Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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I'm trying. But I hope you all are safe and relatively happy. Just please find a way to smile.
When this story updates I always wonder why there is a "Comedy" tag and not a "Tragedy", "Horror" or "Drama" tag.
That aside, I confess that I follow this story for all the wrong reasons at this point. There is so much narrative tension between the evil schemers and their agents always getting away with heinous acts, and Nondis keeps being beaten down and tortured in so many ways that I wonder if this is just some kind of hidden torture fiction with a fantastic story and lore behind it? I simply don't see any possible good ending or even bittersweet ending for Nondis, not even as a martyr (which he might become if he keeps doing the things he does).
Don't take this the wrong way, your worldbuilding and characterizations are superb in my opinion. Its just that I don't see anything positive going on for the main character anymore. No reward imaginable will be enough for this amount of torture, and everyone seems to be on the way of hating him. For example, even if for some ludicrous reason all the plain evil and disgusting beings that fill the ranks of the "bad guys" die horribly as they should, it will not be enough at this point... and if that's what's going on it's ok. Its your story after all, and it seems you have something planned for it at least. That's way more that some of us can say.
Again, my opinion so please take it with a grain of salt. I honestly thought it would turn a bit brighter after the arismapi arc and well, I'm just waiting the other ball to drop now. Stay safe in these trying times, and keep writing your magical horse words.
This story is the true definition of "complicated"
The passion in your writing inspires me and I become envious: your prose is nonpareil! I am sorry of the suffering you and family is undergoing. Thank you for your magical words of fantasy; know that they are not in vain.
every chepterupdate is a dusy awesome to read. form your revialtion how your own life went, im imprest you ceep up.
it takes strong people to live in shitty times
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I’m not much of a commenter or keep up to date with my own stories this year has been hard on everyone. I’m sorry to hear you’re going through so much struggle but I believe you can make it through you’re a very talented story teller and I’ve loved reading and rereading this story. Hope life takes an upswing soon keep strong.
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I have to agree. Every situation Nondis finds himself in either seems to fall apart or offers no benefit. It’s like he’s in a series of continuing situations with more potential dangers and complications than good things, more mistakes being made and the stuff where he really sends to enjoy himself being set aside for more tension.
Or maybe I don’t know what I’m talking about. It’s just these characters keep suffering; Melanie, Twilight and Nondis in particular. I just want them all to find a satisfying conclusion for everyone instead of one or two being fine while others are tossed to the wayside.
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I think an "Alt. Universe" tag would be appropriate as well, since the actual Equestria from the show doesn't have anything like 'Canterrot' or other extremely dark things like that.
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It’d also be appropriate for some of friends choices the characters make. I can’t see the canon characters from the show, even in a more adult setting, letting some things happen (such as Celestia allowing something like Law Processu Aprobatio to come to pass.
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I’m so terribly sorry to hear what you’re going through, man. If I could I’d give you a hug and help ya however I can. We’re all here for you, ‘Non. It’s absolutely understandable if you’ve gotta get away from this for a while in order to tend to irl matters, as those always come first. Gotta keep yourself as healthy and well as you can. We’ll always be here with open arms, we just want you to be okay.
Stay safe and keep that chin up, bro. We’re rootin’ for ya!
Swahili *eyes widen* that... is... an amazing choice for the native language of Kalimba and Zecora.
Though according to Google the translation isn't quite right.
Beautiful flowers are lovely
Beautiful flowers are lovely
When you look at them, they are radiant
Though I make no promises as to the accuracy.
Awesome update man keep at it
You're just now noticing that you're pretty much screwed 6 ways from everyday and then some? What took you so long?
Wait wait wait.... doesn't Kalimba have some sort of STD?!?!
Приветствую вас автор! Большое спасибо вам за историю и за то что продолжаете над ней работу. Я только молюсь за ваше здоровье. Всех благ вам и не забывайте, что мы читатели душою с вами даже из России!
What a chapter.... Nice.
XD That's hilarious.
Ouch about the funeral. I hope that something changes to make it go better for ya.:(
I'm just waiting for the day he remembers he is from texas. Big guns. Big brothers. Big damage. Air out the whole inner circle and those under them. Power vaccum is filled with blue and her brother and those they trust. That takes care of the leadership in the underbelly. Then there work your way down until all of canterrot is fixed. Blow the brains out of all who stand in the way. (maybe even get rid of some of those Parliament members by using a "mysterious assassin" )
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Wasn't she strongarmed into it through some kind of bullshit power play involving a piece of legislation snuck into a bill she signed off on, that she didn't catch because the politicians were deliberately swamping her with paperwork to wear her out mentally in preparation of getting their bullshit through? It's been a while so I probably have that at least partially wrong.
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Yeah it’s been a while, a good million and a quarter words back. But I still don’t see Celestia allowing herself be trod upon like that. Unless I’m as forgetful as I think I am, there’s essentially nothing stopping Celestia from just going, “fine, have it your way. Princesses can’t get some dick whenever they want? No more sun. Welp Luna, looks like you get that eternal night after all.”
Yeah, she might be decried as some sort of despot by the parliament, but I’d think the ponies of Equestria overall would side with her, their loving matriarch, rather than the slimy politicians.
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No. It was after Nightmare Moon was banished and Celestia was still 'beating herself up' because of it. She succeeded in basically recreating the Crystal Mirror portal, though instead of the EqG world it connected to an alternate version of the ponies world. In it Sombra was Good. They fell in love with each other but when the *gags in disgust* nobles *spits on the ground* found out about it they accused her of essentially being a traitor because Sombra.
At least I'm fairly certain that's right.... I hope I'm not getting stories mixed up in my head.
But then Celestia was stronghoofed into agreeing to the whole Providia nonsense and over the years it became harder and harder to figure a way out of it all.
I'd have to reread it to be sure though.
TheSillyAnon,
I again commend your writing--the prose, world-building, and character development are simply at a level that only professionals manage to achieve. It is always a pleasure to escape the world for a little bit and dive back into the fascinating narrative you have created, and are continuing to develop every update.
On a more personal note, I do empathize with your situation. This year alone has taken five of my family with it. The most recent of them occurred this past November which saw the passing of my father at 52. My mother and I were the only ones who really planned his funeral. I'm keeping you in my thoughts and wishing you strength, peace, and good fortune.
And you didn't help them on their quest for beans?! They only look like that when needing to feed their addiction to coffee!
I need a shirt, bumper sticker, and maybe even a tattoo of this right here.