Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Yeeesh. I feel sorry for both Twilight and Flash.
I can't say I'm in favor of them not being together just so Nondis can get a chance at being with Twilight, but you handled it a lot better than I thought you would. I really hope things get better between the two but as long as I see Nondis hang around, I can't see that happen just yet.
I personally am hoping that Celestia hears word of what Flash did and goes Overprotective Mother on his worthless ass.
No offense Cranky.
Cranky: None taken.
... how do they always show up when somepony says that? HOW?!
It looks like Nondis has gotten close to three of the Mane Six. It also looks like he is wanting to stay more and more. There were a couple of mistakes that I found:
I think you meant 'his type'.
...with just our eyes staring at each other...
I'll see you next chapter.
4537578 I just have to point out that Flash hasn't actually done anything. He couldn't really have left her down much softer than that...
flash is nothing more then a troll against the fandom.
but excellent chapter. I have a feeling he may end up in the hospital once he has his day with the cmc.
4537963 Don't bring logic into this.
4538026 Generally, it does help.
4538260 Last time I was logic'd, I actually changed my opinion on something. I am content in my hatred for Flash. Do not change that.
Wow. Thanks for making it seem like humans suck EVEN more.
Why couldn't I be like, I don`t know, a dog?
At least then, I wouldn't be blamed for pedophilia and rape..
Gosh, We SUCK
Awww, that was a sweet ending.
4538502 Hey just because some don't do the right thing, doesn't mean we're all like that. It is true though, we have a lot of ground to cover still.
YAYAYAYAYAYAY! Brilliant story! I hope to see more in the future!
Ok, I feel stupid asking this; Is Spikes slow ageing cannon or just something a few in the fandome came up with? I ask since this isn't the first story I've seen that mentions it.
4540668 I wanna say that it was implied in-show being that Spike is still an infant compared to the other dragons in existence. Not only that, but his aging seems to differ from ponies entirely. We saw how he looked when he first hatched and how far he's come since then, which isn't much at all.
So with that knowledge, I can safely assume that dragon aging takes significantly longer than that of equine aging. But it's a widely accepted theory and a theory no less.
Ah simply beautiful another well done from you
4540668 It's two different kinds of cannon. It's cannon in the show because it's been said that dragons grow with greed so Spike will grow slower because he is virtuus by nature, and in the D&D mythology because dragons live to be hundreds of years old, 10 years is practically still infancy
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Hun, I always figured Spike was just small because he was just a kid. Only to grow any significant size when he reaches maturity. While not growing to any monstrous size, till he was at least a few centuries old.
I'd go more into it, but it kind of conflicts with your theory and a few others.
i frankly don't know if this is a grammatical error or a pinkie pie way of speaking.
bestestest should be replaced with best.
Anyway this is a great fan fiction due to its realistic situations and personalities.
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That would be Pinkie
YEAH, HUMANITY! WHAT THE FUK?! We shuld be more like ponies! I think we shuld start by going vegetarian.....................
OR NAAAAWW!!
This reminds me of this Sparity fic called Heart Of Scales. My favorite Sparity fic is The Heart Of A Dragon. Read them both. You will not be disappointed.
Nondis' inner thoughts amuse me greatly
4549685 No, no it is not. In fact I'd say that such a thing is perfectly reasonable.
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Remarkable
I got nothin' else, what's there to say? A long, detail, critic-worthy speech about how much I praise this story? No, none of that today, that's all you get 'cause that's all you need.
Scarlet Brony has spoken
So far i'm really enjoying this. It kind of makes me think of the twilight zone, mainly because of the way the end almost quotes the beginning in order to show the thoughts of each chapter.
4609992 could not have been said better myself
cowered.
I loved this chapter it was as great as the others if not better. They just keep getting better and better.it was sweet,cute and funny I can't wait. to see what happens between them all next and what happens next to them.It relly touches the heart.
Intro, story , outro.
Cassie Cage:"I'm sensing a theme here."
Good story though. Somethinf refreshing.
You will not take my coffee!
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Well,overall I love this story so far.
1st,you're a good writer,you can write details,character thoughts in the same perspective,and have a good grasp of tense.That puts you leagues ahead than most aspiring writers based on the fics i've read.I also love that this story has a direction as well.
2nd,I don't like however,that the protagonist just takes threats to his well being so casually,and being afraid of ones opinion to the shown degree puts him on par with fluttershy.I kinda think that makes him spineless and it irritates me.(i'm also aware that this could merely be an attempt at humor though I am afraid it is lost on me.)
Despite my dislike however,It's not enough to just give up on this wonderful work of art so I shall just bear it and enjoy the rest of the story.However,I fear that if this behaviour persists I won't be able to continue,I really don't like it,I guess I have respect/fair treatment issue's or something.
Anyway,I wish you luck with your writing and I'm giving this a thumbs up,I hope you take this opinion of mine in the spirit in which it was meant.
She woke him up with pokes and ice cold water, dragged through half a town and now this?! How he didn't snap at her right there? I'd be furious by that point.
I love this story. Nondis is a pretty relatable character. I love how the chapter starts w some ideal or troupe or whatev and then ends w repeating it yet altered like to reflect the lesson learned so to speak
Because Pinkie is banned from using the coffee machine.
Laying on "Nondis is a massive pussy" a bit thick there. Spike's a dragon, sure, but he's also like two feet tall. Let this poor bastard have some balls.