A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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Nice story so far.
5667530 Thanks. The next chapter should be up by sometime tomorrow.
Nice story, but please stop using parentheisis. You almost have zero reason to use them.
It's suppose to be
Granted, life hasn't been all honey and roses for me. I do make the most out of it, albeit with other people's belongings, but, I digress.
The commas take the place of parenthesis. If it's a thought, make it a seperate sentence, and if you wanna go farther put the thought in italics.
5668311 Thanks for telling me before I did the same thing in the next chapter! When I proofread, I'll make sure to keep that in mind
5668321 Yeah, other then that you did a fine job proofreading. I'm liking the story, so I'll countinue.
Funny how Rainbow Dash is just waiting for something to come out of the Everfree forest before smashing into it. One would think she was doing this as a fun sort of sport. Like... "Wait at the entrance of the forest and kill any living thing that's not a pony that comes out of it." game. What fun!
Well, it looks like this guy just met Rainbow.
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pretty sure he was raped
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Delete this comment even if it was a joke mate we don't need this kind of attitude
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Thanks bud.
you know a story is going to be a great read when the first word of the first chapter is FUCK!
Ah yes the Rainbow Crash beginning strikes again.
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The names dash rainbow dash
Not going to lie up until him getting to Equestria I had no idea what was going on it was like trying to read a story written in Ebonics hell I didn't even know what time frame he was in.
Twas a very enjoyable read, despite me not understanding most terms at first. I believe I've seen this story before a long time ago. Very few grammatical errors, odd ones at that, male characters being referred to as 'Her' on the odd occasion but the interactions between them are fantastic.
Tahn outta Tahn.
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Going through old comments and with the added context of some experience, this makes a lot more sense than it did at the time lmao. I've noticed that most English speakers, whether native or not, don't know much of the difference between chav/yorkshire heavy slang and American black slang. The thing is that chavs and ghetto folk sound completely different verbally, but it's pretty hard to parse it out in text.
Wasn't until I made a comment on a meme about chavs and had someone try and say that it was 'ebonics' that the gears clicked in place and turned a bit lmao
Edit: Found the meme cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/511924696124489730/766741329429528596/this_qi98pb.jpg
...Blood group chimerism isn't some super rare path to human evolution, nor does it even make sense for it to be. Heck, people have developed blood group chimerism after simply having organ transplants done, not to mention all the ways we've found out you can naturally have it, like through the interaction between two different blood types during a pregnancy between the mother and fetus. Now if you came back to me and said his DNA showed as having the alleles required to have both AB and O- blood naturally somehow (which is pretty much impossible because the alleles for type O blood is recessive while both A and B alleles aren't) rather than just testing back as having both AB and O- blood in his body, then we can talk about him being super valuable to shady mad scientists.