Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Yet again, I survive.
now i wait for the next chapter
6478971 I don't think anypony would allow you to be dead for long LOL, wouldn't put it past them to resurrect your flank. You have a writer's desk to be chained to lolol :P
You just described in one sentence just how bad the educational sector of the US is.
Awwwwww maaaan, dude, why do you make things more complicated than what they need to be? you got twillight be frikking happy and keep your hands of any other female, it's as simple as that!!
And the final countdown begins for the Melanie-Twilight meet up.
I wonder if, by the end of this fic, the knowledge of Equestria will spread to all of Earth.
Hells, it might even happen before the end.
6479179 Yeah...he doesn't seem to have the mental fortitude of AVERAGE NICE GUYS.
Also...Germany didn't play villian the first war....None were villians or heroes the first war..
The second war it was fighting the greater evil...
Seriously...
After the whole WW1 and 2 thing I just stopped reading for a second and thought how bad that those whole conflicts would be with modern weapons...M16s and jets and tanks and ICBMs and AK-47s and whatever the hell the Japanese could cook up and beretta giving Italy good guns and...yeah those wars ended in hell...
I have been asking myself this for some time now: WHERE THE FUGGNUGGETS IS SPIKE?!?!?!
I mean, really now? He hasn't tried anything??? He better be plotting some stuff or slowly becoming more corrupt; I mean, between Twilight's neglect, confusing and muddling emotions practically controlling his thoughts and actions, and his burning hate for Nondis, he has to have SOME malevolent stuff goin on!!!
good story though,
Another amazing chapter, as always.^^
Im sorry, to bother you TheSillyAnon; but i have a question. Im really confused at this point, and maybe something was changed or something. But did Nondis forget that he and Twilight had agreed(or he said what he was going to do) about being on break? About the two of them being allowed to date/see other people whilst in between this break? Cause if so, Twilight had no right to slap him since he was only doing on what was said or agreed to. Not only that, but he's acting like he deserved it, and is apart from a brief mention of how "We agreed to this", he quickly dismissed it. So, Twilight/He are both acting like he's comepltly at fault when really, he did nothing wrong.
Is he just not thinking clearly, or something??
I swear your story is like a meth/crack cocktail for me. Keep them coming please.
6479736 That's true, but if you go back to an earlier chapter, Twilight does say that she has a problem with him possibly dating Rarity.
6479150 Also keeping in mind that Nondis was born and raised in Austin, TEXAS. Texas is one of the most 'Murrican states in the union, complete with bible-belt status.
6479483 Oh, that's called World War III (currently in pending)
6479179 Well it would be fine to have Twilight had it not been for external circumstances, you know that thing that thing that the politicians dangle over the royal's heads every time they show an interest in anyone.
6479804 Hi, Drug Reader's Anonymous is the counseling group you're looking for. That would be down the hall and third door to your right.
Dude, why not take over, the man is captain of all the royal guard, he knows shining who is in his side, all the princecces are in his side, the elements are in his side, discord is in his side, shining and cadance has the crystal empire military, combine with equestrian military, they can simply arrest all the diplomats, nobles, and take over by force, and non to few would actually die if its well planned, then after a week or two, he can return the power to the princecces who already have prepare a new constitution or a set of laws to establish, remove the nobility and start anew.
6479483 WWIII will have mechs.
6479948 For the same reason that doesn’t happen here. The Noble's influence lies beyond the room they gather in, they hold great sway over things like the media(which is part of the reason why it's so hard for the Princesses to remove the law).
The ponies of Equestria would instantly side with the nobles because the hostile takeover would make them victims and martyrs.
one suggestion, could you change the color of Nondis' concience more darker becuse it's hard to read on my Ipod. thanks
I have a feeling Spikes gonna come in and either wreck some shit or attack one of the humans
6479870 No thank you, I'm quite content with my addiction to your story.
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WW1 was fought in trenches
WW2 was fought no holds barred
WW3 will be fought with nukes
WW4 will be fought with sticks
Cliff is so funny. He reminds me of my friends
Just saying, Germany surrendered in 1945... Although that's really only the tip of the iceberg with my problems with the historical part of this chapter.
Nonetheless, great chapter, I'm still hoping for Melanie to win him over...
I like Nondis' conscience better than Nondis himself.
At first I was ready to strangle you, now I just wish to hug you to death.
TAKE THE DAMN UPVOTE AND GET OUT OF MY SIGHT YOU MAGNIFICENT BASTARD.
I lost my shit when he said Britain was one of the Axis powers.
How is he a liar? He described exactly what their 'break' entailed. He specifically said he would not cheat on her, which, last I checked, means no sex with anyone else. Which he has not had. I'm jus tstarting to think that Alicorns are overly possessive period.
Is it wrong that I feel a swell of pride when reading that?
just looked through the comments and cannot believe that no one has mentioned this. I am ashamed for the other Americans out there
This is where it start's coming full-circle. December 7th, 1942, [ December 7th, 1941 ]
This chapter was awesome
i cant even. this was awesome, i started to tear up in the middle of it
that kind of joke at the end gets me all the time xD