Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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1/6: The Young Prince
This is some good shit
Jeez, I need to stop breezing through the chapters so quickly after they’re released. I still have to catch up on the last two for the main story! Really liking this epilogue and having the public health to see (and unfortunately hear) how much of an absolute monster Umbra is . I’m feeling bittersweet about the story with each of these final chapters. As I said before I’m sad that this big, sprawling story is coming to an end after all these years (almost eight, goddamn you have been dedicated as fuck, SillyAnon!) but at the same time I’m glad that the harrowing nightmare that has been the past several dozen chapters will no longer be plaguing our main characters. Thank god I’m off tomorrow so I can hopefully play catch up.
I got to admit that time skip got me mad at first. Then, I remembered it was from different perspectives.
Blank Slate won't be getting one in prison. If prison is anything to go by in our world with how they treat child molesters, I'd hate to be Slate in a prison with magical inmates who could do just as much fucked up shit to a FOAL FIDDLER like him.
Those was kids, KIDS! One was ELEVEN! Fuck that nigga!
As for the father who killed himself, typically pussy ass behavior! He knew what he did & for him to try & not traumatize his daughter only to then do so anyway RIGHT IN FRONT OF HER pissed me off!
Condolences to this little girl.
Eternal suffering for the monster that was her father.
That Shining & Cadance conversation was so adorable. I ain't even know they felt suicidal like that. They truly are a great couple & a lot more fleshed out here than what I've learned from the show about them.
On a side note, it is funny as hell that Flurry Heart's need to be fucked by the Guards just seems to be a commonly accepted thing that I'm seeing. Like the amount of NSWF (mainly that Hooves-art guy, girl, whatever) I've seen of this concept is fucking wild, not to mention the unofficial but pretty much accepted VA for Flurry Heart.
This fandom sometimes 😅
The Trial....
Umbra. Never have I wanted a mothafucka in fiction to suffer as bad as this. That scene where Nondis fights through his trauma & lets everyone including his ABUSER hear what was done to him was really something else.
I know the ol Sunny was up there contemplating on whether or not to kill the stallion who broke her man so bad. The hints of the fire form Celestia has just yearning to break out on Umbra was awesome.
Nondis? I too will get total satisfaction when we get to your chapter & see Umbra meet his end & excruciatingly painful is what I pray that his end will be.
This was a great end to Shining's story. I may not have liked him in earlier chapters but he grew on me over time. Let's hope he can keep his daughter in check before she fucks with more guards...literally.
Now onto Twilight Sparkle. So soon but I'm definitely ready for this one. I might not conclude everything on her story but let's hope it's just as good as this one, if not better!
that ending BWUAHAH
Looks like human tech has been fully integrated into equestrian society
I don't know if you already been asked this question what do you think this story might come into a sequel
I wonder who this cousin belongs to
So seeing as Flurry is ten years old at this point, and after Twilight’s epilogue showed that she still doesn’t have kids fifteen years later, would this cousin she mentioned be Stellar Sunshine, Celestia and Nondis’ firstborn? If I have my math right, she was born about nine years and a few months after the main story. And we know Luna didn’t end up having kids. Can’t think of anyone else it could be.