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No problem! Fantastic bit of work.

Thanks for the favorite on "Never Again".

Thanks for the watch.

2206820 Well, a pre-reader can never hurt, so I'll definitely keep you in mind in case I need something. Thanks.

2206799 Absolutely, I'm confident your story will be a great one! On the subject of humanity, I'm wondering where he'll strike the balance in how much he reveals of our pitfalls as opposed to how much he'll cover on our achievements. I can't imagine he'd cover current Earth events with Twilight (South China Sea, U.S Election officially turned circus act, NATO/Russia spat, and so on) in any detail, if he even decides to mention them at all; as that probably wouldn't help him sell the whole 'not a threat' thing. And if you're ever need of an editor, I'd be happy to help out. I doubt you'd need one though, going off of the quality of grammar that's been displayed thus far.