Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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You. You sexy beast of a man you! How dare you do that?!? That last line made me think it was pinkie! For fucks sake man!!!! Also. If possible don't shorten the chapters. But if it's too much work on you then please by all means do what you just to keep writing because I really really love this story.
"So I guess it'll be us three in Group B?" Stanton stated as he pulled me and Alex close together.
"Not quite." I said as I unhinged myself from Stanton's grasp. "I'll need either you or Stanton to go with Melanie and Cliff. The two of you have had experience in firearms for several years, so I'd like to have a marksman in each group."
Should be 'you or Alex' since he was talking to Stanton. Simple mistake there.
Conspiracy theory time!
(deep inhalation sound effect)
The final lines of this chapter are evidence that it was, in fact, the real Pinkie who was speaking. This would imply an opportunistic plot to infiltrate Twilight's inner circle with a changling, possibly even Chrysalis herself, by brainwashing both Cheese Sandwich and Pinkie Pie, so that when Cheese was rescued, her senses would be addled, leaving her acting strange, and unable to answer obvious questions so they would believe Pinkie a changling and kill her, thus leaving her impostor unhindered in Ponyville. But what they weren't expecting was for pinkie to regain some control in the last moment, cluing her would-be executioners in on the deception, causing Nondis to veer his aim at the last second, saving Pinkie from death, sparing him a lifetime of crushing guilt, and allowing them to thwart the villain's dastardly machinations.
(gaaaaasp)
Wheew... so am I even close, or should I go get my tinfoil hat?
Another amazing chapter, as usual. You're good at pulling at heart strings, eh?
Chapter LIVE?
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I am going to go with one of three options, first is that you are correct, second is that pinkie used the mirror pool again, and third is that the changeling was always around in ponyville and fell for nondis.
On a completely unrelated note, went to type nondis on my phone, got the word nondisclosure. Kinda feels appropriate seeing as how nondis has to be discreet most of the time.
No! Bad Author!
*wacks with newspaper*
Bad!
These human campaigns in Equestria are really interesting. Hoping there'll be more in the future
You're killing us with this cliffhanger cdn-9chat-fun.9cache.com/media/photo/a12plzvlm_480wa_v1.gif
Damn the end of this chapter is most likely going to have a huge effect on his mind
I'm actually surprised. Rares good at a lot of things, but at the same time she's absolutely unbearable and I have not a slightest ideas how Nondis were stupid enough to fall for her or kept up with her bs. I wonder why in every other fanfiction she is either a bitch or a slut or both? Not necessary all the time, but quite enough for that to actually matter. Well, not like she's a nice person to be around in the original show either. -_-
a la mierda
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seems Nondis has a thing for abusive women. Rariy, Twilight and Meline are all abusive in their own way.