A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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Well, it's going to be interesting as to what you are going to do on earth this time around.
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It's a rather large part of why this chapter took so long. Between weaving parts together and keeping necessary events while trying to rework them for the later bits... Big Block time.
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I can imagine. If you're trying to keep the events to make it make sense with what you have on RR while trying to rework it... Good luck. Maybe a third ending might be easier.
Another good chapter! I liked the changes to how Max got to earth with Cap G taking a more active role from the beginning
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Along my own lines of thinking, I'd say. While I was much more satisfied with the second ending, it still just doesn't quite sit well on the stomach so to speak. And having like, four different endings kind of suits the multiverse-aspects of the original canon anyway. Things to think on.
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Thank ya thank ya. Main concern with the chapter (beyond the logisitics with the rest of the story) was the more active role Godly Coleman has to take in the rewrite for it to set up the later stuff... Which is still continuity stuff.
Either way, thanks for reading
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Well, whatever you decide, I'm game. I've been keeping up with this for years now, I'm willing to see another ending.
Alright, Revenant, I'll wait and see how this one goes.