Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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I like the first chapter; I'll be watching this story, my friend
Well, he last line was 'Where is the bathroom?'.
My only complaint is that I have Aspergers and I'm pretty sure Kristen Stewert doesn't. She's just an idiot. Great story so far though! Can't wait to see what's next!
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Oh god. Is "not disclosed" going to be the new "anonymous?"
*nods sagely in agreement*
Then why in God's name did you put that horribly out of place toy line crack about Cadence?! That goes beyond casual Brony reference straight to Hardcore Brony.
hell yes
Something I've noticed while reading HiE stories is that if I ended up in Equestria and the ponies acted the same way with me as they do to the humans in the stories and if I reacted the way I actually would to the way their acting towards the human (Both with what they say and other things, like how Twilight didn't even bother asking if she could examine him before she started messing with his body parts with her magic), I'd:
A. Be in jail
B. Be on the run
C. Have everybody scared of me
or
D. Have a whole lot of ponies hate me
Mostly because my reaction to things like that is to be annoyed and sarcastic for the most part (Even though I'm generally a somewhat quiet and kind guy), I mean seriously, he's wearing CLOTHES, odds are pretty good he's sentient.
I'm sure you can imagine from this, I have trouble connecting to others, especially since half the time people think I'm mad when in reality I'm just extremely annoyed because they won't leave me alone for two fucking minutes when I don't want to talk and they force me to.
Like right there. My reaction would be something along the lines of: "I'm not a goddamn pony, I'm a fucking man. I'm a gentleman not a fucking gentlecolt!" or something along those lines
Sorry, rambling.
I l.ovle this so far but he is a little bit of a wuss. I cant wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens next to them all.
To Do List
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1. Wake up in a different realm
2. Meet a bunch of magic creatures
3. Instead of wondering about important things like how to get home..... You wonder where the bathroom is.......
4. Hear a slowclap.
My average day
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Sounds like my life
Good story so far I guess,there are still quite a few grammatical errors that could easily be fixed.Id help but I am using phone,therefore my lazy ass isn't doing shit to learn how to do said help.well good luck,etc.grammar probably gets better anyhow...so yeah.
Yes, it is a MUST to know where the nearest bathroom is at all times. Never know when 'the trots' are going to strike.
"The University of Texas"? Really? You have got to be kidding.
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Humm, yes. That list seems correct, but you forgot step 2.5: Freak out when magic touches you hand, but not when Luna holds a map up.
Just figured I'd give reading this story a shot
Why is this joke not used more often?
earth to dumass you can speak remmember
Tbh, there was a bit too much meta commentary, but everything else seems good
Is there a reason why this adult man is acting like a scared 9 year old.
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new world he knows nothing about and the magic feels like a flame on him
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Like you would be any more manly in this kinda situation?
Alright, to recap: you saw a pink pony and instead of freaking out a little bit like a normal person you scream and run around like a headless chicken, hitting a branch and passing out for a long while. Then, you spend five minutes sitting there just kinda going through the motions, answering a few questions and asking a couple, but mostly just staring into space while they're trying to talk to you - and you know that four of them are princesses, by the way, so listening and responding is kind of a good idea since you don't know what this world is like yet. And then, you had a little magical glow on you that was obviously not harmful or malicious in any way - and by the way, you saw it already when Luna held up the map so you know it exists, and it was announced beforehand that Twi was gonna look at you - and you freaked out like a bitch once again. Flailing, screaming, lashing out, the whole nine yards. All of this, while claiming to be an adult.
And then what do you do? "AAAAAH, I'M SCAAAAARED, HIDING UNDER THE COVERS WILL MAKE THEM GO AWAAAAAY."
Get out of here with your butthurt victim mentality. You're being stupid; own up to it and stop being stupid going forward. They all have a right to judge you. I certainly am!
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I wouldn't be more manly than this guy, but I would be more rational. Even at my lowest points, I have NEVER screamed and flailed and lashed out like a monkey. I have NEVER run away from my problems by hiding under the covers.
This guy had already been up and at it for awhile before the doors opened and he met the main cast. He said he had met other ponies already. He had what were clearly Royal Guards in the room with him. He should have spent that time getting information from them, not waiting around.
...
Overall, good story. I'll read further. The MC was just being dumb for this chapter. That's pretty common in all of fiction, so it's not like I can fault you for it. It's fine. Everything else is great though; the pacing is just my style, the internal monologues and little comments are amusing, and the guy is vaguely like me so I can do that self-projection thing that I love doing. Thanks for writing.
Nondis? Really? That is the best you could come up with?! It's not even cool or clever! Let me guess, his FULL name is Nondis Script. A play on words to show he's worth absolutely nothing in human society. But that very name completely undermines the whole theme because what kind of straight-thinking parent(s) would give their child such an outlandish and unnatural name?
Yes, I really, really, REALLY don't like that name AT ALL!!!!!!!
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I sense author opinion, but it's hilarious so I can't tell if it's /really/ author opinion or if it's just meta-humor.
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It’s pronounced ‘Albin’ apparently. This was actually submitted as a protest against the naming law in Sweden, which requires parents to submit a name for approval within three months of birth. Unsurprisingly, the name was rejected.
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My Name Is Earl star Jason Lee told Entertainment Weekly he named his son after a song called ‘He’s Simple, He’s Dumb, He’s the Pilot’ by indie-rock band Grandaddy.
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Audio Science
Actress Shannyn Sossamon, best known for her role in A Knight’s Tale, called her son Audio Science. She told the press: ‘We wanted a word not a name, so my boyfriend read through the dictionary three or four times. We were going to call him Science, but thought it might get shortened to Sci, as in Simon.’
And lastly but not least but for these examples
X Æ A-12 the son of Elon Musk.
So the name Nondis is by far not one of the worst and actually not so bad in the first place.
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nah his full name is Nondis Dick
I read like the first 70 chapters of this story before getting busy for a year, only to return and find it finished...
Welp, time to restart my journey lol (Forgot almost everything about this story)