Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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If you think about it, I haven't had a chapter published since last year. Took me forever, didn't it?
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Great chapter by the way, can't wait for the next.
I really hate the brothers right now. They are doing what every human (besides numnum and the other boys ) does. Get filled with greed. I want them to die. Both of them I don't care how I just want it before they say anything about the gold and gem trade here because that will cause a whole new shit to happen and from there. Full on war
Yew fecking arsehole.
They decided.... To put a Cliffhanger
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They should just die? Before they've even become established? You're a little too quick to pull the switch, aren't you mister executioner?
Interestingly enough, it is Nondis who's taking advantage of this very same trade. When he found out that he could make away with trading off the gold and gems, he did just that and to his own benefit. However, that benefit ends up being a surplus for his duties and aids him. But you seem to forget who these two are related to.
Each character has done/said something to soil their image.
Each has had a moment of being selfish, only going after one's self.
Each character has had their own motives for what they do.
Each character has suffered a consequence.
But who's to say that we are to be judged by our thoughts rather than our actions? If this is how you feel, then everyone should die. Not every thought always becomes an action, a habit, or a lifestyle. The thing about the brothers is that they are in the prime of their youth, they're eager, ambitious, hot-blooded, and sometimes selfish. To each their own, but I've think you've been on the ride long enough to know that a first impression is not always the final one.
But before you go ax-happy, I want you to read something:
Respect the process of character development. Didn't we see the main character grow from being one thing into another? I actually recall someone saying that they didn't like Nondis because he was a pussy, to which I simply replied:
Give him time.
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Now give them time, and let the character grow.
6826043 PREACH!!!
On a side note, after all that buildup... you end it like that? Well I believe we can all agree that This would be an accurate representation of most readers' responses.
are you fk kidding me... that cliffhanger... AGAIN. *Riot*
Well, aside from that it was a great chapter.
6826043 OK it is wrong of me to want that but I hate people like them. All that care about is whats in their pockets. Num didn't care at all
Looks like Shining's got a new recruit.
Seriously? That's how you end this chapter?
Y'know I should be angry, but perhaps I'm just so unbelievably enraged that I've come full circle. Either way the next chapter can't come soon enough. I want to see the brothers around more. Hells get all four of them in Equestria. I'm sure that'll prove most entertaining.
That cliffhanger cluster was about as blunt as a rounded brick. Argh!
Looking forward to what comes next.
Cliffhangers. You're an expert.
I swear to god if twilight and nondis arent staying together im gonna go off the deep end! Ive been following this too long for my hopes to die now!
6825800 Grow up.
I don't know but you gave me the feeling this story will end sometime later this year
6828287 I Swear that he puts Eiichiro Oda to shame on the cliff hangers
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I agree!! Having picked up this story yesterday as I found it in the recently updated section I found when I reached the end of certain chapters to be like a kid waiting for the next episode of their favorite cartoon to come out. Thankfully up until this last chapter I merely had to wait for the page to load. Then this one.......
OMG THE CLIFFHANGER!!!!
It's like when a great anime goes on mid season break right at the start of an epic battle!!
@TheSillyAnon You are too good at this cliffhanger bit.... I can't wait to see the next chapter!!
Ever since I have read this story, I have had a deep hatred of Spike, which is kind of annoying when it comes to reading other stories, but oh well. Keep up the good work!
6861552 Only now does Nondis realize how much he fucked up
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6855158 spike just wants to take out the trash, I like him.
6878024 what you say? images2.villagevoice.com/imager/u/original/6686629/trash.jpg
The ending to every chapter had me like
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go commit atheism
Really! That is the lowest of troupes! Cliffhangers need to be banished to the Sun!
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You do realize that atheism is kinda impossible for AJ and the rest of the Mane 6, right? I mean it's not like they can deny the existence of Princesses Celestia, Luna, Cadance, and Twilight, considering the fact that they may have met the Alicorns a time or two.
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