliberatly throwing your foster sisters love to the wolves just for some cheap, vindication of "Thats what you get for stealing my love." Well, best enjoy that feeling as much as you can. Cause the saying: You get, what you give, is gonna smash into you. You constantly treated Nondis like shit, and did this to get back at him; now your gonna pay for it.
i guess the best outcome for rarity would be to convince twilight and nondis to make a herd, now that would be a very nice way for nondis to get back at spike since he is not only banging his Mother/Elder sister/ Boss figure but the love of his life and both are ok with it
Twilight can't possible think that Spike is innocent in which he just told that stuff. It has already been mentioned below, but they both lived together for their entire lives. Which means that they know eachother better then anyone else.
The poor little dragon make a mistake, it's normal because it's a baby dragon of course
God damn, Spike is evil!
Really makes me think though, how many of his 'mistakes' in the show could have been like this?
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True. Twilight will see threw this deception. However, when Spike reveals that he knows for a fact that Rarity has her sights set on Nondis, Twilight will be put into a bind. We've already seen that she's possessive of him to the point of not wanting him to get hurt when it's his job to protect others. Just imagine what will happen when she finds out one of her best friends is trying to steal her man. And while it's been established that Nondis could marry more than one pony, it will raise problems. Especially since Twilight is now a newly crowned princess, and it's her friend he'd be marrying, which in turn would change their own relationship.
And then there's the issue of how Nondis will react. He's now focused on trying to find out why he's here, and his own mind has told him this scenario is like from a harem anime series. Of course, the difference is Nondis already picked the girl he wants to live with. But he'll now be looking for parallels between his life and that of a harem series, like having multiple alien girls interested in him, they all speak the same language, there's a romantic rival for the affections of one of the girls interested in him.
Wow, first time i've ever felt such spite for Spike, makes me wonder how the others will react to this.
First he was just downnright rude, and now he's responsible for sending a already wounded man straight into the jaws of peril? Wow! He's SO gonna get it from SO many diffrent ponys!!
What a jerk.
At least it wasn't '12345'.
But there was no captain when the first attack happened...
Also, spike is fucked...
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Except that Rarity has already expressed disdain for those who form herds. She'd be making a hypocrite of herself if she went that route. (Not that that's stopped people from pursuing certain courses of action before...)
oh wait I'm too late...
5452554 better to be called an hypocrite than losing her chance, and to be honest she is only talking based on the peer pressure of fancy pants and fleur since she has never been in one to have a proper opinion
I can't wrap my head around the idea that there is some court that decides things rather than just Celestia and Luna. I just don't get it, why on earth would the immortal god-like beings that have ruled for millennia feel the need to put power in the hooves of mortals? Though there are a couple reasons I can imagine, the idea that nobles would have the power to declare a war or to sentence someone to punishment is ludicrous. If they were around just to give their opinion or simply make demands in the typical entitled nobleman fashion, that'd make sense, but that they would hold any actual say in anything is bizarre.
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I object! That was... objectionable!
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Maybe. But she's also observed how Blueballs treats the mares of his herd, and that could've colored her opinion of herding.
When Twilight realizes that Spike is the one holding the knife in Nondis' back, she is going to go ele-mental.
5448391 I've been meaning to ask, is that pronounced as red-rum or re-drum? i.imgur.com/kWVgL.jpg
5453632 Just look back to when Britain had ownership of the American Colonies. You had King George calling the shots and the Parliament being the main legislature as a means of checking the king. Celestia and Luna would be no different in this case. The parliament is there to check the royals and prevent them from having absolute power.
Sort of similar to how the US President (executive branch) has to operate alongside with the Supreme Court (judicial) and Congress (legislative).
5454313 You've...never seen The Shining, have ya, mate?
5456045 I have. I was just joking.
Honestly nobody randomly sputters that shit without an ulterior motive, anyone with the common sense of a tree would know that.
Nondis was also promoted basically after the attack, If I remember correctly, and so Shining armor would still be responsible.
Spike you big ass MOTHA FUKA!
spike better get his shit kicked
"Spike, I'm sorry but the things that were said cannot be forgiven. I have arranged a new place for you to live in Apploosa and do not wish to see you hence forth for the rest of time."-Twilight
Spike... I am disappoint.
Wow, this sure has a lot of twist and turns to it. Took me about a whole day to read it all but sure was worth it. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.