Nondis is a man who managed to find himself Equestria. While Twilight and the other princesses try to find him a way home, he realizes that finding a way back is only a minor problem in comparison to his growing attachments to some of the Mane Six.
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Released at 10:30 am. Comment may be a little later but I MADE IT!
Oh gods, I have so many horrible possibilities running through my head as to what Twilight's 'operation' might have entailed, and if any of them are true, Celestia deserves a megaton punch from Luna for giving into the parliament's so-called law. Losing her wings is actually one of the LEAST horrible things I'm imagining right now. ...I'll have lost all faith in Celestia if she'd rather have Twilight physically mutilated rather than have her lose her title, no matter how shit the law is...and if the law actually includes the mutilation, then add another mega punch to earlier.
Also, getting real tired of Twilight's shit. Yeah, Nondis hasn't been perfect throughout all this, but he's suffering at least emotionally because of all the shit she's going through because of Celestia being a wuss, and he's gotten nothing but shit for just wanting to try and keep Twilight from suffering more.
So wait, TWilight lost her alicorn wings as punishment for making love/sex with someone of common blood or something? You gotta be fuckin kiddin me!
Wait, it sounded like she lost her wings 100% down to her body, but at the end it apppers she still has her wings as she was able to unfurled then and they simply clipped the feathers. Can u give a little more clarification on that?
Was wondering when he was gonna spend time back in his own world. Now I'm waiting for Twilight to follow him sometime.
I'm not convinced that operation had 100% to do with her wings, and that ending makes me all the more skeptical. Curse you and your ambiguousness
5571756 Next chapter.
5571752 I think you should read a little further. Twilight didn't lose her wings. But I think I did good in luring you in if you thought that was the case.
5571772 Funny thing is this: It's only been four days since he went back, and it's been well over ten chapters. I'm writing at a snail's pace, and I'm not very happy about it.
But at the same time, I like the drama this situation has produced. It continues to breed and give me more material to write. CURSE YOU, IMAGINATION!
5571826 I'm actually really liking where this fic has been going, plus you update a hell of a lot more frequently than a good number of authors I follow.
ok I'm a bit confused, how is wing clipping supposed to be a punishment? well I get how it can be a punishment, but are they really making it public that Twilight got her freak on? wouldn't a proper punishment for Twilight be like a magical restraint, I actually thought that mysterie about the doctor being a plastic surgeon and the cover was twilight was getting wing enhancement, but just a straight up wing clipping just seemed barbaric ins politically daming.
Just when I thought this story has reached maximum craziness, it climbs even more. Hope the next chapter comes soon!
5571799 Oooh your right, clipped wings. Ahh, well done then :). You are really good at getting peoples emotions runnin all over the place. ^_^
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Given that the post-operation scene involved blood, recovery, and pain meds...I don't think it was a simple wing clipping. Like I said, the stuff in my mind is ranging to the horrible side of the possibilities...especially as the whole things revolve around stuff of a sexual nature.
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that's why I believe to my theory about the plastic surgery was actually correct, I'd imagine that the special two tone wings that Princess cadence and Luna have are not natural as a result of wing enhancement surgery. but cutting feathers is like cutting a dog's toenails cut too closely to the quick it will bleed and cause lots of pain, my theory is that if they were cutting the feathers off as a means of punishment she will have to wait quite some time before they regrow.
Clipped feathers? I do hope that they can grow back, but that does seem to be a fitting yet less harsh punishment, which I honestly find good if they can grow back, though not for a long while. Possibly due to still planning to marry and whatnot.^^
5571799 YOU SON OF A GUN
you had me going there for a while so what happens now dose twilight go into his world and search for him or something like that
I said it once, I said it a number of times, and I'll say it again...Nondis needs to get with someone other than Twilight. Until him and Twilight can get their own sh*t together. And when is Spike going to show up to lay the smack down on Ponyville? Possible before Rarity's feelings for Nondis is found out.
yeah that's it I'm am done the reaction to mutilation is to unbelievable, they just accept it as the norm because of some incident ages ago. thats the the final straw for me.
When, (and/or if) Nondis and Twilight get there relationship straightened out, there shall be a very harsh government reformation in Equestria. Until then, let us follow the drama.
Clipping primary feathers will prevent birds from any real flying but is the same true of ponies? Pegasi wings aren't nearly large or strong enough for something as big as a pony to fly without magic. Personally I expected the surgeon to cut some tendons, effectively rendering the wings useless for flight.
Given the ending of this chapter, I'm guessing Twilight is gonna lock down the portal for the duration of the approval process or shut it down permanently. Remember, separation was a consequence of breaking her vows.
Those politicians deserve to be gelded for supporting that stupid law.
Human kind craves happiness,peace of mind,and closer. When one can not even one of these simple but almost impossible concepts we feign already achieving them. Wait a minute. If she didn't lose her wings then what the hell did they do to her?
5572523 It said within the last couple of paragraphs that her feathers were clipped, but nothing else was mentioned of what happened to her. Though they could also have been pulled out. Honestly either alone would've been better to what I was imagining.
anyone getting the feeling she is gonna close the portal on nodis? And I'm getting more and more angry with this story, I loved it for the most part, but good damn, Celestia is a coward, Twilight can't trust Nodis, and Nodis doesn't stand up for himself enough.
The easy way to handle all this were to simply kill every single noble that want to use that dumb ass law to their favor, then tear said law to shreds and then write a new better law!!!
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A little bit of Twilight is all I need
A little bit of Pinkie Pie is what I see
A little bit of Rarity in the sun
A little bit of Sunset all night long
A little bit of Melanie here I am
A little bit of you makes Nondies your man
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I think it's presumed that they will grow back as the same thing happened to Celestia all those years ago and she can fly now.
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I agree with you 100%. In the last chapter, I commented how Celestia just likes to get walked all over. By either enemies or the politicians. She's supposed to be this ruler and yet she can't do anything. She's no better than the Queen of England, a figurehead and that's it.
5573828 Ah. Good point.^_^
5573067 Exactly what I feel! Like Nondis is nothing more than a doormat, being walked over and messed with by everypony around him.
5573675 I am...Sooo very happy someone got it
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If she closes the portal, that would basically signify the end of the story, and from what the author has stated, its nowhere near the end yet. Although, that would really work for more ideas for his brain to work over. Not like he doesn't have that problem to begin with right now anyway.
Hmmm...if twi still has her wings...then what was her REAL punishment?...I have an idea and I'm pretty sure I'm right!......but I'm still not 100%...
Aside of the intense emotions going on and into something slightly off topic, the other half of me is wondering how many roman numerals will be used by the time this adventure ends.
How about Blister In The Sun by Violent Femmes?
Also, it's The Beatles not Beetles.
5574168 I didn't mean permanently close it, temporally close it. But she could start off as permanently then her friends make he see the error of this. And Nodis thinks its over, and maybe eventually finds someone else, I.E that old friend of his. But seriously I hate, hate, hate the fact twilight lost her wings, because Celestia views the nobles more important than her. And yet she apparently saw Twilight as a daughter. No real being would let the people / ponies / beings, they love that much, get hurt. She could have got rid of the law, lied and cover up the incident and so many other things. And then there is the fact that, the nobles would off changed over time, its natural they do. And seriously she over a 1000 years old, and she hasn't figured out when it comes to love, you shouldn't care what others think. You know the saying "Love doesn't care who you love, so why should you?"
5574919 When you really think about it, Nondis had to bend over backwards to prove or show that he loved Twi. He had to go through all of this phyqical and emotional crap, just to be allowed to be near her. Constantly, hes's being questioned on whether or not he's either loyal, or tried to thrown under a bus. He can't make descions without somepony holding his leash, but Twi can so hows that fair? Honestly, he needs an apology from Twilight and others, since hes been constantly apologizing throughout the story. That and the practical joke AJ and Dash pulled earlier, had really bad timming, so it feels as if hes nothing more then a joke to them.
Seriously, ponies need to be lining up to apologizie to him.
Things changed from a thousand years to know, first of all, there is proof of the portal thanks to Twilight, second she have Discord and the elements that are not forced by any law and they are free to do whatever they want so Celestia could very well force them to do a new law that cancel the previous law.
If not? Then maybe Discord could play a little or force them and the Elements are free to dissapear
P.S: If it's true that she still have her wings (I think not) Maybe the punishment is force Nondis to leave and broke the couple.
I love it
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I wasn't expecting her to close the portal permanently and it wouldn't be the first time she's chosen to distance herself when things got tough. However, even if she did it would hardly mean the end of the story since that portal didn't exist when our hero first crossed over. He could very well attempt to recreate the circumstances that lead to him being in Equestria in the first place if he suddenly found the portal to be closed.
By this point it's apparent that you're intentionally making Nondis act as stupid and bone-headed as possible to make some kind of point, but it's still incredibly aggravating that every single time he shows initiative or any kind of willpower at all is when it is to his own detriment. There's only so much active self-sabotage you can make a character perform before people just lose all sympathy for them, you know what I mean?
I personally think that at this point, Nondis would be better off with Melanie or Rarity. Twilight's situation is too full of bullshit and I'm sure he doesn't want to homewreck Pinkie.
A lot of the resent chapters seem to have had some pretty dark aspects to them. Not just this. Even though this would be one of the lighter ones. I expect it.
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To be fair, his character is basically stupid and bone-headed.
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That doesn't really help any. It just makes "being frustrating to read about" a permanent feature of his instead of a temporary plot contrivance. It's one thing to intentionally write a character who's just such a nimrod that the readers will want to see them suffer, but it's a different thing when you're meant to sympathize and can't because all their problems are their own fault and they just. won't. listen.
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Yes. As far as I'm concerned, it's one of my bigger issues with him. He's basically been slapped in the face with relationship issues, many from pinkie pie, and is apparently stupid enough to not realise there's more to it. He's obviously educated, but also completely lacks in perception in need of the other's hints.
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Hell, he doesn't even need outside opinions. He's either possessed or literally insane; either way the voices in his head keep telling him he's being a dumbfuck and he still finds ways to fuck up the most obvious things.
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You don't talk to yourself in your own head?
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Do you regularly find yourself in the position of arguing with yourself that you're an idiot and overlooking something important, and then don't tell yourself what it is?
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Clearly one of this guy's biggest issue is hindsight not being 20/20. He's dumb enough to not understand that there's a crime happening in front of him, purposely and obviously made to frame him, and when he is aware of it, he's too busy debating on whether it actually happened or not to realise he's too late.
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In-story, that might be the reason, but I just can't buy it as a person. I've done stupid things in my life, including, but not limited to, sleeping with people when I really shouldn't have, but I've never had an "inner monologue" that was quite that acerbic about it being a bad idea and me being an idiot for even considering it. There's a point of internal dissociation that you can't cross without being just not of sound mind anymore. I think he just has Discord on the brain. Or brain damage. Not that you can really tell the difference...