Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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So this is the only chapter I've seem to release at the approximate time of 9:11 at night.
I really wish there was some kind of group or something that explained why I should read any of these dime-a-dozen HiE fics. The word count interests me, but the description and title... don't. Not trying to rag on this story, in particular, I'd just like someone to explain what makes one HiE fic better in a certain way without having to read a quarter of a million words and use hours of my time for me to realize, "yeah, this isn't for me"
Got a new title for this chapter
It's Complicated, Chapter CIX : FUCK COUNT UMBRA SANCTUS!
No because like you really almost had my dumbass feeling humongous sympathy for that monster after he was raped by those other monsters but.....
This motherfucka joked about having CHILDREN raped & what's worse? He has the options to actually have it done!
Nah my dog,, this man Ummie gotta get got! May his death be violent, gory, & fucking looooonnng!
The victim becomes the victimizer & that's the worst case to come out of situations like Umbra's. He took what happened to him & has become a far far worse demon than those who took advantage of him! I'm disgusted at what he is!
kids man....Those were KIDS he was talking about! Fuck! Hope AJ, Dash, & especially Rarity get some really good licks in on this sicko if they ever find out about what he said. A beating I hope he gets so so bad!
Fucking hell! This story getting me mad as fuck! Good shit on this chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
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Dude, you put my feelings and typed them out perfectly. He not only has the balls to threaten the elements, but the absolute gall to threaten the CMC? That alone should render the fucking cunt the sole focus of every alicorn’s combined divine fury! How Discord doesn’t just turn Umbra inside out and string up by his muscle cords and blood veins line a marionette just for daring to tangentially pose a threat to Fluttershy, I have no clue.
But I suppose that means no milking out more tension for the story’s sake. But sweet shit, man. Forget the Elements of Harmony, their punishments are far too merciful. Luna just needs to have a go at finding out what could give such a wretched fucker nightmares and construct all the most torturous of horrors for him. But it seems this asshat has no such limits and would just laugh at it all.
On a positive note, I did like hearing Nondis’ friends recount how pleasant their stay in Ponyville was, specifically Mel mentioning she wishes they could make more friends. Sounds like the makings of a “dear Princess Celestia” moment, if you ask me.
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Please spoiler text your comments for any readers that are looking to start off.
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Will do that in the future & have now learned how to do it. Thank you.
love the origin story of ummi (girls get him)
makes me also wonder what kind of restrictions you place on the ellement's and discord to avoid the deus ex machina putting everything to an apprubt end
so much to speculate over
If umbra knows what kalimba knows then it's safe to assume that he knows that twilight was at the arena. If I were him I'd kidnap twilight as that negates whatever threat the elements present to my plans and as a bonus I could use her as a tool to torment Nondis even further. Take someone he cares about just to twist the knife in his gut. Why stop there? Why not make it into a game and force him to choose between his goal and her?
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Oh god you’re right. For the sake of the characters, I hate how plausible that sounds.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I JUST finished catching up on all the chapters.
Holy fuck do you know how to write a story. I started reading this about a week and a half ago. I lost a lot of sleep reading this, and I actually had a couple nightmares from Umbra. What a dick.
I do have to say, I'm a little disappointed Twi screwed herself over, because there aren't a lot of good HiE stories with her, but I do love Celestia finding someone. Also Kalimba. Don't get me started on how much I love her. Please tell me you have a happy ending for her. I'm tired of seeing her hurt. I just want to hug her. I know this story loves violence and gore, but I just want to see her happy, along with Blue. Those two poor girls have been through too much.
I can't wait for Umbra to get his dues. May it be a slow and violent process. Maybe with his past reoccurring by the very same people he entertains. Maybe him being put in the wall with his magic banished. And may those in the secret lab suffer the same fate. I want Nondis to find a way to get a plane through to napalm Canterrot. Or at least an explosive to level the place. There's not enough C4 in the world to take care of that place.
You know I wonder if he's a lich maybe his Cane is his flashery.