Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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The assassins got me this time.
So. Give me more of this amazing drug you son of a bitchS
*Sigh* They lost the body, which means Assasin-Bird might be back... Still, hopefully Nondis gets a chance to shove the souvenir Gaston left him right up Count and Spike's asses.
I've never clicked something so fast in my life. Riveting as always! I hope everything becomes better for you moving forward from such a tumultuous period.
Think you meant Twilight.
It got pretty religious there. Not that I particularly mind. Just surprised.
I don't even care how long it takes you to update cause when you update, goddamn do you go ham, 22k words. Your story is one of the ones i will read the moment i see an update for it as it has kept me hooked for years just like Diaries of a Madman
Still readin', but noticed this: And since springing the trap was my best option, I had to do it in such a way were I had the advantage.
You meant to use 'where' there. Common mistake, I've noticed. But, it's one easily missed, so it's understandable.
Another issue is this incomplete part: Grabbing the machine gun, the flash, a frag, and my shotgun, I "Just sending these guys to cloud nine before we start."
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I probably didn't verify it was Melanie grabbing his hand while simultaneously knocking out Twilight's magic.
Welp, they just lost that big bonus cause of that griffon turd and his pet phoenix, Nondis nearly bit the bullet, and the Count so far looks like is in the clear from being outed. Nondis just cant seem to catch a break can he.
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You'd be surprised.
"Because I haven't had a thrill like this in ages. Obviously you're a keeper, I wouldn't want to kill you too soon, I gotta make sure you're hopes are raised so I can dash them quite spectacularly. It's my whole shtick."
You mean to use 'your' there, not 'you're'.;) And now, back to reading this great chapter for me.^^
Humbreeze quickly recovered and smacked the griffon in the head with his helmet, knocking him lose so that I could pull out my knife and defend myself.
You mean to use 'loose', not 'lose' there. 'lose' is as in win/lose. Also, you got one too many spaces in two locations in that sentence.;)
And now, back to reading this very action paced chapter.:D
Another amazing chapter.
And glad to see you return too. I'm sorry to hear about the bad things that happened while you were gone though. I'm just glad you've had some time to recover emotionally from the loss.:( *hugs*
An amazing chapter really looking forward to more of this great story of yours, wishing you well for the future to come.
Man I just have to say, this was a great chapter. Dispite some minor errors, the great fight scenes and one heck of an arc climax made this chapter well worth the wait. My only disappointment was they didnt try the ambush in the tresure room. A vault is the worst place you could get ambushed in, fucking now way out, the exit and hole in the ceiling as a point of reinforcements... shit place a half dozen cyclops burried under the gold, it was a missed opportunity. Shity assassin couldent set up a proper ambush, and he didnt kill his target. Damn Count should get his money back, any review should be no more than 2 stars.
I only wish the assassin snitched about his ''employer"
Sorry about what happened to you the past month. Love this story and can't get enough of it so do what you need to do first and I know the story will keep on being great.
Damn, Nondis sure took a hell of a lot from that gryphon. Funny thing, I was reading Spacetrawler again just a bit ago, and this seems a bit like Emily and Grwff: the two duked it out constantly, and might have even become friends, keeping each other sharp. But alas, he sacrificed himself for her. Hell, I kind of hope that Gaston did survive, on that regard.
Eeee, do we get to see what all happened in Equestria during the next chapter? If so, that'll definitely be something to look forward to.
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A new chapter?! It must be my birthday! *Checks date* Hmm. Nope, not that. Well, it's someone's birthday somewhere.*shrugs* Woo-hoo!
The mental image that conjures up is quite amusing.
NO! There is finally a new chapter, and I'm already finished!
rule one: dont turn your back on the body
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Aha I see what you did there. Taking a stab in the dark and going to say that the count is going to say 10 wagons, when he shouldn't know how many. Warm? Cold? Eh I guess I will just have to wait and see.
Doesn't matter in the end his orders were to retrieve the two carts ... if they demand the others he can tell them to eat a d*** it's reparations to the families of those they intentionally murdered oh I mean sent to retrieve it. They can scream all they want and complain but if he announces it with a lot of the guard present they either concede or lose the whole guards support.
Oh yah in the end that helmet was good for something ..lol... hope nondis gets that Phoenix for a ally/pet
To be honest. This chapter was the best. I love the jealousy between the characters they wanted from the previous chapters but this one was an eye opener for the main character. Feels like a break from the drama. Don't get me wrong, I love the drama scene but its good to have a break once awhile.
Cheers mate
...So is Humbreeze dead?
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I have a bad feeling.....
Also Nondis needs to listen to the ponies around him. Especially when in a situation that is potentially dangerous. I've only read as far as the part I quoted so I don't know if there's a spoiler that might be made so I'm gonna put up the spoiler tape I have a seriously bad feeling that Nondis won't learn to listen until he finds out the hard way
this nigga playing minecraft
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