A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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If it was possible, I'd give you more of my likes/thumbs up for your work. And almost 40k chapter? Nothing better, almost like a birthday present. But my birthday is on 27th may, so yeah. Well done.
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Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Heress hoping the next ones satisfy as well
haha, fuck yes.
an absolutely exceptional chapter.
Poor Beige is going to be totally broken the way Romulus has been indoctrinated. which means it doesnt matter where he ends up, he has the not there problem messing him up.
SIAC is going bad, real bad, and I hope Max has at least unconciously noticed it or has noted it down elsewhere. Its got Bluebloods all over it.
Well, thats current current Second Level Interupt returned from, next oits one night in Mexicolt with Max playing with switching on a Krang?
Sweet Celestia!! The self awareness is off the charts!!
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I'd hate for my life to be fanfiction. It'd be a load of barnacles.
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The SIAC might look bad to you, but there's literally no way for them to be conventionally evil. They're a true blue organization for helping people under the rule of Dark Magic, and there's no way for them to go back to their wicked ways without divine intervention of some kind.
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Meta Metal is Baby Metal
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@'s wot u tink m8
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Shit, dude. I made the cunts hypocritical because a lot of people in my life and those I've heard of through others are hypocrites. I think it's human nature to be a hypocrite in at least a few aspects of life, so that's why some characters don't practice what they preach.
As for Max being a doormat, I don't think that's really true. He makes sure people are well aware of the fact that people piss him off and most of the time he gets something out of making sacrifices, or he just fucks life up. I believe Max's leniency gets explained at some point in the story as fear of abandonment, which isn't unlikely if you psychoanalyze his actions throughout the story. Still, opinions are what they are, and that seems to be a pretty common one, but that's just how the dood do, if it makes you feel any better.
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After a little research on that one, I learned that Max would've most likely been encased in an eternal stone coffin that would have formed around his body if he'd fallen into the magma. I say he would never have another chance to have conscious thought since the intense heat would fry his brain the second it formed, so I call it perma-death.
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At least every sex scene is skippable.
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I get that part, it's not the mistreatment that pisses me off but the fact he does nothing about it. Which to me just reinforces all the abusive crap they put him through and damages him even more.
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You put up with a lot when you're afraid of losing someone. At least, that's what I've experienced.
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Ah, the final chapters haven't been posted, so I can't mark it as complete quite yet. I don't know what you mean as far as Kaid and his Twilight since Kaid chose to get Blue as his Other instead of a girlfriend. Kaid still loves Twilight, but he's not in love with her, and he hasn't been since he was put into the mindscape. I thought that him living with Blue without a Twilight in the house would tip people off, but I often assume shit and make an ass of myself.
As for everything in the mindscape; they don't need outside help. They let Max alter their minds for the better so that they would be hard-pressed to ever even feel the slightest bit lonely, or even come close to being sad unless certain circumstances made it so that Twilight(s) or Blue disappeared from the mindscape. That's the only way the Others can get lonely, and Max did that because he's paranoid about letting them have control of his body.
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Oh, now I get it. Kinda thought Kaid end up with unconditional love too and I thought you just didn't mention her since they decided to keep things very slow and live in the different houses for a while or something. Kaid tend to grow after all, didn't he? Well, it's a mindskape. This shit is weird. Makes sense, though. And you already introduced your characters to MLP and let Max question his own existence anyway. :)
The fourth wall is having some trouble patching itself up after that chapter.
I think you're missing a part of your statement here. You go from this sentence to a new paragraph.
Reading this on my LG stylo 5 i just got i am pleased kaid likes my brand of phone
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I am also a stylo 5 owner, and I am quite fond of it for the most part. Gets a little laggy if you open app after app after app, but keeping it reasonable earns good results