A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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I'd like to read this not underlined please.
7929595 I have no idea as to why it's underlined. I'll repost the story
Question, why are everybody calling Pinkie Pie Cuntie on this chapter? I get that Max refers to her like that for the invasion of privacy, but why do all the other characters call her Cuntie?
7929611 Because this is Max's journal, so he's writing it. They say Pinkie, he writes Cuntie
I sorta liked the underlined text. I always read with the page on ultra dark too so it was cool and easy to read through :)
I understand the concept of PRIVATE journals. My sis is tried to cut open my safe box that has about 7 or so diarys in it plus all of my money.
This "journal" is surprisingly interesting in that a lot of the events here are something that could very well actually happen IRL to someone or multiple someones
For some maybe all or most of the events happen and for some only a few or just one happens. The order of the events may not be the same but still... you get the point, right?
7937222 Well, it is a journal, and the ponies aren't immeasurably different from normal people.
7939515 true
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The reason it's underlined is because you failed to properly close the ending of the underlining of the chapter title. You can see the /u] right there.
There's a lot of these little moments where words are missing or aren't typed correctly. Makes it difficult to read sometimes
Typos are fun
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I'm leaving that typo in there because it's amusing, but I fixed the other one you mentioned
Well...
That's an odd way to keep time...
How does that work? Are there different "levels" of morning wood for him that let him tell time or...
I feel like that isn't normal for him to be able to tell time by looking "up" at his "cock", also, why does he need to look up to see it? Is it on his forehead?
LOL I found that typo pretty funny, by the way, just replace "cock" with "clock" and you'll have that fixed.
I love the journal outlook. Diaries of a Madman does the same thing, except the character writes that he's in the room as they read and is about to stab them and such. It's so entertaining, and a surprisingly good running gag.
Wow Twilight. You called your friend Pinkie Cuntie.. Wow. HAhahahaha
Wow!! Applejack!! Wow!!
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As much as i thought so, I realized that he was going to replace any instance someone said her name with that.
After reading this far, I am curious as to why there is not a Drama tag on this story.
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Because there are already plenty of tqgs
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I knew I shouldn't have let myself believe I was the first to properly notice it, but it gave me several chuckle worthy mental images and I was hopeful. Damn.
Made it this far hopefully there more story less sex. Also the diary part, if it was me personally I don't think pinkie would have made it in one peace. But then again I have trust issues, and anger issues... I also don't handle betrayal very well.
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I couldn't stop laughing when I read that Typo. I gotta use that in a sentence at the right time. Maybe at 12-o-cock.
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A whole new meaning to high noon and long day
One word:
Jesus.
This story needs him. In every sense of the word.
Also, personal opinion, it is frustrating how the relationship between Fluttershy and Max is like a YoYo. In your future works, I recommend more time passing, not for the characters, but for the reader.
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It's something I tackle better later on in the chapters, though pacing is always tough for me tbh.
Jesus. Irony. Irony is hard when I know you left this comment before 18.good shit
Damn, yours tells the time? Mine only does two things, and it doesn’t do either terribly well anymore. (Well, just got a new kidney two months ago, so it’s doing one of them a little better.)
Holy shit how did he teach it to tell time?
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You don't use yours as a sundial?
I personally disliked how submissive and forgiving he’s becoming. I really missed when he used to throw knifes at everyone, those where the days.
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Mm, thats a tasty comment right there. Suffer with Max. Feel his pain. Get the feels, fam
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Tell me, Are we getting some sweat revenge ? ‘Cause this is actually annoying me. I wish max would go Rambo mode in their asses.
Ok, he says he doesn’t want to add more people and in the same chapter he does, I personally don’t know what kind of friendship they have, If anything like what happen to max happen to anyone they would end their friendship in less than a minute, specially if it’s as short life as Max’s. Btw I would love for Pinkies actions to have permanent consequences.
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Why is Max being more forgiving and submissive? Why is he putting up with their shit? Why is he not just cutting his losses?
I'm confused, why are pinkie's friends calling her cuntie, lol. Another mixup like the to/too find and replace moment?
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A Thief's Tale is a journal written by Max. He writes 'Cuntie', but they did say 'pinkie'. He's just difficult.
Pulp Fiction, lol