Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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So I'm assuming the Count is in for one nasty surprise...Can we just kill him now or do we kill everyone in his little group first...
7914597 I don't want no raping going on here mate. But please. Please!!!! Let it not be dash. I really don't want this more broken.
Good chapter. I needed this in my life. GG m8 and I wait for the next one soon
I hope next chapter will be soon. Great writing.
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Man you know when Nondis gets ahold of that journalist he's gonna squeal like a pig and tell who payed his smug as* off. I hope they enter the room there storing the bodies in I'd love to see there reactions on his kill count ....oh we killed like 2 how many you kill....they enter burial room...I stopped counting after 50. Oh and thanks for using my argument about the photographs I feel honored you'd use my input from my comment.
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Also, when Nondis gets back to the count he should pull something like this, except with an Arimaspi instead of a bear:
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I didn't even take your comment into account. The time I had that scene written up, I was finishing up the previous chapter without submitting it yet. It was always apart of the story because I wanted it to be a topic of debate rather than some odd circumstance that would go unquestioned.
It was the reason I had Rainbow threaten to arrest him, because that was the only logical outcome.
I fucking love it when you update this story.
YES! OH SWEET BABY JESUS YES! IT LIVES!
Amazing chapter.:D
7915151 man now i feel less special ... eh whateves.
Ahhh, another spectacular chapter. Plenty of action, gore, and lots of chaos - and Shining finally gets a grip on his past. Brilliant stuff.
Very intelligent of Nondis to play follow-the-leader -- recovering the tribe's treasure would have absolutely been a simple feat, had the chief simply led him to it. From there, of course, he'd be stranded behind enemy lines and loaded down, but considering how he's put the fear of Man into those abominations, it'd not be a difficult task taking out a leaderless group.
I like how you showed that they were, indeed, intelligent, and perhaps even capable of rational thought. That language looks passingly familiar, too. One wonders if they might be a corruption of something Grogar put together in the long past times...
I would advise against trying to create a language from scratch. Depending on whether you want your reader to understand what is being said or not, you can just describe the conversation with non verbal cues (body language, tone, etc) or just write it in plain English and use formatting that makes it clear the conversation occurring in another language.
That's the advantage of publishing a story through a written medium: you can describe stuff and let the reader's imagination do the legwork.
HAH Good thing they Did not kill that 'baby arimaspi'
Disappointed? No no quite the opposite.
I can live with the patience for 22k word chapters, don't feel you've been slow as when you do put out work you put out a large amount of good quality stuff
7914646 I have a feeling Spike is going to stab Count in the back for what he's done.
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When a new chapter drops????
7921042 Here kid take my hidden blades...there nothing like Kenway's but I think you will make good use of them.
DuMonee...
I'm aorry, but I can no longer take this guy seriously as every time I read his name, my minds gonna go straight to this...
Must be DuMonee...
Also, was Nondis hiding in the skin of one of those things?
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And what this fool doesn't realize yet is that his brothers and his friends, who are VERY well armed are going to be pissed, and they KNOW who is to blame for it, AND where to find him.
Okay this story is great when are we getting the next chapter I friggin hate cliffhangers.