Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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"D̶̘̿á̶̼d̵̠̋d̶̳̒y̷̧͑ ̷̥͝g̸̢̎i̴̝̓v̷̬̌ì̴̮ń̶͕g̷̥̓ ̸̢͝m̷̘̆è̴̥ ̷͎͌s̵͍̽o̶̟̽m̶̡̊é̶̫ ̶̬̔ǹ̴̻e̴͎͌w̵̭͘ ̵͇͠d̶͉̂o̸̱͌l̵̜̀l̵͙͛i̵͍̓e̴͔̋ş̶̕!̸͕̂ ̶̝͒Į̶̓ ̴͓͋ç̴͐ã̸̺n̴̩̐'̸͍̒t̶̝͋ ̶͍̐ẃ̵ͅǎ̵͉i̴̯͑t̴̲̒ ̴̥͊t̷̪̃ŏ̵̞ ̷͉̂m̴̰̎e̶͈͂e̴͎͐ṭ̵̋ ̸̬̅t̴̘̃ḥ̵͆e̸̬͝m̷̪̚!̴̟̽"
I got to tell you, man. I get this text style adds flavor to the story. But, having to squint my eyes to make out what it say breaks the immersion. Can you make it easier to read? Great chapter though.
Man, I can handle some gore and other dark stuff every now and then. But this latest stuff...the body horror that’s been rather consistent, the utter violation of Nondis in every way possible...I’m not sure I can keep going. Hell, the opening of today’s chapter alone:
I'm sorry, I was just in the middle of giving you a few extra enhancements. I've actually done a few on you already. You know, bone marrow transplants, bone marrow implants, some insertions here and there, genital alterations, stuff like that." He said as he pulled out another bone, I could assume that he was pulling out all of my ribs. "Also, a little fun fact. Did you know that you had about two extra inches of penile tissue hiding inside of you? I didn't until some hours ago, about maybe eleven or twelve hours ago. Had to completely revamp my research to dedicate that time towards relocating that tissue to your external. I should be able to have a little more fun with you tomorrow, those two inches matter in some cases. I even went into some research recording your healing factor. And by human standards, you are absolutely rapid right now. Some issues that require humans to heal about twelve weeks, you'll heal in the matter of hours. So yeah, that's a thing."
Sweet hell. It just makes me kinda sick to read, putting myself in his shoes. I know we’re supposed to feel bad for him, and that the struggle and sacrifice is all part f the journey, but you’d think our main character has suffered enough at this point! Not to mention all the others who have suffered similar horrors or just the tangential pain of what Nondis has been through.
Like, the payoff has to be fucking massive, as I don’t think anything could really justify this harrowing nightmare rollercoaster he’s been on, as well as the others. I still wanna know how it ends, but there’s only so much I can take. I sound like a bitch no doubt.
awesome
4 months, 210,000 words spread over 8 chapters. And just from the comments it seems that the plot is still dragging just as it has been since my last comment back in September.......... I'm pretty much convinced the author is just dragging it out for the sake of dragging things out now....... the payoff for everyone, ESPECIALLY Nondis, better be fucking massive because of the shit you're putting them through.
Fuck me
I'll always come back. This is still one of the best fics on the site
HELL YEAH! MAKE THAT MOTHERFUCKA SUFFER! Hella glad that Nondis was saved but lord almighty was this chapter cause for distress. I'm talking descriptions of fucking r*** & all other evil acts of violence.
This story has taken a total shift change from when I first joined this site in 2020 & found it. Crazy how it was so wholesome albeit sexual as hell with some comedy mixed in it at the beginning of the story to this wild ride of a completely fucked up story with characters who's backgrounds are just as easily fucked up from understandably the humans to surprisingly the ponies! (Umbra & Celestia)
Can't wait for this story's conclusion & I don't mean that negatively. I've been enjoying this for quite awhile now despite some minor & major gripes. Definitely a top 2 fic on this site & it ain't number 2. That honor goes to either "The Lost Element" (ongoing) or Crossing The Trixie Bridge (completed, branch off story coming soon apparently).
Good looks & I hope life gets better & better for ya! 😁
Is it wrong that I was singing this mentally as I read it?
This chapter made up some of the mess in the last one but it was better than I expected. knowing that the end is closer than I imagine for this story is still hard to believe since I've been following this story for years. I do not know what to expect but I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter.
Still....One question remains.
What will YOU the author do after the ending of this, years-long story?
Hard to think this story is wrapping up. 10/10 a greater writer than I could hope to be man. Hope this year pans out better for you!
Having been here since I first found this story in 2015, I will say it has been one HECK of a ride. To hear it will be coming to an end in the following six of chapters leaves me with mixed feelings. knowing that it's coming to an end soon is both saddening, as I'll be losing my favorite story to follow, but at the same time it's heartening to know that closure is on the horizon.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Does anyone remember Umbra’s color scheme? I’m having trouble picturing him in my head for some reason. All I can think of is his suit, which I remember being described as red?
Also I like how Melanie used to find the thought of sex with ponies so revolting, but thanks to Rickey and Damper she’s got a hankering for some horsecock.
Can the next chapter wrap up this Ark so we can get back to the good times and can't the elements heal him so can you show both girls the human world like a billionaire
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Little late, he was green furred if I remember correctly, black hair I think with a stripe of some kind of color.
"Y̸̢̓o̶̢͒û̵̹'̵̥̄ṛ̵̓e̴̱̿ ̷̖͝j̷͎͗u̷̓ͅs̵̲͂t̶̥̿ ̸̪̉ḷ̷̿i̴͉̔k̵̘̎e̶̬͘ ̴͈͝ť̵̞ḧ̴̜ẻ̴̹ ̶͍̈́o̷̤͘ṯ̶̎h̶̠́e̴̩̾ṛ̷́s̶͙̆!̸͖͠ ̷͕̿A̴̞͂l̸͍͠l̶͎͂ ̶̮̈́ẗ̴̪ḩ̸͘é̴͔y̶̦͑ ̸̨̈́d̷̤͑o̷͇̊ ̸̢̈i̷̛̮ś̸͕ ̴̨̀r̵͍͒u̶̦͑n̸̞͆ ̸͕̊á̴̮w̵̯̒å̸̩ý̷̻ ̶̫͋f̶̫́r̶̜̆ò̷̰m̶̬̽ ̸̻͋m̴̭̿ĕ̷͓!̶̘͛ ̸̦̔W̵͈̐h̷̨̅y̸̢͌ ̷͙͑c̷̚͜ä̸̟ņ̷̕'̶͕̈́t̶̙͝ ̶̭͘ý̶͉o̷͕͆u̵̥̿ ̶̱̏j̷̟̀ǘ̴̢s̷͓͂t̴̮̎ ̶̰͝s̶͎͐ẗ̵̪ạ̶̓ỷ̵̲ ̴͚̚h̴̺̉e̸̲̋ṛ̴̚e̴̻̕ ̷̗̎a̷̭̍n̸̖̽d̶̟̉ ̸̺͐p̵̏ͅl̵͎̿a̷͒ͅy̶̟̔!̸̘̂?̷͚͝"
you know the funny thing is I'm one of those people that uses the narrator program and I tell you one thing the narrator hates this so much it makes a racket and spells out everything by the letters