Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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I hope I'm putting out enough to keep people entertained during this quarantine. Stay safe all of you.
Nice.
Mind=BLOWN! Pieces are starting to fall into place.
Hah ! I fucking KNEW it x3!
Oh shit
PLOT TWIST
*Gets to the last line*
Oh dear.... Oh dear, OH DEAR!!?
Blue Royal!!
Wow! Nice.
First off, I saw it coming. Second, how bad is it in your neck of the woods TSA?
You love the plot twists, don't ya?
Damn. I thought Blue was his sister. This is so much worse. BTW, the picture you choose as a cover is broken.
wow.
A big-time fan of the story I like how it's going so far the only problem I have with how long it takes to get to Seven Points in the story it took a very long time to get to this one chapter and it hasn't even been a year in that world and what about his other side relationships
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Seven Points? What’s that, may I ask?
10173045 it just takes you a long time to get to certain events
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Oh okay, I thought you were referencing something specific in the story. My bad!
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Yeah I’m honestly surprised with how little the mane six as a group plays in this. Feels like AJ, Fluttershy and RD are barely ever there, same for Pinkie in more recent chapters. But I suppose that’s not too bad, as Nondis only ever has a developing potential relationship with Twi and Rarity.
Damn I just want them all to end up happy, in any way at this point. The abolishment of this law can’t come soon enough. I just want Twi and Nondis to approach a relationship more healthily this time.
In my time on this site and a couple of others, I've never came across a story so well written. The drama, action, suspense, character interaction and world building are on a level I haven't seen in a fanfiction... If I had no idea about the fandom or the show and read this I'd have no clue that it was a separate fan made piece. I'm only on chapter 73, and I can hardly stop reading. The other night I stayed up just reading because I couldn't get enough. So I thank you for the fic and hope to love it more as it continues.ᛏᚺᚨᚾᚲ᛫ᛇᚢᛟ
This is definitely a story I will want to binge read when it's finished. There is so much detail in your writing and as I read from one chapter to another they flow so well together. You have also done a masterful job crafting character that feel real; every character has their flaws and no one is perfect. I hope we see a happy ending for this lovable bunch of creatures.
I just had a thought: one of the perks of Nondis having sex with his pony lovers is that they can’t get pregnant due to the species difference. That, and the ponies only being able to conceive during estrus. But with the way this story likes to throw new twists and drama drops at its leisure, and since he and Twi’s recent nasty session was done while she was in her human form, I honestly wouldn’t be surprised if she ends up pregnant at some point in the near future. Either as a new stake to further the plot in getting the law removed, or afterwards as a sort of celebratory event. I just hope things turn out for the better. Words can’t describe how anxious I get when reading this story, hoping that our characters can finally experience some triumphs amidst the turmoil and uneasiness.
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Yup I’ve felt that way a number of times too over my time reading this story. I can’t decide if it’s because of how incomprehensibly complicated this story gets and how long some of the bullshit stretches on, along with some of the choices the characters make, or I’m just missing something. But yeah it’s really trying on the nerves. I wish some things would just get resolved and sense of normalcy would come about, and characters can actually enjoy themselves for a while without any complications and drama. I’m mostly just stuck for the ride and hoping things turn out well.
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Good Lord, some of that bs is still happening? Man I gave up when I thought two years ago that it would take months for some of the plot lines to be resolved, didn't think it would drag on for years.
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Yeah at times I dunno why I’m still reading. I honestly just hit a really bad case of “came for the plot, stayed for the story”. Maybe I’m still just reading for the sex because I love how TheSillyAnon writes it with it feeling more natural instead of filled with a bunch of cheesy hentai dialogue that a lot of others are, due to it being merely a scene in an overall story rather than the entirety of the story. There’s some OOC things that do kinda annoy me at times, like Cadence being so controlling with someone else’s relationship instead of letting it shape naturally. Or Celestia caving to some snobby assholes instead of asserting her authority as a benevolent but powerful demi-goddess. “You don’t want to let my family and I live our lives the way we wish to? Fine. No more sun or moon. Checkmate, bitches.” Along with Twilight and Nondis hardly sitting and talking things out without either getting snarky and it turning into an argument only adding more tension, or them just doing normal stuff together outside of their duties or listening to their crotches.
But I like to think I do just want them all to be happy, and see maybe a herd develop out of all of this. I honestly don’t ever see where things are going and I kind of like that, but all the twists and turns that make things worse just mount into one big anxiety mountain.
Happy late birthday to this story I found when I first arrived on this site many years ago :D