3054519 Well it's a refreshing change of pace that you're starting with him essentially being born there. What's more, you're doing a good job of mixing past and future chapters with enough history and plausible character developments without delving too deeply into random trivia.
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Awesome, I appreciate the feedback!
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Well it's a refreshing change of pace that you're starting with him essentially being born there. What's more, you're doing a good job of mixing past and future chapters with enough history and plausible character developments without delving too deeply into random trivia.
Thanks for the fave!
Any particular part you liked?