Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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I really hate Magic!
In the famous words of Jane Doe, Mercenary, "FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC, CREAMPUFF!"
Blue Prince got 'Murder Mode' online o3o? Cos hardcore if so.
Thus, in an alternate telling of this story: “Your Highness! The sovereign has passed a deplorable amendment to a deplorable law! A deplorable politician is even now planning to use this opportunity to be his deplorable self and commit a deplorable act under the deplorable legal shield granted by that deplorable amendment to that deplorable law passed by the sovereign! We must secede at once, to protect the innocence of the fledgling princess, Princess!” The Duke of Everhoof, Plor Able ranted across the throne room while standing in at the Crystal Court. Cadance blinked once, then shouted, “Guards, arrest D.E.Plor Able! He’s just admitted to heinous motives!”
...What started as a (more) serious comment turned entirely to a joke once I started getting into the swing of using deplorable almost every other word.
Fucking moist. I just hope twi and nonny get back together
Well. That puts our dear Count's actions in an entirely different light, to be sure. And Blueblood... well, at this stage we knew that the pompous twit act he presented to the world was just that, an act -- but he's inordinately more talented than he appears.
I'm starting to suspect that it was Blueblood who threw the Count out of his bedroom window.
Either way, this chapter had quite a few turns. While we knew that these were all temporary timelines, we have the advantage of dramatic irony: what we, the audience know, is not what Nondis does. And Nondis might well have been trapped, or killed, in any one of those hellscapes. That's going to weigh on his mind for a long time, and I think it'll do him good: how much he values Twilight, despite each of their problems, will be a heavy factor going forth.
And as always, thank you for another excellent chapter!
(ETA: For some reason, Nondis acquiring magic seems less like a plot twist, and more like a logical step. My reaction was, "Yup," and then I got back to the more important parts of Nondis' emotional trauma.)
So, I’m curious. Are Twilight and Nondis back together or are they getting back together later in the story?
Another amazing chapter, as usual.^^ Timing stunk for me though. Life's been hellish, and already had about 40 things to catch up on due to it. XD This didn't help there. ...despite it being a great chapter. XD
As long as Nondis doesn't turn into a pony, we good.
Also;
Nice.
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I love it. I'd love ot be able to use it like a wizard or sorcerer or Druid from DnD. And you can be CERTAIN I'd abuse the heck out of it for pranks or laziness, like using a Mage Hand to get me a soda from the fridge.
Actually, much as I want it, it might be a GOOD thing I don't have it. I also have a short temper, and a love for DBZ fights.
Been following your story for few years. But just seems like its turning into another direction. Cant put my finger on it so dont ask me. Was hoping that this story sticks to relationships. Maybe I'm jumping the gun idk
Chapter 82 is good. But leaves me quite confused, why does it seem like twilight and Nondis are on good terms, when the last thing I remember is them being at odds and ending there relationship. I know it could be because of everything he’s witness, but frankly I don’t feel as though it should have gone that direction.i also feel as though Nondis is sort of being really pathetic. I understand the way he reacts might symbolize the human race in those scenarios. But frankly, both Melanie and his older brother seem more badass than him. It seems as if all he’s doing is getting advice, and not standing on his too feet. It just seems that while he has gained magic, no character development had been made.great story regardless!
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I agree, I just want one chapter where he finally loses his shit, and proceeds to nope out.or maybe yell at everyone for using him as baggage of sorts.
Humans with magic is always fun
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What? This is not how adults react to things.
It seems like with each encounter Blueblood is becoming more like little finger.
this entire chapter can be described in one word:
what
also starlight is just randomly here now i guess, i mean cool but, ok.
Oh so he does know Doctor Who good to know.