Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Well, this looks too be a good read. I'm starting now so let's have fun!
Welp, Starlight's at it again. Dang.
I hate the changelings more than I even hate Discord. Your story is doing good man. When it comes to the changelings, 9/11 come tomorrow.
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Except it's not again, this is the first time she's doing it in the timeline. Next chapter will be interesting, especially since it seems that Nondis has to deal with each alternate timeline.
Little bit of mind buggery in that last bit. But no less interesting.
I love this story already.
Chapter 7 and this quote:
So profound.
Can I use it?
What happened at the end? I am confused.
Oh fuck it’s starlight glimmer that explains what nondis walked into
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It was starlight changing the timeline the mare nondis was talking to was starlight glimmer. She was the mare in the elevator who used the spell for the hidden button
shit hits the fan again with an incredible cliff hanger
I cannot wait for the next chapter i wish it was to come early!
Nondis: media1.tenor.com/images/1bf906f1d7b433f8ed538f5ed00cb22e/tenor.gif?itemid=13933485
30 done!
Shining Armor was such a dick during training I was actually pissed for my main man.
Awesome story.
Rocking it!
Will he ever go back to ponyville? Because it seems to me that something bad might happen if he doesn’t return soon(like rarity cheating) or something. Because they can’t be around one another like he is with twilight and everyone else. I feel as though he shouldn’t get back together with twilight though, since that relationship seemed to be doomed to fail. To be honest, I feel as though something drastic should happen to where he quits the guard and decides to travel, kick back and relax, or something another, because captain nondis seems to me to just be a complete boar.not dissing on the story or anything, because this story is one of my favorites. Just adding in that it’s hard to stay interesting when waiting a long time for a chapter, but the chapter does really progress as far as you want it to. I’m happy with whatever happens, just a little bored and sad I have to wait a couple of weeks till the next chapter.
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I don’t entirely disagree. Other than the big shitstorms like the changelings starting trouble again, I don’t really see how the whole Captain Nondis thing will play out. I’d also like to see him get to relax (and possibly get some sexytimes on).
Also, I don’t think Rarity can really “cheat” on him, per se. I know she’s solely interested in Nondis and the two are interested in seeing how a relationship would work between them, but they are technically friends-with-benefits, and thus they won’t really care who the other sleeps with.
I'm actually half way there!
Twilight is a total douche, but I actually see it as being true the way you write her.
Good feels, like a see saw.
Ha, the changeling battle and loss!
I actually felt like I was in combat(again).
Take that, MERICA!
That "I believe" thing punched me in the feels so much.
😰
15/10 awesome
I made it to chapter 69, but I need a break between arcs.
Twi is a totally abusive gf and dudes on the mend.
Politics are on point as well as combat.
You're fantastic at this.
Complete this, or shame on you!
Shame on your guitar!
Shame on your favorite dubstep song!
Caught up. I'm all caught up and dying for moar!!
Please!
Lol
It's gonna be so epic the way you write this.
happy birthday to this great story of yours, going on 5 years still strong
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Snowflake
Starlight you freakin reeeeeeee
Wouldn’t it make more sense to do a western stand off? I mean if I see an imposter of myself the first thing I would do is probably kill it.
I actually like this Thorax more than the shows version.