Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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I'm hope this one isn't too short.
Pretty good shit my good man
I'm a little confused what it Nondis and Twilight's relationship status at the moment I've kinda lost track of it
Gonna continue reading in a bit, but this seems really off, this line:
"Twilight, I'm coming with you." Celestia said, wishing us well.
Awww, Chrysalis is still alive?
This chapter had everything great in it except for CHRYSALIS GETTING BEHEADED.
...but maybe that's my rage talking.
Anyhoo, I await another chapter, m'lad.
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"Twilight I'm counting on you."
Yikes, I was definitely out of it. Then again, I wrote that part at 2 am.
7211059 lol That explains a lot.
And just at the end of the descent
Though I can understand your desire to be left alone.
Great chapter, absolutely huge, also im helping :D
Man, what a freaking pussy, why would you let Chrysalis live? That is the dumbest thing someone would ever do, you don't let your greatest enemy that is capable of impersonating, manipulating and outright mind-control someone you care about survive! That is just asking for them to come back with such terrible vengeance that they will just kill everyone that they ever cared about in such brutal fashion that it will be a double-edged self destructive conflict. Seriously man, how hard is it just to kill the one person that is the leader of a hostile race? Sometimes you just got to let go of your morals and do what needs to be done, no matter how painful it might be or how much it might haunt you in the future. But this idiot allowed Chrysalis to live, this ending really peeved me to no end.
I'm sorry if this makes me sound like a bad person, but...I have zero sympathy for the changelings or Chrysalis. She kept poking at a bee hive, then got mad when the bees came out and stung her. In other circumstances, Nondis, and everyone in Ponyville(at minimum) would have been captured, enslaved and/or fed on, and you can bet no pleas for mercy would have swayed her. Nondis better not be stupid enough to actually let her go either, busted horn or no. For one thing, showing up with the broken changeling queen would probably go a long way to getting the nobility to get the message not to f*ck with him.
Oh, another error I noticed. You keep using 'conscious' where you mean 'conscience'. 'conscious' is as if you're awake. Common mistake online.
Another amazing chapter, as usual. Finally caught up on it. XD Disrupted my plans today, but at least it's a good type of disruption. XD ^_^ Wonder if his words will make Chrysalis realize what it is she's had her own Changelings do.
Mfw I see this chapter had almost tripple the word count of the last one.
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So. Many. References!
But my favorite one was this
So did anyone else get a boner when Jacqueline showed up?
...
Really? I'm the only one?
Please sir my I have some more
7210919 Well... It's complicated.
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You son of a bitch, another great chapter lol He should of just killed her while shouting "YES!...YES!"
This was a great chapter. And I hope you enjoy seeing OKC for the last few games they have
7211402 Meh. I disagree.
Man, I know I should be glad 'n stuff about the Changeling thing ending.
But thanks to the finale of season 6, now I can see they can be good, and what they could've been if they were shown kindness then fast pieces of medal into their body.
I mean, if changelings looked like this instead:
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Would you honestly kill them?
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No, seriously, they were looking awesome as they were. But no, they should have changed their appearance to this horrorfest. Now they are Skittl-bug-mooses and have to live with that. Darn, when i saw that first time I felt sorry for Chrysalis in a few ways at once.
BTW, sometimes the most cute looking thing is the most dangerous. Actions are what's important.
As for example look at this fella:
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It's qb from Madoka Magica. Would you honestly kill him? No? Your funeral.
after what i just read one song sprong in to my mind ... let the body hit the floor let the body hit the floor
That was one clusterbuck of a chapter. I mean don't get me wrong I loved it and it was really exciting. I'm just not sure how I feel about being sick from worry and horror and terror and anxiety all at the same time.
Holy Fucking Momma that was awesome ! :D
awww I wanted to call out the Jackie credence from earlier in the story to look smart. then you had to ruin it in the author comment.
*sad face.gif.
also no pity for chrysalis here. (ok a little when she started breaking down, but quickly remembered what she has done.) also no real satisfaction over her defeat. it is simply what has been done, what she herself has built up to. it was always going to be messy for both sides considering her power. powerful leaders altar have a high cost to those around them to be taken down. though to sum up my thoughts on this.
chrysalis: you're a monster.
Nondis: and you're the reason I'm here. I am, after all, exactly what you asked for when you summoned me.
Lovely chapter, very intense and had me on edge, but what was that COP-OUT at the end there!?! BOOOO, Moralities? Im not like you, I'm better than you??? ZZZZZZZZZ, thats as much of an anime ending as I have EVER read! Cant use that whole "she did inadvertently save your life" like cmon, cant use that as a counter point when she saved him just by happenstance! Ik their was more that put him back and forth and im not actually mad or upset over the ending, but damn, I feel just as blue-balled as Nondis has been the whole beginning half of this story. Wanted him to scream some Shield Hero type shit like, "you deserve this, ill make you pay for what you did too me!" and like slice her, plant the knife next to her head or something . Idk, im not actually annoyed at all and love the story and chapter, just venting made up emotions
What?
Edit 6/9/2022:
Now I'm feeling bad