Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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There, right there!
Wait...there's a third chapter?!
How did I miss THAT?
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About that third chapter...
I just sent it in.
lol Nice chapter.^_^
I feel like this guy is Ted from How I Met Your Mother except he got stuff to the pony world
Can you say THAT 5 times really fast?!
I can! THATTHATTHATTHATTHAT
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Came here to check it again out of curiosity, and look what I get: denied FlashLight!
See, this is what happens when you go baiting drunkenly on someone just because your teenager mind thinks you love his different-life counterpart.
The first chapter had my curiosity.
The second chapter had my attention.
This chapter.....
This chapter earned the favorite.
4514822 Actually Kristen's a pretty decent actress, just like Robert Pattinson. She's got a few rather good movies under her belt, ones where she actually puts emotion into acting. Just one example is Zathura, when the revelation about the astronaut happens. Solid freaking gold.
The core of the matter is that she hates acting in Twilight. She's only in it because of the fat, FAT paycheck.
Ah another good chapter from you, I enjoyed this
Welp, RIP Nondis At least Twilight won't have the chance to feel embarrassed were she ever to meet him again
thanks for the update!!
Loved it!
This Is one of those stories where you get hooked from the beginning. Have A Fav! You earned it!
This is a great fic so far, looking foward to future chapters!
I was going to stop reading this if Twilight went any further with flash but I like where its going now!!! Lol
That's the problem with alternate dimension counterparts, they aren't always the same as the one that you meet in your own universe. That aside, I can see the girls are definitely going to be putting this guy in a lot of akward situations... ¡Mi gusta!
Well done, you've got me hooked.
I'm sure Rarity will be understanding once Nondis tells her the his clothes got like that because he was comforting Twilight after Flash reject her (Thank God!). Unfortunately, he will have to get the words out first. I'm just wondering how long before he actually kisses one of these ponies? And who will be the next pony that Nondis comforts?
This is a great story. He's a good friend.
Something tells me that Flash just volunteered to count penguins at the north pole. Minimum count needed to return is 500. (Yes, I know that's the point)
Twilight never disappoints when drunk.
That dance with Pinkie pie was intense.
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Phew! Hope to see more of that. Pinkie was always my fav.
4508921 Someone's completely full of themselves, eh?
4524630 I'm with you, I love that bouncey pink mare. *Squee*
4534461 I love this boss.
Ok, so it appears pinkie likes him, twilight might like him....... And rarity might rape him OK!
There is no romance tag, but I feel like there is romance in this story. I never know how things will turn out since you can change the tags when ever. Still I like this story... Also I hope his mouth was closed when twilight pukes.
...Whoa
The Melanie thing really frustrated me, Pinkie Pie condoning it even more so. So what, it's okay to string along somebody you know likes you as more than a friend in order to 'test' them? I hate to sound crass, but screw that. It's not okay to hurt people like that, to use them like that, and Pinkie Pie should know better, especially after seeing what it does to Spike.
4663335 I think it was more of a trying to point out that there is indeed an opposite side. I mean how long can a girl "friendzone" or "test" someone to see if they are just trying to get in their pants? I mean are they just supposed to let any guy do whatever they want after two days of "dating"? There really needs to be a balance and since everyone tends to talk about being friendzoned as the biggest evil maybe it wouldn't be bad to point out the opposite side every once in a while
horses can't vomit.
I loved this chapter it was sweet and funny. And I loved getting to learn about his past.I cannot wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens next to them all.
5325054 well its a good thing there magical ponies
ABORT ABORT! ABORT THE MISSION! WBD IN THE FIELD! I REPEAT, WEAPON OF BROTHERLY DESTRUCTION IS IN THE FIELD! GO TO THE MENU! CLICK QUIT! DO YOU WANNA SAVE YOUR FUCKING PROGRESS?! NO!
5544811 I'm sure there's a reference in there somewhere but for the life of me I just don't see it.
4514877 What, you didn't favorite it at the first chapter?
they're
So the last sentence too paragraph is forshadowing the next chapter. Neat.
Sadness Confermed as new Liquid!!! (This made me laugh, it was sad but Just it was goood!!!)
Fairly Odd Parents!
"I wanted some meat inside of me and I didn't care how I was going to get it."
.... WOW! Okay.. umm you want to take a moment to reword that there buddy?
Poor Twilight
any one else get this reference do you really really want to know sbsp
So, before I read any further, I need to know... is Pinkie ever going to face any consequences for her bs? Or is she just going to get away with constantly forcing Nondis to do things he doesn't want to do while trying to make him feel guilty for leaving a relationship where he was just being used?
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To be honest, a lot of people saw that coming.
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I have to say, the first two chapters of this story have me somewhat hooked. I still like the idea of not only a human, but a socially awkward, antisocial human, in Equestria. The land of friendship and popped personal bubbles.
But this chapter had me... confused, to put it politely. Both intellectually and emotionally, I cannot see the logic in Nondis and Pinkie's actions, at certain parts of this chapter.
First, the part when Pinkie accuses Nondis of being selfish in regards to that past crush of his. No matter what angle I look at it from, it's just... bad. From angle one, Pinkie was both massively jumping to conclusions (given the INCREDIBLY small amount of information she had been provided with) and being crossing-the-line judgmental; especially after he was so tactful about HER past crushes. From angle two, Nondis immediately thinking she was completely right was not only weird, but quite conceited; him coming to believe that Melanie was doing something as convoluted as "waiting for him to grow up" implies that he thinks he was worth that kind of effort (which is a fairly conceited belief for a normal person to have, let alone a socially awkward dude with self-confidence issues). From angle three, if that IS what Melanie was doing, that was unhealthy/scummy of HER for TWO different reasons: firstly in that she viewed her friend/potential boyfriend as a "PROJECT" who needed to be "fixed" (i.e. grow up), and secondly in that she was romantically interested in him and continually interacted with him while going through quite a few boyfriends (I can't think of a word to describe that kind of behavior, and the only one that comes to him is bad, but too harsh: whorish).
Second, Pinkie doing that aggressively sexual(?) wall-dancing with Nondis. If he legitimately derives joy from watching others enjoy themselves, AND legitimately becomes uncomfortable when he is pushed and/or the center of attention, then she was being very inconsiderate. Reminds me of the episode Filli Vanilli, when Pinkie was uncharacteristically causing so much discomfort in Fluttershy.
Third, Nondis "inexplicably" following Twilight and Flash. It doesn't matter if you lampshade how weird his decision to follow them was; it was still out-of-left-field, out-of-character, and inappropriate. Unless it is revealed in later chapters that he was literally, magically compelled to follow them as he did (most likely by Shining, Cadance, and/or Discord), this was just super weird and creepy for him to do. I mean, at a human party, would he do something like this? The most likely "activities" two humans would be about to get up to upon going down a dark hallway at a party is pretty well-implied. And you can't even use the "But ponies!" excuse, since Nondis had just witnessed two (Pinkie-on-him and Cadance-on-Shining) examples of unusually open (even by HUMAN standards) sexuality on/near somewhere as public as the freaking dance floor!
Don't get me wrong-- I'm definitely going to keep reading. It's just that the characterization in this chapter was so baffling to me that I felt compelled to comment, despite how many years ago this chapter was posted.
oh god oh fuck
Might as well tell himself he's gay
Now Nondis has to deal with Rarity.
(Word of advice dude, do NOT let that mare get WET!)
Intense...but adorable. I can see Nondis as shy, but a nice guy nonetheless. I am also impressed at the serious lack of spelling, and grammar errors. You might avail yourself to others, as an editor. So far, a well done story. Much different from other common themed stories. Keep up the good work.
I haven't even finished reading the chapter and I'm already a little annoyed. That Pinkie speech was incredibly immature, so I guess it is somewhat in-character. The logic behind relationships can get complicated and jumping straight to Nondis being selfish is baffling. All things living beings do are selfish to some degree and blaming someone for being selfish for NOT being the rebound for someone else is assuming that other person is ENTITLED to have a rebound (given that she was going out with other guys). Geez, that is a prime example of selfishness without having to dig to the root level. Relationships require both sides to respect each other and contribute, if one side isn't willing to contribute or respect the other unless it is convenient then it isn't a healthy relationship.