A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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Dunno if you're doing a reread or just picking the story back up, but welcome back, my dude.
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Well I figured that I should check out the og chapters because, to be honest, I'm putting off writing the next chapter for my story rn
Well that's how it started now I haven't written a single thing for a few days because I'm reading this
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I totally don't get that. Never ever in my life. Nope, don't understand the feeling at all ;-;
Certainly haven't procrastinated for days on end while reading other shit, no siree. Not- Not uh... Not me!
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Right...
I've finally gotten around to reading all of the rewritten chapters, and I've got to say the they really are an improvement. It might just be that my memories are getting confused with the later chapters, but overall Max seems like a much more realistic personality and his relationship with Twilight seems far less toxic, and it's heartwarming to see more of the family building between Max and Spike. Fuck Rapeity.
I can't wait until you get more chapters ready for me to read, I'm almost tempted to continue with the OG ones, but you've changed the tone of the story and characters enough that it is a jarring transition between them so I won't be doing that.
Keep up the excellent work dude, this has always been one of the most memorable fics on this site.
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Hell yeah, glad you've enjoyed the read! Also glad to hear that the rewrites are doing it better lmao.
I really wanted to make Max more... Well, not slightly psychotic, or rather just more 'rational' as compared to what he could've been. That being said, the redeveloping of Max's romance with Twilight has been... A lot closer to what I wanted it to be from the beginning. The OG Max and Twilight spiraled a little harder and much faster than intended.
Having Max be more of a part of Spike's life just makes sense, and pretty much just filling his time in Equestria. A lot of the rewrites is developing and clarifying the bonds Max has with the people in his life.
Fuck Rarity
Thanks for the kind words, and happy reading