Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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I sure hope I'm not punished for something I put in towards the end.
I don't know why. But I really want twi to get back with our boy. Because I see that this shit isn't anyone's fault that the events played out like this. One could say.... It's complained
They just said they want to be fuck buddies. But going on dates now? Not even a fucking day later.
You did good with this story. It felt real with the sibling fights cause that shit is real.
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Oh no, it's not you. Most conanical characters in this story are written OOC, to a very insulting degree. Then again, all this story is is over-dramatized wish-fulfilment.
I think that describes about 98% of HiE stories.
Ayo, I may be stuck near the beginning of the story, but congrats on the big 1 million words.
damn now I really want to see the full humanized celestia picture, either way good job. Not gonna lie when I was reading this story I was sometimes feeling like I was gonna quit cause you put this guy through the ringer. But it all seems to clearing up for now
Basically good job and hope we get some more soon.
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I just realized the date the story was released I almost forgot to say happy anniversary to your story!!!
Thank you for creating such an amazing piece and still continuing today after 4 years or so...
Crossing the 1,000,000 words mark on the fourth anniversary of the story. Congrats, and thank you for all your hard work!
Another excellent chapter, as usual.^^
Finally finished binge reading this masterpiece! I have to thank you for writing it. I was so deliciously invested throughout the whole thing. The difficulties and troubles of these complicated individuals... aaah, how I would love to be able to yell at Nondis and just tell him to propose to those three mares. Possibly four considering Rainbow Dash's interest.
Herding there would solve so many problems. I hope one day this ends with our hero in a happy relationship with Twilight, Rarity, and whoever else wants in. You've written an excellent story of troubles, heartbreak, love, lust, joy, and suffering. I honestly cannot wait for the months, if not years, ahead of your writing.
Thank you for this. Its been a blast!
Honestly, Im really glad of this chapter. For awhile, this fic was nothing but misery, misery, misery against Nondis to the point where it just became depressing to read, making me wonder "Jees, hows this guy gonna get fucked over now?" So just abit of light-heartedness really did help :) I wasn't expecting Twilight to come to realizations with how her jerking Nondis is what drove him away from her, so that was really good. With Spike...I dunno. Call me cynical, but I just think it's far too late for any chance of reconciliation with Nondis. The behaving like a bitter ass, is something that can be forgiven. Betraying Twilight and the others like he did...trying to kill Nondis whilst he was sleeping in his bed. I think that pretty much burned any bridges of forgiveness and acceptance between the two.
Finally happy to see that Twilight finally realized that it was her own damn fault that Nondis left her stupid ass, you can't keep yanking the chain and expect them not to finally snap and bite back. And as for Spike, I doubt anyone will ever truly fully trust him again with that stunt. And as for the talk Statson and Alex had, I would have decked him in the face for hitting me in the back of the head, it is because of Celestia's failure in the past that Nondis is suffering the most in the present, hell he should have kept on lumping more and more shit on Celestia for that.
Okay, I've got to say that I really appreciate this latest chapter, particularly Twilight's reflection on her and Nondis' relationship. It's great to hear her thoughts about all that's transpired in a more genuine way, rather than hearing it from way back when those moments had her emotionally charged rather than more rational.
It really helps to understand some of the decisions she made and why she made them. I feel kinda sorry for her now. I mean I already did, but seeing how this affects her upfront rather than her just ignoring it is something I needed. Thanks for this, TheSillyAnon, and can't wait for the next one!!
Um, I think you meant 'bare'. Calling a woman barren means that she can't have children. But maybe that was intentional....?
I think the second 'not' in unneeded.
hahahaha. i see what you did there., :P
I saw that Virginia Beach comment and was like, "Oh, wheres this going?"
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